Leader of the Elf Era

"I have traveled through time?" "Wait, orphan, poverty, and no fear, is this the protagonist's template?" "Okay, it's been a month, and I haven't waited for Goldfinger. It seems that I have thought too much. There is no protagonist template, I am just a salted fish." Gengar flipped through his trainer's autobiography, silently rolled his eyes when he saw this sentence, carefully put the book away, and looked at the tombstone under him with some nostalgia, the tomb of the elf leader Jiang Han. Two hundred years, only myself is left...

I feel like this book is a bit biased. This is an elf novel. As a reader, what I want to see is the interaction, growth and emotion between the protagonist and the elf, and between the elf and the elf, rather than the political and economic confrontation between people and families. There is a problem with the distribution of plot proportions in this book, which results in a poor reading experience for readers, and the results are naturally not good. This is still a "novice village" in its infancy. Going global in the future, I am afraid that the weight imbalance will be more serious. If I don't change my writing thinking, I will probably be in trouble. The above opinions after reading only represent my personal opinion. If the author thinks it makes sense, he will find a way to change it. If it doesn't make sense, he can ignore it and delete the post. That's it.

The elven writing does not write about cultivation, training and fighting, but writes about a bunch of internal fighting which becomes more and more boring.

You see, in the academy stream, you can cultivate friendships between Pokémon and classmates, campus competitions, national competitions, world competitions, and outing experiences. There are a lot of things you can write about. In fact, if this book doesn't have so many families or backgrounds, the results will definitely be very good. Come on, author.

The treasure has been collected, please return for a visit~

The writing is okay. Why is it so confusing?

I feel good, better than most PM posts in the world

Sign the contract early, don't be a eunuch, work hard.

TJ again? Many books on my bookshelf are cluttered. What happened recently? Several newly opened books are cluttered. . .

Well... Give the author some advice. In fact, it might be better if you rewrite a Pokémon novel. You don't have to follow the old-fashioned way of traveling. It would be good to go directly to the academy. It would be great to add the feeling of going to college with Pokémon. In the middle, it would be great to compete in the ** team or occasionally go to the wild to experience during the summer. There are not so many families. It is not complicated and readers will not get tired of it.