The NPC Goddess Apocalypse

First of all, I wanted to transform myself, but I didn't expect that there was a miracle of survival! The first three chapters are a little bit toxic, after all, most people don't like abusers, but I always feel like there's something deceitful about it. The story behind it is okay, and I can see the author growing up a little bit. But I still have to complain, firstly, there are too many flaws in the front; secondly, the experience is too explosive; thirdly, the update is too slow, will it be updated every day or is it just an individual? Overall, good luck to you, author! Three hundred thousand words is the starting point, all of them are booked.

It doesn't matter if the protagonist is a male, but if the protagonist is a female, I read the book as my wife and daughter. It hurts me if you abuse me like this. Not to mention this is a transformation novel. When I clicked on the book Dark Summoner, I realized that I was a pervert.

No one watched😢😢😢crying

I have been chasing books for a while, and now I have such a magical number as 234. It is fun to come out again and introduce this book to new friends (funny) If you like any of the following factors, please stick to it 1. Conspiracy theory (the atmosphere is not very heavy 2333) 2. Supporting protagonist 3. A game that is so real that it teases players 4. Soft science fiction elements 5. The protagonist who is teased by the guide >6. I argued with the author (crossed out) Actually, there are many more, but I can't list them because I read the comments. The most important thing is that I hope you don't be affected by other people's comments when reading the comments and then click on the first chapter. Although there are indeed some things that most people don't like, but what if you are the one-in-a-thousand peerless master😂, so I still hope someone can join me in this chapter to say that the recent chapters have been too deserted 😭

Some book friends said that my data is too explosive I completely copied the data from DNF's experience value. . Because the experience value will play a big role in the future So I have to be so explosive But I admit that sometimes I write hi Forgot to add it hahaha. For example, a book friend reminded me It costs 50W to reach level 25 It only costs 150W from 25 to 30? I admit it was my mistake If I change it again, I always feel emmm (actually I am lazy) So I wrote it later in the article Gong Chenxi can draw 20% of other characters to add her halo The experience gained in Chengzhong It can be regarded as a fool in the past Thank you for your corrections. I will try not to be so arrogant in the following articles I was really wrong Begging for forgiveness

The plot is very straightforward, and it feels like there is no foreshadowing. It suddenly jumps from one point to another. Try to foreshadow a little to avoid jumps in the plot.

Sure enough, it is a daily introduction to poison. The abuser in the opening scene can be tolerated, but you are either ntr or pregnant in the opening scene. I am really embarrassed. You are so abused that even a female video would not dare to write like this. The poison has slipped away.

I think the biggest drawback of this novel is that the protagonist always has unrealistic fantasies. The key is that he has to say that he has tried every means to go back to the game even though he has traveled through time. I wonder why you can't see the real world. If other time-travel novels start to take advantage of the players in the second chapter, the protagonist is always below the line in IQ, just like a fool.

I wanted to see the interaction between the player and the protagonist, and I saw the title of the book and thought it would be interesting, so I came in. But after so many chapters, I can't even see the shadow of the player. This book was originally written quite well (although it is not a true original fantasy, but the author describes the storyline very smoothly and the characters are very three-dimensional), but I came here to read the players, so the article is not on topic, which makes me feel very awkward (~_~;). I think the results will be better if the order of the players' appearance is sped up or the title of the book is simply changed (✪▽✪).

Tell me about your feelings about the first six chapters. The protagonist was imprisoned, beaten, almost pregnant, and had bad luck. It can only be said that it is a pity that the protagonist did not die at the beginning.