Swordsman in the Heavens

Chapter 1: You are going to the battlefield, and you and I use swords. Do you think you can't die quickly enough? You are just a soldier! Going into battle with a sword? ? And you, the golden finger, the mother ring of time and space. Such an awesome being who ruled all the worlds. Although he is injured now, his memory is still there, having ruled so many worlds. What skills and techniques do you need? Goldfinger is now awake. You don't even mention the exercises. 🙂🙂

I would like to give you a suggestion. You can make changes when writing about fan fiction, and you can make major changes, but don't change common sense issues. For example, you can write about Dugu Qiufei's ascension, or you can write that he is still alive, but writing that Dugu Qiufei is Wang Chongyang is a bit poisonous. Wang Chongyang's origin is clear. This is common sense. If you want to change it, you can write about some people who are not in the original work, because it is impossible to describe the entire world in the original work. It is just a world view and the experience of the original protagonist. This world view is common sense. As long as the common sense remains unchanged, you can change it in any way.

At the beginning, I went to practice martial arts while cultivating immortality, and I took poison.

Not to mention other issues, after reading more than 100 chapters, the protagonist was tricked by a military commander. The other party was ready to kill the protagonist if he didn't cooperate. As a result, the protagonist felt a little resentful after being tricked, and then had no idea of ​​revenge. I can't stand such a doormat character.

How should I put it? It was a bit awkward to start writing. No matter what you write is martial arts or fantasy, as long as your background is in ancient times, there is one most important principle. Don't forget it. You can't seek respect if you are humble, and you can't be close if you are alienated! This is very important. In fact, this rule is also applicable in modern times. Who is the protagonist? Even if they are just collateral lines, what are the identities of those people? In fact, if they get into this matter, they won't win. Those few people will hit not the protagonist's face but the Yi family's face. If you don't tell them, they will definitely not win. Even if they do get the protagonist, they will have a good ending. What's more, the Qin State has never been the best in terms of the quality of its soldiers. It cannot be compared with the Wei soldiers. In terms of bows and crossbows, South Korea is also the most powerful, and it suffered a huge defeat against the Chu State. But why Qin was able to unify the world? Because Qin had the strongest mobilization power, even down to each household. It can be said that no other unified dynasty in the future had such grassroots control as Qin. Also, the farming and warfare system established by the Shang Dynasty brought Qin's desire for military glory from the generals down to the soldiers, or to be precise, the desire for wealth, power, and changing their own destiny. Therefore, Qin defeated other countries with total war. In fact, even without the First Emperor, Qin would have unified the world under the next two to three generations of kings. In the Qin State, the legal officials wanted to take care of the people's friendships, and the Qin class system was strictly stipulated in terms of superiority and inferiority. There were very clear regulations on what kind of treatment you could get based on your status, what kind of house you lived in, what kind of clothes you wore, where you could sit when traveling, and what kind of women you had. I don't know how those people can survive with such high IQs in situations like the one in the book. Some people say this is just a novel, a fantasy martial arts and not history, but since you have applied this background, you must pay attention to the Basic Law, right? If there is no reason, just because Qin unified the six countries in history, so in the book Qin has no brains and is strong, this is actually very low-level, it is better to ignore a dynasty.

If you are so weak, if you don't practice well, there will be too many things.

That's enough. The introduction says that you can travel infinitely into these famous movies and novels, and then the author starts various magic modifications. What the hell, a divine eagle modification is beyond recognition... And the whole Wang Chongyang is a lonely man seeking defeat,

Sure enough, pig's feet are too naive! Not to mention ancient times, even modern times still have classes, but they are not as strict as in ancient times! The army is divided into levels! There are rich and poor people in society! It's just a matter of my mind! Equality for all is always the slogan! Huh! People like pig's feet! (Most people probably think so)

I can't stand the divine eagle any longer. The changes are so messy.

I don't know why, but when I see the name of the protagonist, I can't stand it!

In this early stage... If supplies are used as the realm, the first level is naturally the highest. This may be deeply ingrained in the minds of the Chinese people. Historically, officials in dynasties cannot be higher than the ninth rank. If supplies are used to achieve the realm, the first level is naturally the highest. If it is better to use other realms to describe it, the highest level of the ninth rank is neither fish nor fowl.

Brother, your pace is not as slow as usual. A divine eagle wrote more than sixty chapters in three years and returned to the main world. It was just an entry-level product. That's fine. After that, I didn't read a few pictures before it was put on the shelves.

There is no enthusiasm at all! So ordinary, talking and fighting are so ordinary, really ordinary!

In the world of heaven, Chu Zhaonan from the TV series "Seven Swordsmen Down the Mountain" is the worst. In the TV series Seven Swords Under the Tianshan Mountains, in order to consolidate its rule, the Qing court shaved heads and massacred martial arts practitioners everywhere. In order to save the common people in the world, Fu Qingzhu, the executioner of the former dynasty, took Wu Yuanying and Han Zhibang to Tianshan Mountain to ask Zen Master Huiming to let his apprentice go down to Tianshan Mountain to save Wuzhuang. After Fu Qingzhu's efforts, Zen Master Huiming agreed to let his apprentice go down the mountain. Huiming gave seven swords to Fu Qingzhu, Chu Zhaonan, Yang Yuncong, Xin Longzi, Mu Lang, Wu Yuanying, and Han Zhibang to form the Seven Swords of Tianshan. From then on, Chu Zhaonan followed Fu Qingzhu down the Tianshan Mountains to the world of mortals. But since the day Chu Zhaonan left Tianshan, he has been trapped in a cycle that he can never escape from. Trust or betrayal? The swordsmen of the Tianshan Mountains are facing a dangerous world. The traitors in Wuzhuang deceive the Red Spear Society to suspect the swordsmen of the Tianshan Mountains. In order to prove the righteousness of the Seven Swordsmen, Chu Zhaonan pretends to surrender to the military camp alone. The Qing general Dogdo uses Lvzhu to use a beauty trap to kill people and seize the sword. Chu Zhaonan falls in love with Lvzhu, and Lvzhu also falls in love with Chu Zhaonan. However, during the escape, Chu Zhaonan suspected that Lu Zhu had poisoned the water, which dashed Lu Zhu's newly ignited hopes and committed suicide. From then on, Chu Zhaonan began to doubt the justice of the world and his own ideals, and was particularly sensitive to "trust". Later Chu Zhaonan fell in love with Fei Hongjin, the leader of the Huibu rebel army, and offered many sincere suggestions but they were not adopted. Later, he was suspected by Fei Hongjin because of Doggedo's anti-treacherous plot, and his rash and private actions after being suspected deepened others' suspicion of him. Later, Chu Zhaonan failed to fake a surrender and was recognized as a traitor by Fei Hongjin, which wiped out the entire Desert Eagle army. Chu Zhaonan left sadly and went to the south of the Yangtze River alone. Chu Zhaonan pretended to surrender again in order to save his junior brother's wife and kill a Qing general. Unexpectedly, he fell into the enemy's trap and was wrongly accused by his own people. The enemy general Dogdo did not hesitate to force him into a dead end in order to recruit him into his followers, and designed a frame-up to make him unable to turn back, causing him to eventually betray his relatives. In the end, the only junior brother who trusted him, Yang Yuncong, also died. No one in the world trusted Chu Zhaonan anymore. Chu Zhaonan killed Duo Geduo and took the Qinggan Sword back to Tianshan. He met Mu Lang and Yang Yuncong's child. Mu Lang said "Elder brother, what are you going to do? The child is not guilty", which completely defeated Chu Zhaonan. His master no longer trusts him, his brothers no longer trust him, his loved ones no longer trust him, everyone in the world no longer trusts him, and even the Qing court no longer trusts him. Chu Zhaonan left alone and walked away lonely. The saddest thing in the world is this. I don't see the ancients before me, and I don't see the newcomers after me. Thinking of the long journey of heaven and earth, I shed tears with sadness. A peerless swordsman, a peerless sword, a helpless fate in life.

It is not rigorous and cannot withstand scrutiny. A stupid person writes a stupid book

The book you wrote is suitable for you to read by yourself!

It seems boring. The protagonist has little courage and courage. He is timid in doing things and has no forward-thinking ideas to keep making breakthroughs. It all depends on the differences between different worlds. A martial artist travels to a high-level world and becomes more powerful than before. What's the point? Where is the soul of the character?

The writing is too hasty, the pig's feet are too hasty. Exposed too much, the pig's feet have become a magic weapon. There is no technical content at all. Hahaha

We want to read novels because we have read other books and want to read new stories, rather than revisiting the books we have read. Does it make sense if you describe the plots of those old books to me? Why don't I go back and read the original books myself?

The author is a masochist. People who travel through time travel only ask others to listen to them. If they disobey, they will be destroyed. Look at the author who traveled through time and became an emperor in ancient times. What has become of the protagonist? In the first world, wasn't it supposed to unify the country, destroy the enemy, and have everyone listen to themselves? You can let others take their place after leaving.

After reading about a few chapters of this book, it would be unreasonable for me not to jump into it, and I wouldn't feel drawn into it.

After reading the introduction, I removed it. Mixing things together is not my thing.

The plot is too confusing. It feels like there is not a single male protagonist, but multiple lines of development. There are many more supporting characters than the male protagonist.

It's better to just be a eunuch. . .

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 13, and I had no sense of immersion at all. I can't accept three points: First, the characteristics are not clear, and I can't tell where the swordsman is. Second, there are long descriptions of psychological activities, which are always "secret passages" and "secret passages". Third, the descriptions of the characters are always based on the original work. There are too few descriptions related to the protagonist. What should be described in detail should not be detailed and what should be skipped should not be skipped.

Little advice. Writing about many worlds is best without a female protagonist