Playing the Gods of Myth Across the Heavens

I haven't read much, but there are three shortcomings: the first is that the author's writing is not good, the second is that the plot is forced to be awkward, and the third is that the setting is forced to be modified. You can also say that you adapted the setting yourself! The key is that since you are playing that person, but you have changed the setting, are you sure you are playing the role?

Author, if you want to talk about Huajin Danjin later, don't say it is a world without demons with strict rules. The protagonist in modern society will jump out of whatever realm he reaches. Buddhism has awakened supernatural powers and is talking about a world without demons. I doubt that the author will write that all the sects of cultivating immortals have appeared in Dongtian Paradise.

The plot is a bit forced, the realm is a bit problematic, the immortal weapon is a bit weak, isn't it?

The writing is completely inaccurate. While talking about a world without demons, the protagonist jumps around and a lot of cultivators come out.

The snake transforms into a dragon, just like Wong Tai Sin, be like a human being and ask for a title, grant your sister's title. If there were monks in a world without demons, what would they use? Do they use gasoline? There is no logic, the setting is bad, and there are countless poisonous points. There are so many role-playing novels, this is the worst one I have seen.

In Feilu, this theme has been written badly. Even if you just copy it, it won't be so bad. The setting collapses too quickly. The protagonist has just bound to the system, and there is a demon clan attacking the city due to the revival of spiritual energy. Brother, you should give the world some time to adapt. This **** just broke the membrane of the world, and then she got pregnant and gave birth. What nonsense?

If you write it like this, you still play the role of Heaven and Earth? Is the author single-minded, or does he just care about his own pleasure? Farewell

What you wrote is so messed up. Are you acting? You are just wearing a skin. What is acting? Everything you say and do must be close to the character. What you wrote does not make sense.

I have read Chapter 81 now. Is the author forcibly suppressing the protagonist's strength? When I went to kill the monk in more than 20 chapters, the monk was at the peak of Huajin (the author said it was equivalent to the early stage of Xiantian). Is this protagonist's cultivation a joke? Also, When the Danjin from Landuo Temple challenged the protagonist in Chapter 45, he fought so hard. The old monk is at the peak of Danjin, which is equivalent to the innate peak. However, the protagonist has already broken through to the master before, and is not an ordinary master. After all, the protagonist has practiced the Dao Sutra Wheel Sea Scroll, and his strength is as good as that of the master before he breaks through. He will definitely be stronger after breaking through. Also, more than seventy chapters of this Here, a fierce ghost appears at the peak of the wandering soul, and fights to reach the peak of the fierce ghost. This is nothing. Isn't it just a breakthrough before the battle? However, the protagonist's martial arts cultivation at this time is already at the peak of the master, and the cultivation is already at the peak of Guiyuan. Fighting a fierce ghost has lasted five chapters. Every time he fights, the protagonist's enemies are one level lower than the protagonist in strength, and they fight so hard. What is it for? Is it the number of words?

Also, compare the imperial weapons under the Immortal Weapon in Zhetianli. The author, your Immortal Weapon was obviously mixed with 99.999999999999999999999999999% Water during training. You only used a trace of materials to make a shell, let alone the master. The level of the character is low. Even if Ye Fan and Ji Haoyue fight you in the early stage to see if he dares to catch the sleeping Void Mirror with his bare hands, when the protagonist is holding an immortal weapon in his hand, he is actually used by a person with lower energy than himself. If the protagonist in Zhe Zhe Tian is like this, he will be kicked out of the genius sequence.