Playing the Gods of Myth Across the Heavens

I haven't read much, but there are three flaws: first, the author's writing is poor; second, the plot is forced and awkward; and third, the settings are forcibly changed, or rather, the settings are rewritten! The key point is, if you're supposed to be playing that person, but you've changed the established settings, are you sure you're playing...?

Author, if you're going to bring up the Transformation Realm and the Pill Realm later, don't start by saying it's a strictly rule-based, demon-free world. It's like in modern society, when the protagonist reaches a certain level, other beings of that level appear. Even Buddhist monks awaken supernatural powers—what kind of demon-free world are you talking about? I'm starting to wonder if the author will suddenly introduce blessed lands and immortal cultivation sects along the way.

The plot feels a bit forced, the power levels are a bit off, and the immortal artifacts seem a bit weak.

The writing is completely nonsensical; it claims to be a world without magic, but then the protagonist suddenly appears with a whole bunch of cultivators.

The snake transforming into a dragon should be like Wong Tai Sin, begging for a title from people. Title my ass! In a world without magic, what do cultivators use for repairs? Do they use gasoline? It's completely illogical, the premise is terrible, and it's riddled with flaws. Of all the novels with role-playing themes, this is the worst one I've ever read.

On Feilu, this theme has been overused. Even if you just copied it, it wouldn't be this bad. The setting falls apart too quickly. The protagonist just got bound to the system, and then there's a demon siege due to the spiritual energy revival. Dude, at least give the world some time to adjust! It's like it got pregnant and born the moment the world membrane was broken. What kind of nonsense is this?

How can someone portray a character with such flaws and disabilities? Is the author single-minded or just indulging in their own delusions? Goodbye.

What kind of nonsense are you writing? Is that acting? You're just putting on a mask. What does acting even mean? Every word and action should conform to the character. What you're writing is utter rubbish.

We've reached Chapter 81 so far. Is the author forcibly suppressing the protagonist's strength? When they went to kill that monk in the twentieth chapter, the monk was at the peak of the Transformation Realm (the author says it's equivalent to the early stage of the Innate Realm).

Furthermore, comparing this to the imperial weapons below the immortal artifacts in *Covering the Sky*, author, it's obvious that your immortal artifact was 99.99999999999999999999999999% Diluted during its forging. You only used a tiny fraction of the materials to forge a shell.