The Warcraft Cardmaster

If you keep giving up writing every time you get bad grades, no matter how many new books you publish, it will all end up the same way! Because you don't respect your own book, and you stop writing just because of poor grades, who will read it? You've even abandoned your own writing; how can you expect readers to read it?

Could the main character's name be a little more normal? Calling him "Wish" just feels so awkward.