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As I read it, I felt like the book was jumping. I wonder if everyone else feels the same way? The business➕travel written by the author is not well integrated, and the whole book is scattered. Then the protagonist becomes more and more self-confident, and the characters have more and more names (only the name is left, and other personalities and personal characteristics are completely invisible). From these aspects, the creation of the protagonist is also a failure. (They are all reborn, and they still feel childish.) What is very important in a book is the characteristics of the protagonist. Or grand, or chic, or wise, etc.!

This book is well written. If the title were "I Really...", The results would probably be much better. After all, it is a trend.

Good! From the introduction, it looks like the kind of book that has a lot of content.

The writing is pretty good! Give me some support! Come on author!

People in the group asked you, didn't you say you would publish a new book next year? What a surprise when I suddenly saw it

I just noticed now that the author has published a new book. Get in the car quickly and drive quickly.

The protagonist has financial interests and a sexual relationship with his godmother, and lives an extremely high-profile life. He also manages his persona as a "campus" entrepreneurial star and investment genius. It feels like he is seeking death. A huge scandal is on the way. It all depends on when the opponent wants to take action.

I read seventy chapters, and then I watched him finish. I skipped to the finale and watched it, but it was still ambiguous. I was convinced and stopped watching.

I feel bad about my grades. It seems that the popular urban novels nowadays are all kind of low-key protagonists with a strong local flavor. They create an atmosphere in a relatively shallow school environment and are low-end pretentious and have sex. The girls they pick up are also artificially elevated Xiaojiabiyu with extremely traditional women's thinking or farm girls from backward areas. It's sad that the author is serious about looking for information to show his true quality and exquisite life, but few people are willing to read it.

I have read a hundred chapters. Let me talk about the problems I found. First of all, there is too much space about sisters. After all, I don't have a sister and I don't fit in at all. The biggest problem is that the author has been emphasizing that as long as you have enough money, you don't want to start a business, just do VC or something, and then travel around. But they didn't consider what readers wanted to see

He didn't dare to subscribe after writing like this. He was walking on a tightrope every day. The 404 might be too big and he would no longer subscribe. He can write whatever he wants! Now I can only watch the theft, I'm sorry!

What can I say? I have read several of the author's books. The writing is good, but there is no sense of immersion at all. Every chapter is strange to read, and there is a feeling of being outside.

The new book is down! ! ! (Crying)

A typical rebirth urban novel is better than "I Really Didn't Want to Be Reborn". Although there are some unreasonable subplots, at least most of the time the protagonist is smart and mature, which is very consistent with the setting of an adult reborn as a teenager. It does not deviate from the basic social background of the era, and has the flavor of youth. As long as the author lets himself go and writes step by step, I believe it will be more and more recognized by readers. ---Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!!

Tell me whether it's orthopedics or not. That's what I'm here for.

What should I say, the plot direction should not be too distorted. The business part is well written. Don't go in strange directions.

The plot is so watery that I can't watch it anymore.

Why has the new book been lost😅😅

I wanted to keep the new book, but ended up running out of it😔

Since watching "Never Declassified", I have stopped reading rebirth stories. Maybe it's because my sense of moral honor has improved.

I felt like vomiting when I saw it. I was suspected of having an orthopedic problem with my sister, and then I had an affair with my godmother. I also had a bit of that feeling with my godmother, and the business aspect was just average, like a dog licker! It's surprising that this novel has done well.

I've been here, seen it, booked it all, and taken it as a souvenir.

I would like to mention that when WeChat came out in that era, it was a failure that mobile phones did not change to 4G. The traffic is more than 200 per month! I was among the first to use WeChat! I uninstalled all the traffic I used! 2G to 3G era

When I saw the words "Driving in the Fog", I immediately knew that this was a rare and good book! !

The new book is 404, how can I continue to receive art teachings😭

... The author's fans are so miserable... I guess the author's books are no worse than Next Door... Maybe Next Door is more novelistic... And the author is too lazy...

What regret can you make up for without money?

Is the author here? What is the group number of the new group? 🙂🙂

Hello, Jia Wu, since the new book was reported, why hasn't the new book been released yet? Also, I can't find the group number.

Except for the first one, none of the books about driving the fog exceed 1 million words. It's very rare.