Rewriting the Technology Landscape

I specially posted a client comment. First of all, it is very well written, with detailed information and a grand structure. Some of the business battles are relatively high-level, which is very exciting. Rarely good article. But I think the following points can be strengthened. 1. The protagonist is a bit weak and upright, which makes people feel that the sense of substitution is not enough, and the sense of excitement is not enough. For improvement, you can refer to more popular books. It is very refreshing to see and will never be forgotten; 2. Make many friends and few enemies. It is recommended to look at the American people and American politicians and capital separately, and write about the games and interactions with them; look for and use more conflicts between them, such as the Democratic Party and the Republican Party, new money and old money, elites and red necks, etc.; 3. Economy is the basis of diplomacy. For Japan, it was handled right. Later, you can consider letting them tie into the chariot. We must acquire their technology and market, but we must also ensure and strengthen their interests. If we don't have interests to strengthen others, we are not stupid. How can we get on board? Comparisons can be made, such as the small improvement of Japan's economy, the comparison of companies that are on the bus and those that are not, the life and death situation, etc. This is true of other countries, and they all have various contradictions and demands. How to play the game in the middle is very exciting. 4. Tw, hk, including xj, write about these places and how to tie them to the chariot so that they can play a greater role. If you write it well, it will feel a lot better. These are the pain points for everyone. Prevent and strengthen them in advance, which will be very exciting. 5. Recp, RMB internationalization, One Belt and One Road, various companies going overseas, how to cooperate with the national strategy, and not let people be wary, such as never treating allies and collaborators badly, etc., Let everyone have fun together, this is necessary for the rise of a great power 6. Key characters can be portrayed more excitingly, such as Dad Ma, Mr. Ren, Qiao Gang Lord, wait, these people are the spiritual idols of many people, and the situation will be different 7. For some unconfident remarks, you can analyze the internal reasons. Most people are just confused, and you can write more about how to solve them 8. The development and thinking of big and small people, the fate of various characters under the changing times, etc., It will be wonderful to write well.

The novels related to the Internet industry that are worth reading recently, I feel that the author should be a practitioner, full of useful information, and the professional knowledge is rich and reliable, at least in my layman's opinion 🤭 But there are also a few shortcomings... 1. The author is more accustomed to directly throwing out industry analysis or views on the Internet environment in large paragraphs, although it is full of useful information. But readers will still have indigestion after reading it. It would be better to break it up bit by bit and mix it into the plot... 2. The plot of company acquisition and equity transfer and exchange is too childish. It feels like playing house. Today I buy NetEase, tomorrow I buy Sina Sohu, and in a few days I will package and acquire several Taiwanese game companies, and several Japanese and Korean companies will also exchange equity. How can it be that easy! Asset evaluation, reaching an agreement with other shareholders, creditors and executives, then filing with the Industrial and Commercial Bureau, reporting to the industrial and commercial bureau for approval step by step, and employees not making trouble. Any problem in any link will cause trouble for the acquiring company. You can't just follow me, Long Aotian, to buy and buy all the way to make money... In general, it is a book with obvious advantages and disadvantages. It is good at describing scientific research work and understanding the industry I hope the author will write better!

After reading a hundred chapters, I shouldn't comment. But in terms of feelings, I feel that the author wants to talk about everything. But it feels uninteresting. The most important thing is that I didn't feel the excitement or climax. It's really ordinary.

I always feel like the title is not that attractive.

It felt good at first, but when I read Chapter 170, it made me sick to death.

I discovered that in the rebirth novels in Qidian, the protagonists love to fuck Muggles and praise Jack Horse. Is it because Qidian was acquired by Muggles for the sake of final dignity?

It is very well written. I suggest you arrange a right-hand assistant. The persona can be a business elite around 28 years old. His dream is to be able to create a world-wide enterprise with his own hands, so that the protagonist can let go and engage in research and development. A few of the supporting characters can be drawn into the book to give them in-depth characterizations. Come on, I believe this book will be a big hit. I will support it with monthly tickets after it is released.

The author writes very carefully, and many things are very good.

The protagonist is really selfish. Can't you tell the country about your rebirth? Isn't it better to tell the country about the future than to make a small fuss here?

All the people who are reborn still play games. I think such people are trash no matter how many times they are reborn, so I say goodbye.

The author is probably a civil servant, and his words are false and empty. He probably has never even published a script, so the plot he wrote is fake.

I want to say that the Internet is not the same as high technology

I don't know what happens next. I just read the 100th chapter, but I just don't feel comfortable. There are a few things here and there, and a lot of the protagonist's remarks fill a whole chapter. The overall experience feels a bit messy. It feels like the author wants to write everything, but can't write anything well. The intention is very good, there is no g Et is a bit more fun, and generally after the protagonist talks for a long time, the others basically say nothing, and then the matter is settled like this. There is no description of the other party's reaction. The main content is all the protagonist's opinions and explanations to himself. It seems that as long as the protagonist speaks, the conversation will be over.

It can be seen that the author is a person with ideas and ideals. But his writing seems insufficient to support his ideas. The writing is a bit awkward in many places and the overall wording and sentence making are not very good. Generally speaking, the writing style is too immature, not sophisticated and interesting enough, nor elegant and concise enough. The three views expressed by the author in the book are still very good. But when he wrote it, it felt awkward and secondary, which is really a pity. I hope the author can perform better. After all, you are a novelist and an author. How can I do it if my writing is not good? Come on!

Alas, why can't we look at the problem objectively? Returning to one's ancestors is a deep-rooted culture among Chinese people. However, at that time, very few people were willing to return to serve the motherland. It is true that the United States blocked it, but you learned your skills from others. Isn't that normal? Ten or even 15 years ago, how many people tried their best to immigrate to Europe and the United States, and how many wealthy people and eunuchs' children were abroad. Why? You must face up to your own shortcomings, and you must also recognize the strengths of others, learn from each other's strengths, learn from foreigners and learn skills to defeat foreigners, instead of being mindlessly patriotic, and look at problems objectively. The author doesn't know if it's a real angry youth or a deliberately created topic to attract readers, but it's really not advisable.

I just read it, and I saw a comment saying that all employees hold more than 50% of the shares. I looked at Chapter 486 specifically. First, they held more than 30% of the shares, and then when it was not enough, they took out another 20%. It is not enough to take out all the shares. There is nothing wrong with all employees holding shares, but it seems abnormal to hold so much. There is nothing wrong with what the previous comment said. Even old companies such as IBM, Apple, and Microsoft do not do this, nor do they hold so many shares. It is said that it is compared with Huawei. Can it be compared with Huawei? Huawei is a special situation. It was originally going to be sold to Motorola, but later it was not sold and engaged in internal financing. Are there any technology companies in the past few decades that have done this like Huawei?

A boss worth hundreds of millions of dollars is running around the place without a single security guard. In 2000, he would teach you how to behave every second.

In the past, business articles were about bat, e-commerce and social networking, but now they are all about chips, operating systems, and mobile phones. Times have really changed😄

The entire novel is a brainwashing work by the author, and the angry youth is present throughout the text! I don't agree with the author's point of view, but I am also patriotic! Why does the author think the United States bullies us? Blame the enemy blindly! And I think why doesn't the United States bully us? We must strengthen ourselves! Why? Just because we are competitors, or directly enemies, we should strengthen ourselves instead of hoping for mercy from our enemies! Technology is blocked. What is blocked is their technology. Of course they have the power. Why do they let us use it and let us develop it to compete with them for the world's number one position? After all, it is other people's technology, not our technology. Whoever they want can use it. They don't owe us anything. Knowing our shame and then being brave, and working hard to develop and break technology is our only way. It is so naive to blame others for not letting us use their technology!

Although I haven't read it, I personally think it's impossible to lay out the software and hardware because the industrial system is too huge. For example, a photolithography machine is basically a combination of cutting-edge technologies from many countries. If they don't sell you parts, you can only research all the components to the top level. This is almost impossible. Each of these are achievements achieved by people's continuous investment for decades or hundreds of years. To catch up, the investment is too huge, and the output is not much.

I persisted until Chapter 310, I just couldn't stand it anymore! Tell me your feelings, for the author's reference only! 1. The author has a very good intention. He starts from a technical point of view and reorganizes China's technology industry, especially since domestic technology companies have been suppressed recently. Many people should have read it at first, but you talk about how patriotic you are in chapters, you can do everything, and there is no difficulty for you. In a few words, an ERP comes out, a CRM is completed, and a database comparable to ORACLE comes out in a few chapters. Then this reader really doesn't think how difficult this technology is, or is it really a valuable technology? The golden finger is too open 2. By Chapter 310, there are actually some achievements. Games, social networking, and enterprise services have already had a great influence, but I didn't get it at all. Any of them achieved the achievements in the book, but for unicorn companies, the achievements are too mediocre

A few suggestions: First, don't focus on writing emotional dramas. You don't want to be brilliant in this aspect, just don't be toxic. After all, readers come to see technology. Don't let emotional dramas cause readers to lose. Second, you can develop database software and enterprise management software, which is more profitable. It can also be used to support subsequent independent systems, layout and improve the ecology in advance, and increase industry influence. Third, most of the really awesome software companies have their own programming languages. The author can lay out the accumulation in advance and develop Chinese language programming. Talking about the difficulty, it is actually not difficult. It is similar to the instruction set and not difficult. The key is the code base, development environment and hardware environment. The focus is on the code base, but this is really not difficult for Pig's Feet. Pig's Feet is a software powerhouse. The algorithms and programming ideas in Chinese and English are roughly similar, but they are expressed in Chinese. Secondly, the learning cost and learning time are greatly reduced. There are many people. As long as the Pig's Feet company starts and uses it in products (mobile operating systems or other software), and there is demand, at least millions of software engineers will be able to fill up the code base for you in a few years.

I have always felt that the top level of writing about the Internet by rebirths has reached the level of Apple, and it will be difficult to move up. Even if you are a rebirth, some problems cannot be solved by one person or company. They are either national policies or products of the times.

It feels really ordinary. It's right to be patriotic and to develop a strong country. But you are running a business. It's a bit too selfless. I can't stand it.

I can't stand it. It's very daddy. The protagonist likes to preach. He is a PUA employee. He also likes to stand on the moral high ground and always regards himself as a savior.

This book has been released! Among other rebirth novels of the same type, this one is the best in terms of layout and hard-core technology. Not one of them!

The writing is a bit poor, the supervisor outputs too much, the early plot progress is too slow, and I can't stand Baidu, Tencent and Lenovo. The protagonist is a 39-year-old time traveler, but his thinking is very childish.

The narration explains throughout the article, instilling the author's own thoughts into you. Business thinking is basically a mess of simmering in an iron pot. He keeps talking nonsense and has to explain to you how to be correct.

Semiconductors, systems, software, entertainment, hardware, all. Moreover, our country did not join the WTO in 2001-2002, and the talent pool was very limited. In this case, you told me that our talent pool is enough for one company to do these things, and it is still world-class in everything. Be realistic, okay?

It was really uncomfortable to read Chapter 15. The protagonist goes everywhere to reason, and the text is full of the author's self-understanding. Rebirth does not set a goal first and create the first pot of gold, but instead goes around giving lessons, researching other companies, and studying people. How about you wait until you become Dad Ma before educating people? Let nature take its course... He also shouts a slogan every few chapters. I am curious whether the enthusiasm of Fenfen is the author's self-expression or an intentional writing technique? Then I write so many serious things and want to make fun of them, which is so uncomfortable.