Traveling to the Soul-Calling Plane

To be honest, it's better to write about an aboriginal. When writing about time travel, the emphasis is always on being in one's 20s, but in the end, what he does and what he says is not as good as a child of a few years old.

The subject matter is good! What to say about the content. . . Pig's Foot was 21 years old before time travel. How come his mind has declined after time travel? I always say that I have read countless horror movies, and this sentence gives me a headache 😅

Wuyu, you have traveled through time, what is it? I was like a retarded person for so many years in my previous life, and then I couldn't explain anything about Golden Finger, it was inexplicable

I think most people think the front is poisonous. Let me share my thoughts on the second supernatural thing I saw. The description of the orphanage at the beginning, to be honest, I thought it was quite good. The depression of life, coupled with the presence of ghosts, actually created a good atmosphere of horror. As for the criticized issue of the protagonist's adult time travel being impatient with his IQ, I thought about it. As an adult with a sound IQ, if I go to a place with ghosts, I will probably be mostly afraid. The collection of clues may only be at the level of the protagonist. After all, not everyone can calmly analyze and investigate the truth in that kind of environment. Overall, the first copy was relatively successful. The content after that was a bit painful to read. Reporters began to appear. I thought the description was good and thought it was a small foreshadowing. However, later on, I forced science popularization and introduced the concept of unkown, saying that unkown has a host, and then there was a confrontation on the second floor. This long paragraph completely dissipated the previous description of the terrifying atmosphere. From humans versus supernatural beings to humans versus humans, the importance of supernatural beings decreased. In my opinion, it was a bit of a failure. Maybe the author has his own ideas. In the second manor, there is actually something wrong with the dialogue content of several children. The logic and analytical skills they reveal are not possessed by children in their early teens and early teens. If they have this ability, it means that they are more mature mentally and will not bully the protagonist before or make appointments with the manor. Then the second supernatural incident occurs. The protagonist's behavior here is also a bit confusing. As an unknown with increased power, how can he have the confidence to protect himself and Issie from being killed by ghosts? What is the basis for his confidence? From the behavior of the three ghost children when he opened the door later in the story, and the behavior of the ghost father, it turns out that the protagonist actually does not have the ability to protect himself and others. Then the contrast between the protagonist's personality and the performance is very abrupt. If you want to describe an ordinary person struggling to survive in the face of ghosts, the description of the first supernatural event before the confrontation on the last second floor is very good. The subsequent portrayal of the protagonist is, to be honest, a bit of a pity. It feels a bit deliberate. It does not depict confident and calm thinking, and there is no reality of struggling to survive. The cold and stern look of a child of several years old, to be honest... Really deserves a beating. Maybe this is also the reason for the portrayal. After all, some of the behaviors of young murderers in real life and children in horror movies are also very scary. These are some of the advantages and disadvantages I have seen. I hope they can help the author. Finally, I wish the author can write better and better, after all, writing is not easy! 😁

I can't stand it after just one or two. Why is a twenty-one-year-old adult's brain so slow to react? How did he live by himself for three years?

Chapter 489, but the protagonist is still a weakling. If you have no intelligence or strength, you will always be played around by the enemy. So my grades are not good, I don't even have a few comments, and I don't know what the use is of writing it down!

This book has no logic at all and is a complete mess. The author talks about recruiting soldiers in Chapter 46 and says it has nothing to do with their orphanage. The friends will not be eight years old until this year. However, in the next chapter, several friends are going to be soldiers. I suspect that I am reading a fan of Naruto. They go to the army to serve as soldiers at the age of 7. No wonder this book is still half-dead after writing so much.

More than 100 chapters later, he is still a weakling. There is no benefit at all from fighting monsters. He has two pieces of equipment but no experience. The frequency of encountering monsters and the degree of weakness of this protagonist make it strange that he has not died yet.

I just thought I found a good book, but after reading a few chapters I can only say that the author wasted a good subject and idea.

,,,, What the hell is UNKNOWN? Didn't you say time travel to The Conjuring? There seems to be no such concept of UNKNOWN in The Conjuring Universe. Then a reporter there popularized a non-existent thing to you, and said that powerful force can destroy a city. He also said that he saw it from the newspaper. The Conjuring Universe is obviously a world that conforms to human society. The government will not allow newspapers to publish this kind of thing at all. This kind of thing will cause panic. And how can you, a reporter in his teens, have so much scheming? If you lie to him, don't blame him. There is a cold look in his eyes. Also, didn't it say that the protagonist traveled through time in his twenties? Then why is it written like a child, a proper primary school student?

The author wrote the novel as if it were a movie. The difference is that the movie is a movie. The sense of immersion in the movie is that we follow the protagonist's train of thought. Online novels bring us into it. So many novels tend to write more realistic things. It is different for movies. Some inexplicable elements can be added. But like I said in movies, we follow the protagonist's train of thought, so we will not feel inconsistent. However, in novels, those inexplicable elements will be very childish because we bring ourselves into it. Think of yourself as the protagonist and then act. For example, in a slasher movie, the protagonist will never close the door properly. In the movie, we will only be anxious, but in online novels, this kind of behavior is mentally retarded.

In such a dangerous world, the protagonist is an adult, but I feel that this character is too unreliable. Imagine how an adult would feel if he really traveled to such a dangerous world? I think there are only two kinds, one is to be a snail and shrink into a shell, and the other is to become the strongest predator. It is simply unimaginable that an adult, in a world where there are wolves before and tigers behind, can live a quiet, happy-go-lucky life like the protagonist. If I run into this kind of world, either others will drive me crazy, or I will drive others crazy. There is no third option.

New author? It feels like the writing is a bit nonsensical. The thinking of adults seems to have been deliberately lowered here. I can still see the Barren Grass Manor in the first copy, but it feels like it is not good.

Author, you can write a trashy protagonist in this era. Do you want to go back 10 years in time? Those great writers who write good-for-nothing protagonists can have plots and writing to back them up. What do you have?

The author should go to ** to read it. Where there are many primary school students, they may praise this novel. There are no basic power systems and props, and the protagonist's IQ has not increased or matured. Write a series of online articles? The background theme is good

We were talking about The Conjuring. I read almost 50 chapters and didn't even look at the pig's feet. I knew this was the Conjuring universe. I'm so tired.

Abuse of the main story, the protagonist is very curious and loves to die, and then starts to be afraid when something happens. In addition, there are several pig teammates around him who are constantly looking for trouble, and the protagonist is very weak

After watching it for a long time, I finally thought of the question, why do I feel more tired as I go to the back? First, this is an imaginary world, so at least there is no IP that can interest everyone, such as The Conjuring, I believe many people have never seen it The second is that there is no main line. The protagonist has a little cheat, but never develops it, and then he really encounters problems, so it feels useless at all, but the probability of encountering something is quite high. In this case, you can either hide away or train yourself. As a person who is in his 20s at heart, he should understand this Thirdly, when writing about daily life, there is no such warm feeling. As the saying goes, why do horror novels nowadays tend to have a bit of a sandbox flavor? Just to give everyone a little bit of relaxation in the midst of their nervousness. I feel tired after watching it all the time, especially since so much time has not brought any reflection and progress to the protagonist. The various events you encounter are terrifying! In fact, the atmosphere of horror is not very strong. When writing horror novels now, one must either escape or fight. It should be to think hard in the gaps of terror and find patterns to escape. However, every time it seems that the protagonist has done nothing and just ran over to read a story. The author may have thought a lot in his mind, but the written words bring a sense of imagery that is not very strong. l, I just saw the circus incident, where I met the little bear, and then a new character Annie came, but there was no fluctuation in my heart, because it did not touch on the development of anything, or the psychology of the protagonist. There should be many kinds and changes, but I felt that the protagonist was already addicted to this kind of life as a seven-year-old child. I hope there will be changes in the later chapters. If the author hadn't written better and wrote in the horror genre, I wouldn't have been able to watch it for so long. Come on!

It has nothing to do with the Conjuring universe.

I don't quite understand, why do you want to create an imaginary world? It would be much better to directly use European and American backgrounds. European and American horror films are best for exaggerating the horror atmosphere without making the protagonist too desperate. The dead people will not make people feel uncomfortable. Really, in European and American horror films, you will not feel cruel or anything when multiple people die. It feels like the evil spirit is the protagonist.

Why are my grades so poor after writing so much?

After the first plot, the protagonist's personality changed too quickly. The flow of the plot is mediocre, each one is weird too fast, and there is no transition in between.

The protagonist is an autistic person who likes horror movies, but is afraid of seeing ghosts. Once there is a ghost incident somewhere, the protagonist will be the first to rush in and seek death.

By the way, are there any novels about the spiritual plane? I really like James Wan's universe

Should it be multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist? I like multiple female protagonists after all.

Is there Annabell 3? I like Judy in it.

Why don't you write world famous books?

The subject matter is good, but the structure is not good. Sometimes writing a book is like playing a stand-alone game, story background, main line, supporting characters, monsters, upgrades, and skills! Come on, author, the games Tomb Raider and The Last of Us 1 are good examples, with plots and characters! Come on

I was still a college student when I first read it, and now I have graduated. It's really emotional to click on this book again. After I upgrade my level to Deacon, I should say goodbye to this book I wish you and me good luck.

Is The Conjuring a Conjuring movie?