The Fierce Hero

I have been following this book. Because the results were average, I did not vote for other books. It is a pity that the writing is really good. I hope the author can stick to it. Except for the fighting scenes that need to be strengthened, everything else is in line with my taste. I am very picky in reading books.

Hundreds of Towers and Ten Thousand Rewards Happy New Year everyone

Can you stop using the sword? 95% Of the cases are either swords or knives.

The fairy grass in the front and the various female supporting characters in the back are just dragging the word count and have no impression at all. Deleting them all will not affect the plot. What the hell is the forced **feminism?

He acts like a piece of trash, worse than a collateral disciple of the family, it's disturbing to watch

I didn't want to leave a comment at first, but now that I've written it I'll say it. Author, the front of your book is too watery and not very attractive. Another work of the same type that I read has not been updated, so I read your book to kill time. I'll go check out the pirated version as soon as it's on the shelves! Unexpectedly, after it was published, the writing got better and better, so I came back to read the original version! I didn't want to re-subscribe after reading it before, so I rewarded it a little bit. Let me explain this. Also, are you talking about me with your 'dream WM'? ? ? …

The atmosphere and Goldfinger's descriptions in the early stage have a gloomy feel. I expect to see the protagonist level up quickly and defeat the weird ones. The pace is fast at the beginning. Unfortunately, after catching the woman, the pace suddenly became too slow. Here we start hitting here and there, with the protagonist spinning around like a headless fly. I promised to go to the private sector to collect the exercises and fuse them, but I didn't see any of them. Then I gave a very far-fetched reason to fuse the exercises. It's not impossible to accept it here. But since then I have been writing about all kinds of daily trivial matters, (the key is that the portrayal of the two women is not pleasing) and their daily interactions are annoying. The protagonist doesn't fight monsters to improve his strength. The pace suddenly becomes so slow that I can't get used to it. I placed an initial subscription, but gave up after seeing chapter 69.

The content is good, but the emotional scenes are as disgusting as shit

Write slowly. As long as you don't supervise me, I will keep reading.

The quality is good. The most important thing is to keep updating every day. If you don't vote for the monthly recommendation vote, who will you vote for?