Leisurely Time Travel

Blue Cat Naughty 30 Million is a popular science animation, and there are only three minutes of popular science content in the ten-minute film. The same goes for your novel, especially recently it has become more and more obvious. There are not many plots that advance the plot in a chapter of the novel, but data, information, and personal feelings take up a lot of space. Once or twice is okay, but this time you have done it too many times.

I listened to it and didn't know which chapter it was. The protagonist had a conversation with his father Protagonist: My family's so-and-so Father: My family's so-and-so Embarrassing cancer has spread. Our family or our family is fine. There is also a paragraph about building a house With the help of several grandpas and uncles, the house was built quickly How many grandpas do you have? After reading the book for several years, I couldn't help but comment for the first time. I handed it to you for the first time. I don't know the format well. In the past, I either deleted it or continued to read it.

Saga Valve, modern capital. In a world of cannibalism, simply surviving is a miracle

When I saw that the heroine was this unruly princess, I basically gave up on her. . . It's boring... In ancient times, there were many people who were more beautiful and gentler than the princess. Just imagine if you were the male protagonist, who would you choose?

I have followed you for two books, what will happen to this one?

Finally the eunuch 🤭

It's not refreshing, it's all poison! You can't even watch it without thinking! If you have to go beyond productivity to make experimental inventions, that's fine, but please consider the social environment at that time, that is, production relations. The readers of this year have all evolved and still use the same routines as 10 years ago. Speechless!

How dare the protagonist, an ancient militia of several hundred people, say to a regular army of a thousand people that I am not afraid of a battle? Are you going to heaven?

What the hell, what the hell is this? People who eat beans for food regard them as gods who can grow bean sprouts. How dare they be any more retarded? An old farmer who had just finished his meal used the 12 taels of silver that his son had exchanged for his life in the war to prepare a banquet for the guests! There are still some folks thinking, "I just got 12 taels of silver, so the banquet will definitely be good." Why don't you go to heaven? What else do you recommend for such a book with a broken plot

Jin, didn't it exist in ancient times? Don't bully me for not reading the book well

After reading a few pictures, let me share my feelings. The characters in the book speak and describe in a way that is not down-to-earth. They don't have the down-to-earth feeling of ancient rural areas at all. Instead, they talk like modern people and rich people in ancient times. It's too vain.

I read Chapter 63 and felt bad. The name of the book is Leisurely Time Travel, and for the convenience of writing (it is difficult to memorize the history and culture of each stage), it is placed in an imaginary historical environment. The imaginary historical background is not well displayed, which makes me have no sense of resonance, and the storyline feels like watering down. The protagonist's struggle? Didn't feel it. And the protagonist is anything but laid-back! ! ! I'm wondering what the main plot of this book is? Not everyone can write historical articles

Lots of bugs, no fun

The title of the book means that those who are leisurely must be busy with their legs upside down. This is called the Law of Leisure.

With all due respect, author, you should read some books on history and some economics. You will make a lot of improvements. You should be a pure liberal arts student, and some parts feel too immature. For example, except for the protagonist, everyone is too mentally retarded. Take soap making as an example. At first, you will not attract attention when you buy lard, but as you increase the production intensity, it will cost tens of thousands of dollars. You will definitely If you buy a large number of pigs, someone with some influence will notice it, and someone will check it out soon. Also, because you buy in large quantities, someone can raise the price, and your costs will soon increase. It can be said that the current logic in this aspect is too immature. I suggest that after you finish this book, you can improve the logic in the next novel, so that people who read the novel will not be too embarrassed.

The author of the hexagram is Brother Yi Shui. From now on, you won't have to buy water for bathing in your life.

The author has been a eunuch for many years. The eunuch represents Qidian, and the author who published this book must be an eunuch.

Poison Ji Test is extremely poisonous, it is so spicy that it insults people's IQ. Basically, I am the protagonist, who should I be afraid of? It has its own aura of reducing intelligence.

The author must be from Wuhan, he was imprisoned, or unfortunately passed away

It's too watery, so I won't give you any recommendation votes today.

It's an old-fashioned novel, the person who invented this and that invented it, copied poems to show off, all the pretty girls like the protagonist, the supporting characters and enemies are all idiots, it's a brainless yy novel.

There are almost 200 chapters, but it hasn't been released yet, which is rare! When it comes to putting a work on the shelves, does the author have to put it up if he wants to, or does he have to listen to the editor?