My Name Is Nalan Ye

Let's put it this way, this is the first time I've read a first-person novel since I read it online. This book is really rare. The first time I read a first-person novel, I didn't feel like I couldn't stand it. The author's writing is very interesting, and I personally like it very much. And now many fanfics make me feel sick to my stomach. Either the plot is awkward and I can't understand the plot, or they are written in random ways. The whole article is very embarrassing. . . . Fan fiction is a niche, and first-person fan fiction is only a niche within a niche. I hope the author can stick to it.

I like the author's book very much. Thank you for your hard work and dedication. Your thinking is obviously on a higher level than many of my colleagues. It deserves to be from Zhihu. However, it is recommended that the author try to use less mechanical magic like Qinglin and more use of cleverness and even coincidence (if you really can't solve it, don't design such a difficult problem). In addition, the character of the protagonist in recent plots has become more and more annoying. Readers may accept a Wei Xiaobao-like character (who cheats, cheats, is loyal, and has no choice but to walk the high road in the dark), but it is difficult to accept a stupid and bad protagonist (who has no temper after being sold, and turns around to steal from his savior; he obviously wanted to kill the whole family to get a seat at the auction. This seems to have an inconsistent character, no character growth, and cannot even be explained by the desire to bully the weak and fear the strong for profit). Obviously, this character's philistine accumulation and inflated punishments were fine until Cai Lin betrayed him. Why was everything in chaos after being released from prison? How did the protagonist, who was originally so unkind, realize humanity? After experiencing it, did you help the people or do charity? How come you become more and more mean-spirited in your dealings with others after experiencing this? Is the protagonist more ruthless? More philistine? More cautious? Or is it more benevolent? Why do you keep swinging from side to side? I've been reading the book until now and I can't even figure out what the main character's character is. To put it bluntly, the original work portrays the protagonist better: a sharp-edged 213-year-old becomes more and more mature as his strength grows. Even if his growth is limited, at least he is consistent and realistic.

Xiao Yezi has reached the level of a country thief, and the next arrangement will test the author's skills. What I pay more attention to is the psychological and behavioral changes of the protagonist and the impact on the people around him. As a time traveler, what does he want? Come on, author!

It's well written, not a mindless piece of writing, it's very deep, but unfortunately, it's too depressing. I already have a depressing life every day, and now I have to be ruined by you again... Recommended for those who are in a book shortage, and for old bookworms! Xiaobai Wudi Wen Shuang Wen lovers please leave voluntarily.

It is indeed the work of the all-powerful Zhihu netizen, the writing is just different! You need to be resourceful and resourceful. The protagonist has a clear self-positioning and a good personality. Although he has no talent, he has the courage and strategy to change his fate as cannon fodder through acquired efforts.

Almost all the first-person stories I have read are classics, Tomb Raiders, Ruo Zhai, etc. It would be a pity if they were abandoned just because of the first-person story.

Licking the nb that Medusa licked could kill her but not killing her. Raising a tiger could not turn her into an anti-dog. Her body was cut in half, her soul was pulled out, and she was engraved with a soul mark. In the end, Medusa failed to survive the tribulation and turned into a small snake. She continued to lick, wc. She was really a master of dog licking and masochism.

I can't bear to look directly at it. I know clearly that there are tigers in the mountains, but I prefer to travel to the tiger mountains. If you have strength, you are awesome, but if you don't have strength...

I saw a lot of people saying that the protagonist is not kind and so on. Let me say this: First, he was originally a supporting character who traveled through the past, and he was not Xiao Yan. Second, who stipulates that the protagonist must seek justice? Moral kidnapping? Third, it is not normal for people to be punished if they don't do it for themselves. Fourth, I am really not used to the first person.

Coming from Zhihu I feel that except for the part where I went to fight World of Warcraft with Yun Yun, everything else is written very smoothly. As a modern person, when a monster that is much stronger than yourself is right outside the door, would you really take the initiative to kill the little monster? It's as ridiculous as someone restraining Wang Scong and asking you to steal money, but you ended up killing his girlfriend. Later, a city was implicated, with numerous casualties and injuries, and it was quite uncomfortable to watch. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist played too many online games in his previous life and feels that his life can be repeated infinitely.

Personally, I don't like the first person version very much. I gave up on it when I saw it.

I came from Zhihu, and when I saw the latest chapter, the author opened a separate chapter, talking about the current situation of the book and future plans, and specifically mentioned the combat power system Let me start with my suggestion. The author reorganized and planned the original combat power system based on his own understanding. I think it is a very correct and necessary choice, but the original combat power planning has been drastically modified. Minus, I think it's a bit too risky In fantasy novels, fighting monsters and upgrading are a very important line. In many novels, it is even directly a main line. Countless plots need to be connected and promoted by it, so the combat power system must be good, otherwise the combat power will collapse in the later period and the plot will have flaws, especially in long online novels with millions of words. Those who can control this in such a long battle line are really masters. Looking at the starting point, one hand can count the number of people who can achieve relative perfection The author said that Dou Po Cang Qiong's combat power is not well done. I completely agree. Dou Po Cang Qiong's combat power planning is obviously not done well. With the development of the plot, there is an obvious disconnect between combat power and plot requirements, and we have to rely on The protagonist is forced to cheat and level up to make up for the shortcomings, which directly causes the high combat power to begin to depreciate rapidly, making the subsequent plot unable to advance. Tiancan Tudou's response method is the same as the author of most fantasy novels, which is to open a new map. If this is an online game, then there is no problem in opening a new map to lift the level restriction, but this is a book Novels that use such simple and crude methods will look particularly ugly. I have always thought that authors who use such simple and crude methods in the combat power system are either low in ability or have no intention of using their brains to operate the assembly line. Combat power collapse is now a very common problem. The reasons are nothing more than two points. The first point is the author's lack of ability. The second point is, The development of the work exceeds the author's expectations. A typical example is Naruto. AB's ability is obvious to all, but even so, it still leaves countless pitfalls in Naruto Nowadays, the so-called outlines of many authors are really just "outlines". In my opinion, they are simply dispensable. After writing, I will throw away the outline and completely let myself go. Even after the work becomes popular, temporary additions will become difficult to reconcile. This is also a common problem of many online authors. After all, the purpose of writing books is to make money at a very fast pace. Once the work becomes popular, it will be eunuch and change to the next book, or even directly change the account. And if one of the books becomes popular, then the book will be continuously expanded. In this case, such a combat power system requires careful attention. It would be strange if something carefully planned does not collapse I think it is very necessary for the author to reorganize and plan the combat power system of the original Battle of the Sky, but this is a fanfic after all. Directly deleting the combat power level in the original work is almost equivalent to overthrowing the combat power level system of the original work. In this case, it cannot be regarded as a fanfic

When I saw you talking about changing the Dou Sheng, I couldn't continue reading. You think well. But if you do this, the plot will have changed a long time ago. It shouldn't be like fighting against the sky. Many places are still the same. You are not Xiao Yan. Another protagonist. The development looks no different from Doupo

After reading about 600 chapters, I found it okay at the beginning, but then the plot started to get worse, and the characterization started to falter, and it became a matter of what you look at, and how you started fighting. The villain's words were still the same that made people want to vomit. The plot that was set up in the first few chapters started to contradict itself later. I can only say that it is a pity.

Coming from Zhihu, I really can't stand the first person.

The writing is very enjoyable and the writing style is very natural. Don't change the title of the book. Let Nalan Ye be more independent. The linkage with Xiao Yan is the icing on the cake and not the main course. Also, hurry up and write the Little Medical Fairy for me! ! ! ! I want to watch Xiao Meier's love triangle! ! ! ! ! ! !

If you say you can't stand licking Xiao Yan, come in and see what my analysis is like You all say that watching the protagonist lick Xiao Yan is too disgusting, and that the author's writing is not good, but I want to know what would you do if you were a cannon fodder with ordinary qualifications but open eyesight and traveled through time? Kill Xiao Yan? Let's not talk about whether he can kill or not. Even if he does kill, wouldn't it be useless to open his eyes? Or are you at odds with him? Anyway, my first reaction was that building a good relationship would be beneficial in the future. This is human nature. Also, now that the author has begun to write a plot in which the protagonist is shaken by the matter of licking Xiao Yan, he is obviously aware of this matter. Why are you so anxious? . .

What great suggestions in the comments? The title of the book "Rebirth of the Fighting Emperor Is My Brother-in-Law" is so eye-catching.

Come on, author! I quite like the character of the protagonist. Sometimes he can be a little arrogant and lazy, but the most important thing is to know how to introspect. Just like us ordinary people, we grow up slowly through experience. If it is like Shuangwen, who is calm and calm from the beginning and has a strong will, it really doesn't make sense. Reading your book makes me relive Dou Po again, and experience it from a new perspective. I really look forward to you being able to depict a different Dou Po. Never be a eunuch! Take good care of you

It seems that the author himself is an author with a relatively high level of education. When he drops his book bag, it is well integrated with the plot itself, not embarrassing, and very natural. Then, as for the characters' motivations and psychology, these descriptions are very accurate and worthy of praise. However, I feel that the author's writing is a bit scattered, and there is room for improvement in his grasp of the rhythm of the plot. And I feel that the author has a certain understanding of history. Perhaps because of this, the article is more realistic - for example, the Nalan family's killing of Medusa involved crossbows and military formations. To be honest, although these things are realistic, readers may prefer to watch one-on-one plots-after all, even the Romance of the Three Kingdoms is written this way. Also, Nalan Ye always reveals his true feelings. In fact, according to the standards of ordinary cool novels, no one cares too much about whether the protagonist is heroic or not. Support the author. If the above writing methods are used well, the author will definitely be able to write a popular original work with a novel style in the future.

As the title states, everything I wrote is correct no matter how I look at it, so after I proofread it, typos still inevitably appeared in the book, which affected the reader's reading experience. Therefore, hereby set up a correction building to remind me to correct typos. There are various types in this building: which chapter + which word in which sentence is wrong, and what should be the correct word. Finally, I would like to thank every book friend for correcting me! After I see it, I will definitely modify it in time.

I've given you four recommendation votes. I wonder if I can add some more?

The first person is not popular. Eighty or ninety percent of Qidian readers don't like the first person. That basically means that you have given up on 80 or 90% of the readers. You have to grasp the remaining first-person readers and let them stay, then collect them, and finally subscribe. How confident is the author🤔🤔🤔

What I wrote above is really good, starting with my emotion that even if I can't become the master of the big world like Xiaoyan, I still have to work hard to become a strong man in the Jia Ma Empire. Just when I thought the protagonist would be able to fight steadily, the protagonist entered the lair of the Amethyst Winged Lion King and killed the little lion, causing the Lion King to become furious. This resulted in the death of a large number of innocent people in a city. The protagonist is still lamenting that someone will take advantage of the situation and rob him? Couldn't you have brought this here? Aren't you supposed to be the culprit? While everyone is desperately resisting the Amethyst Winged Lion King, the protagonist sees that the general still has the thought of "if you don't give me everything, you will die." This is outrageous. This is not a matter of whether the three views are upright or not. It is purely insane and disgusting. Besides, in your fantasy world, why does the protagonist want a 30-year-old general who is still a great fighting master? I've been holding on from the front. Is it true? It's really disgusting. It's been a long time since I've seen such a disgusting novel. The author's occasional flashes of inspiration and occasional sublimation of topics are like looking for food in shit for readers. No matter what is written later, I can't stand it anymore.

One monthly pass and 5 recommendation votes. Can I add more?

Coming from Zhihu, I think this book title is really terrible. If I were just a stranger and saw this title, I would definitely not be interested in reading it.

They are both third brothers, Tang San values ​​love and righteousness, but Xiao Yan forgets his own righteousness. As the protagonist, he licks a person like Xiao Yan. After reading the original work, I feel like hehe. I have no objection to licking Tang San. After all, Tang San still cares about his companions. Is this what Xiao Yan does? When I saw Bodhi Seed, I knew that the protagonist, as cannon fodder, deserved to be sold, and deserved to be killed into a soul body by Medusa. In a world where strength is respected, relying on power and resourcefulness is too much. I might as well just let the Lord of Heavenly Fire take away his body and finish his life. It is really eye-catching.

Hey, some parts are not very well written. I liked it from the beginning, or I liked it a lot, but until Chapter 31 when I killed the little lion king, hey, the lion king obviously killed it himself, but he wanted to introduce disaster to innocent people, and then ran away by himself, hey, I don't ask the protagonist to be the Holy Mother, but don't harm innocent people. The key is that he also lamented that no matter where you are, there will be people who take advantage of the chaos. I was really speechless when I saw this. You caused the disaster, and you still lamented others, hey. To be honest. Your outlook on life is a bit broken, if you just run away. I don't have anything to say if I'd rather let the world down. I just think the protagonist is a bit ruthless, but he's completely annoying at the same time. Later, I saw that the city lord was somewhat capable of fighting, so he said again, "I will kill this fierce general if I can't hold him back." What is this? Others are fighting for you, are you thinking about this? I'm really speechless. It's clearly written very well before. Although the protagonist has no cheats, he has a good heart and always thinks about the Little Medical Fairy. Although he wants to take advantage of her, he still gives all the benefits to the Little Medical Fairy. Then he can realize that he has no talent and no cheats, so he cannot be the best in the universe. Just be the first on earth. I feel like this, just take it one step at a time. He wants to dominate the world at every turn, which is a bit too ambitious. But now he suddenly becomes super cruel and ruthless, and the protagonist is now so mean to other ordinary passers-by. Doesn't this mean that the protagonist is just pretending? Isn't it just a matter of coveting the little medical fairy's body? Hey, I was in tears even after talking about it. I thought I found a good novel, but I didn't expect that it just started and it collapsed. Hey. I hope I can save it later. I feel really uncomfortable with this kind of outlook all the time

Are there any old readers of Zhihu from 2019 to now?

Loose writing is a common problem among non-expert writers. In short, it means "not writing what readers desperately want to see." For example, fun points such as changing the plot, collecting resources (or growing up), and pretending to fight are often only focused on details and neglected to add these elements. From selling the strange fire until Medusa's resurrection in the dream, the protagonist is given a chance to play. Don't worry about the first person or the third person, just show off and pick up girls, that's all. The key point of a counterattack article is self-restraint. Generally speaking, it is the counterattack of a small character that makes it look good. The protagonist cannot be a wise man, but he needs to have an idea; the protagonist cannot be a strong man, but he can pretend to be cool according to circumstances. The author has now grasped the point of "weakness". Although he is weak, he can make a big difference, which is very enjoyable to watch. But the point of "intelligence" seems to be a little too prominent. The departure of the little doctor fairy shows that the protagonist cannot control everything. The several reversals in the battle to ambush Medusa are also very reasonable. However, after obtaining the strange fire, the protagonist's intelligence is a bit overstated, which is misaligned with his positioning and life experience. Even if an ordinary young man in reality masters the plot of the original work, he will not be left with no clues or be able to criticize Fang Qiu. It will be more likable if the protagonist's emotional intelligence is not reduced and it is not overly emphasized on intelligence and the like. The above are all nonsense. The most important thing is that since Medusa has been appointed as the heroine, let her be. Xiao Mei can't bear this burden. There is no heroine who only blushes and nods or purses her lips every day... Qing Lin is the same. The advantage of doujin is that you don't need to create characters, you can just use them. If you only use those original works to create full-fledged characters, and you have to complete them yourself, then why write a fanfic... It seems that Qing Lin and Xiao Mei are not worthy of the heroine's aura, and Qing Lin is still a possibility (Xiao Mei is probably a vase that cannot be saved), unless the author is willing to give her a long separate highlight, just like Dragon Clan 3... I support adding more drama to Qing Lin, at least help her become the core female supporting role, worthy of her three-flowered pupil who can turn the tide of the battle. But the point is I want to see Medusa salsa salsa... (Echo)