Battle Through the Heavens: I Am Nalan Ye

If you say you can't stand licking Xiao Yan, come in and see what my analysis is like You all say that watching the protagonist lick Xiao Yan is too disgusting, and that the author's writing is not good, but I want to know what would you do if you were a cannon fodder with ordinary qualifications but open eyesight and traveled through time? Kill Xiao Yan? Let's not talk about whether he can kill or not. Even if he does kill, wouldn't it be useless to open his eyes? Or are you at odds with him? Anyway, my first reaction was that building a good relationship would be beneficial in the future. This is human nature. Also, now that the author has begun to write a plot in which the protagonist is shaken by the matter of licking Xiao Yan, he is obviously aware of this matter. Why are you so anxious? . .

What great suggestions in the comments? The title of the book "Rebirth of the Fighting Emperor Is My Brother-in-Law" is so eye-catching.

Come on, author! I quite like the character of the protagonist. Sometimes he can be a little arrogant and lazy, but the most important thing is to know how to introspect. Just like us ordinary people, we grow up slowly through experience. If it is like Shuangwen, who is calm and calm from the beginning and has a strong will, it really doesn't make sense. Reading your book makes me relive Dou Po again, and experience it from a new perspective. I really look forward to you being able to depict a different Dou Po. Never be a eunuch! Take good care of you

It seems that the author himself is an author with a relatively high level of education. When he drops his book bag, it is well integrated with the plot itself, not embarrassing, and very natural. Then, as for the characters' motivations and psychology, these descriptions are very accurate and worthy of praise. However, I feel that the author's writing is a bit scattered, and there is room for improvement in his grasp of the rhythm of the plot. And I feel that the author has a certain understanding of history. Perhaps because of this, the article is more realistic - for example, the Nalan family's killing of Medusa involved crossbows and military formations. To be honest, although these things are realistic, readers may prefer to watch one-on-one plots-after all, even the Romance of the Three Kingdoms is written this way. Also, Nalan Ye always reveals his true feelings. In fact, according to the standards of ordinary cool novels, no one cares too much about whether the protagonist is heroic or not. Support the author. If the above writing methods are used well, the author will definitely be able to write a popular original work with a novel style in the future.

As the title states, everything I wrote is correct no matter how I look at it, so after I proofread it, typos still inevitably appeared in the book, which affected the reader's reading experience. Therefore, hereby set up a correction building to remind me to correct typos. There are various types in this building: which chapter + which word in which sentence is wrong, and what should be the correct word. Finally, I would like to thank every book friend for correcting me! After I see it, I will definitely modify it in time.

I've given you four recommendation votes. I wonder if I can add some more?

The first person is not popular. Eighty or ninety percent of Qidian readers don't like the first person. That basically means that you have given up on 80 or 90% of the readers. You have to grasp the remaining first-person readers and let them stay, then collect them, and finally subscribe. How confident is the author🤔🤔🤔

What I wrote above is really good, starting with my emotion that even if I can't become the master of the big world like Xiaoyan, I still have to work hard to become a strong man in the Jia Ma Empire. Just when I thought the protagonist would be able to fight steadily, the protagonist entered the lair of the Amethyst Winged Lion King and killed the little lion, causing the Lion King to become furious. This resulted in the death of a large number of innocent people in a city. The protagonist is still lamenting that someone will take advantage of the situation and rob him? Couldn't you have brought this here? Aren't you supposed to be the culprit? While everyone is desperately resisting the Amethyst Winged Lion King, the protagonist sees that the general still has the thought of "if you don't give me everything, you will die." This is outrageous. This is not a matter of whether the three views are upright or not. It is purely insane and disgusting. Besides, in your fantasy world, why does the protagonist want a 30-year-old general who is still a great fighting master? I've been holding on from the front. Is it true? It's really disgusting. It's been a long time since I've seen such a disgusting novel. The author's occasional flashes of inspiration and occasional sublimation of topics are like looking for food in shit for readers. No matter what is written later, I can't stand it anymore.

One monthly pass and 5 recommendation votes. Can I add more?

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