Ninja's Journey to Become a Super God

The golden finger was only released in Chapter 9, which means that the first eight cards were all in vain, and the key point was not visible.

🤓Jiangjiang bubbles again, oh ho ho ho

I feel a bit like traveling**

What's the point of writing a little bit about each world? I don't like it… It's not like infinite time travel, where you become the strongest in this world and then leave.

With or without a heroine? But I feel it's best not to have a female protagonist

The protagonist is always deflated. The path of eating deflated frogs (manual funny)

I originally thought it was a book written by a newbie, but I didn't expect it to be a book written by a newbie who has already read several books. I couldn't stand this book after reading the first five chapters. The plot is confusing, the protagonist's personality is not likeable, there is no clear cheat code, and the background is also incomprehensible. I skipped the text and found it hard to swallow. It's very toxic.

Please forgive the author. This is the author's personal experience. The protagonist really only has the IQ of a frog.

Before I delete this book, I want to say, could the author please read his own article? The writing is messy.

This book is a torture book. There are upgrade cheats but the protagonist just doesn't use them. Forcibly suppress the fighting power, go to the fandom world for a while and then leave. Protagonist without direction

It went too far. At first glance, it seemed that the outline was not written well, resulting in no main line. This is a taboo in articles.

It's really poisonous. If you say time travel, just go back in time. Even if you want to time travel a second time, it's not good at character description. You are a croak, not a human being.

Why do you feel like the more you write, the more confusing you become? It's getting harder and harder to understand, and I'm guessing the author won't be able to understand it either.

When the protagonist was caught for experimentation, he didn't even think about resisting. He just wanted to escape. He didn't dare to target people when someone blocked him. To be poisoned to death.

I originally liked the salted fish protagonist, and also liked the protagonist turning into an elf, but with these two joys combined, why do I want to kill the protagonist so much? You can just be a salty fish. If you are stronger, will you die? I couldn't stand it until I got to Sinnoh. It was always: time travel, get caught, escape, travel, get caught, run away, get caught, run away... In your eyes, is salted fish equal to waste? I have also written books where the protagonist's personality is salty, but my protagonist will always defeat those who are not good for him. This makes it comfortable to look at. You let the protagonist shrink and then grow, that's okay. But the constant deflation makes readers feel frustrated.

The plot is a bit confusing... I feel that every chapter is rushed. For example, Zhimi's side traveled through time again at the beginning, and when he went back, he actually went to Sirona's side.

How should I put it? It's very scattered and messy. It seems like I write whatever comes to mind. The feeling given to readers is that they will not take the opportunity to miss a lot. And the time travel is too fast. I don't know how to seize opportunities. I learn a little bit every time I wear something. And what you learn is not very important.

It's better to show off next to Mr. Zhi.

It's too messy, and the dancing is too outrageous. I just want to ask the author what are you writing about?

There is no main plot, the writing is very confusing, and the article does not know the plot after the paragraphs. It keeps traveling through time, being caught for experiments, escaping, and traveling through time, and it keeps looping.

Boring, the plot keeps being tortured, run away, be tortured by another person, run away