Orange Neil

From more than 20 chapters to 74 chapters, I would like to express my feelings fairly and impartially. 1. The author has made great efforts recently and updates more than 4,000 words every day. It is really awesome and the quality is also online. Thinking of the pain of following the article that was only updated a few days ago, I hope I can continue to keep up. Come on. 2. I don't understand football, I never watch football, and I don't really have much interest in football. I came here for the emotional stories and passionate stories about the characters. But I think people who like basketball will like this article. The author is really professional and has done a lot of research. With many descriptions, I feel that only those who understand basketball know how passionate it is. Anyone who has watched basketball strongly recommends this article. Of course, people like me who haven't seen it can also understand it. 3. The relationship between the three male protagonists (let's just call them male protagonists) is quite interesting, and I also like the newly added Eun-soo. In the past two chapters, it is gratifying that Li Kai has finally brought up the emotional light. 4. The problem is that I feel that the distinction between the characters is not enough. The main characters' personality traits are not particularly clear (maybe I am a fast reader and cannot fully understand some of the author's obscure descriptions), and they are all very harmonious. There are no conflicts or differences of opinion. They don't seem to have any shortcomings. I think the characters can be shaped more. 5. Generally speaking, this is a slow-burning, highly professional, realistic but also quite passionate work. There are not many readers yet, but I think there will be more and more people in the future. One additional point: I actually really like Qiyu. Let's give our children more opportunities to play! There are other players on the fan team, please give me some shots! ! The main character is too bright. It is not easy for the author to update. After reading it for so long, I have some say. I will give you the first long comment 🌹

I have read more than 20 chapters. So far, the plot is coherent and not laggy, the writing style is relaxed, and the writing style is also quite good. The description of the basketball part is quite clear, and I, a person who doesn't know much about it, can understand it. However, I feel that many parts of the plot could be expanded a little more, and the story could look fuller with more explanations. Also, can we give the male lead more roles? He is so pitiful, hahahahaha, he is really the second male lead's official son! Generally speaking, it's pretty good, and I look forward to daily updates! Subscribe and make money after it's released hahahaha

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The first three chapters of this article may seem like a warning to quit, but the real reason is that no one has ever seen through the author's love for basketball behind the false pretenses. This work is written from the perspective of an ordinary person, telling an inspirational story about a group of people who love basketball and have the same dream to become a team and fight for it. Although the protagonist does not participate in the main storyline as a basketball player, as the team manager, he is the communication bridge and cohesion of the entire team. Because of this, this work has the regret of being regarded as a bad novel because the interactions between the characters are too close. But if you calm down and read it carefully, it will not be difficult to find the shining point of this work. Regardless of the author's detailed and professional description of the basketball game process, the narrative processing of the bonds between the characters, and even the meticulous logical thinking of the entire work, this work can be called a superior work.

Suddenly I found that the author's writing skills are really good, maybe he is a slow-burn type

Praising Juju, this article will make you unable to pull it out after reading it. It is the most realistic article I have read in the past few years ❤️

'The plot is great, not embarrassing, and the character settings are reasonable, very realistic, and very immersive. ' Same feeling hehehe!

How many chapters are left to finish the villain team? I feel so angry and uncomfortable when I am stuck here. Let Chenchen come on and beat the opponent to death🙁🙁🙁

I have returned home safely to celebrate the New Year. I hope everyone is safe and well in the new year. Updates will be implemented immediately. Guaranteed continuous updates. Tu Xiaorong

The cover and title are very distinctive, and the story is also good

Seeing that there have been several waves of little ** now, I look forward to the follow-up plot.

Look how many book friend circles I have contributed~

Come up and take a look at where it is written 🤔

Friends who have free investment opportunities, don't miss it anymore. This book will be on the shelves around Friday (tomorrow). No more. I'm going to write my acceptance speech.

The bug in Chapter 1-6 has been fixed. Today, well, nothing more.

I'm curious about what Zong Zheng and Li Kai look like, but I can't imagine 😠

There are now icons for character birthdays. Let's give DD a try and then go back and update.

1. The spring in the small town is soaked in rain. It has been raining for half a month, and the clothes have been washed for three to five days and are still half dry. This season is the most unsuitable for nursing wounds. Zongzheng Zhengzong lay lazily on the soft couch with his eyes closed, and the sound of rain outside the window could be heard in his ears. His outer robe was folded neatly and put aside. Looking through the half-open clothes, one could vaguely see the bloody bandage. Zongzheng Zhengzong had been back for some time, and the injuries on his body were from when he was lurking in another sword sect. Duan Fengchen said that he was in a coma for several days after he was brought back, and he almost died. However, Zongzheng Zhengzong didn't take it seriously. He just did what he thought he should do. He was always used to accepting the reality calmly, and then did what he should do. As for the consequences, he swallowed it himself if he could. When Zongzheng Zhengzong was lying in a daze, a familiar figure suddenly appeared in front of his eyes. "You," Zong Zheng Zhengzong looked at the bruises on Li Kai's face and was stunned. "When did you fight with someone?" "Awesome, I not only fought, but also won." Zongzheng Zhengzong glanced at Li Kai who was sitting next to him holding a sword. Today, Li Kai looked like he always did, full of nonsense. But if you look carefully, there is still a difference. Li Kai's eyes always fall on his wounds intentionally or unintentionally. When he sees the wounds, the guilt in his eyes cannot be hidden. "Yes." Zongzheng Zhengzong tilted his head and continued to listen to his close friend talking about the mountains. Looking from Zongzheng Zhengzong's perspective, he could just see Li Kai's smooth chin and his chattering mouth. "You said that you know my strength well after we have known each other for so many years. Didn't you come to me crying when you were bullied when you were a child?" Li Kai was still talking about Zong Zheng's dark history, but his eyes couldn't help but glance at Zong Zheng's wounds, "I told you that if you don't behave well, I will eat the crabs brought by Duan Fengchen by myself. . " "Yes, I forgot." The injured Zongzheng still talked about his crabs, "I will eat the crabs after I am healed. " "That won't work. The crabs belong to me alone. " Zongzheng Zhengzong was not in good spirits after the injury. He didn't hear what Li Kai said clearly, so he fell asleep listening to Li Kai's babble. The sleeping Zongzheng Zhengzong lost his usual alienation from people thousands of miles away. Li Kai reached out and pulled the blanket covering Zongzheng Zhengzong. The honey-colored skin formed a strong contrast with Zongzheng's pale skin, and was embellished with blood-red colors, covering Zongzheng with a layer of fragility. After Zongzheng fell asleep, Li Kai did not disturb him and went out holding his sword. 2. Not long after Li Kai came out of Zongzheng's room, he met Duan Fengchen. I happened to have free time today, so the two of them sat down in the yard and chatted. "How is Zhengzong doing?" "Much better." Li Kai untied the wine gourd from his waist, pulled out the stopper and took a sip of it into his mouth, as if he wanted to use this action to vent his depression. "Your injury is not healed yet." "Don't worry, there is water in it." Li Kai shook the gourd in his hand. No matter how messed up he was, he would still cherish his life. He just felt uncomfortable because of Zong Zheng's matter. Among the Sword Sect, Li Kai and Zongzheng Zhengzong were the first to know each other. They were only five years old when they first met. Li Kai picked up Zongzheng on the street, whose hair style was like a mushroom, and it was also a beautifully packaged mushroom. Li Kai has been active since he was a child. As a result of being crazy in the sun, he was as tanned as sweet potato peels at a young age. Later, sweet potatoes and shiitake mushrooms became good friends. The two were almost inseparable before the age of fifteen. Later, both Li Kai and Zong Zheng obtained honors, but Li Kai had little interest in this aspect. After two years as a minor official, he left. Zongzheng followed the ocean-going ship to Daqin after obtaining the imperial examination. If he had not received the news that Li Kai was going to establish the Sword Sect, it is estimated that Zongzheng would still be floating on the sea. "That boy Zongzheng is still the same, he hasn't changed at all." Thinking of these things, Li Kai felt a little emotional. He wiped the water stains on his lips and shook his head helplessly. Zongzheng didn't have much contact with Li Kai after he left the Sword Sect. What Zongzheng didn't know was that a lot of things happened to the Sword Sect after he left. During that time, Li Kai had a lot of things to say to him, but when he saw Zongzheng again, Zongzheng was lying in the same hospital with him and almost died. Li Kai still remembers that he had a fight with Duan Fengchen at the door of the medical center and told Duan Fengchen that he would not live if Zongzheng died. "Then why did he leave in the first place?" Duan Fengchen was a little confused. Duan Fengchen always felt that Li Kai should know something. The two of them grew up together, and Li Kai must know Zong Zheng best. "He will tell you when the time comes." Li Kai didn't know how to answer this question, but he still chose to believe Zong Zheng. Li Kai always felt that this man had given too much. Zongzheng seemed to be carrying something forward all the time. Some of the burdens on his shoulders were carried by himself, and some were put on by others. That man was like this, silently shouldering the responsibility and doing things silently, without even knowing how to ask for help. 3. After being raised for a while, Zongzheng was able to move, at least the bandages on his body would no longer bleed when he went to the ground. On this day, Li Kai and Duan Fengchen came to see Zongzheng. The courtyard was not very close to Zongzheng's room. It happened to be Zongzheng's rest time, so the two of them thought of making gestures in the courtyard while Zongzheng was sleeping. The movement in the yard also attracted Zongzheng. Zongzheng walked to the front of the yard and saw Li Kai who was practicing swordplay with Duan Fengchen in the yard from a distance. It was said that he was practicing swordplay, but it was actually just a joke. Li Kai was very good at it. Before Duan Fengchen's scabbard was stabbed, Li Kai saw through Duan Fengchen's movements at a glance. He held the scabbard in the direction of the thrust and tapped an acupuncture point behind Duan Fengchen. The force was just right and the movements were completed in one go. "Still need more practice." Zongzheng woke up at some point. He frowned and looked at the two people gesturing in the venue. Speaking of which, Li Kai was injured earlier than him. "The reaction is quite fast." Duan Fengchen grabbed Li Kai's neck and said with a smile. Just as Li Kai was about to say something, he looked up and saw Zong Zheng standing at the door of the yard, looking at him. Li Kai heard Zong Zheng saying to him from a distance, "Come here with me." Seeing that something was wrong with Zong Zheng's expression, Li Kai quickly followed him. "You go back first, I have something to do with Zong Zheng." Li Kai hammered Duan Fengchen on the shoulder with his fist and followed Zong Zheng into the room. "Why did you come out on your own?" Li Kai smelled a smell of medicine as soon as he entered the door, but the smell of the medicine was different from what Zong Zheng usually drank, and he didn't know what it was boiled with. Li Kai was confused for a moment, and stretched out his hand to stop Zongzheng, "I'll do the little things like boiling medicine, or you can leave it to the people in the kitchen." Zongzheng looks like he has tender skin and tender flesh, and there are wounds on his body. If he gets burned later, he will probably have to lie in bed for half a month. "It's not mine, it's your medicine." Zongzheng stared at a cluster of flames on the stove and said, "If I didn't ask, how long would you keep this situation a secret?" Zongzheng asked for the medicine from the doctor. After Zongzheng woke up, he learned about Li Kai from the doctor at the medical clinic. He asked the doctor to grab the medicine according to the prescription and keep a copy for him. "No, I'm really fine." Li Kai looked at the indifferent Zong Zheng and was dumbfounded. In order to prove that he was fine, Li Kai had to take off his clothes on the spot. "If you don't believe it, I'll let you test it now. I'm really fine." "The medical center is only one mile away from here. If you keep talking, I will knock you into the medical center." Whether Zongzheng can beat Li Kai down is not discussed for the time being, but Li Kai really felt Zongzheng's anger. Li Kai rarely saw Zong Zheng angry, so he immediately gave up. "How did you see that I was injured?" Li Kai was a little confused. He obviously concealed it well. "I will tell you after I recover from my injuries." Zongzheng stopped talking after that, and just held the cattail leaf fan in his hand to fan the flames in the small stove from time to time. Li Kai found it interesting when he saw it, so he couldn't help but go to the yard and pick a piece of dogtail grass to tease Zongzheng. From the outside, Zongzheng is definitely a harmless scholar. He is fair and fair, and the lines on his face are not as strong and rough as those who practice martial arts. Every line and curvature is exquisite and just right, but the bridge of his nose is very straight, which looks delicate but not feminine. Especially those eyes, they are so beautiful. "Before I left, I promised you that I would give you a name. Do you remember this?" The naming happened before he left. For a while, Li Kai always said that his name was not good and he had no characters. He kept clamoring to give him a name. When he asked Li Kai what the name was, Li Kai said "Shiitake" to commemorate their first meeting. He even called him Zongzheng Shiitake in a serious way. Zong Zheng didn't remember what happened that day. He only remembered that Li Kai was pushed to the ground and beaten by him to tell him to think seriously. As a result, too many things happened later, so the writing matter was shelved. "Yes, yes, this time it is absolutely reliable." Li Kai smiled and said, "My name is Yun Qing." "Is there any allusion?" Zong Zheng asked. Yunqing is indeed a good word, but it sounds a little weird. "Clouds seem to be very free when they are floating in the sky. You are too restricted in your life. I want you to live for yourself for the rest of your life." Li Kai supported his chin with one hand and shook the dog's tail grass in his hand with the other hand. "How about it, do you think I am also very educated?" Zong Zheng raised his head in surprise. He did not expect that the word Li Kai gave him had this meaning. While Zongzheng was thinking, Li Kai was still boasting. "I told you that I just didn't like reading back then, otherwise I would be the number one scholar today." "But there's nothing I can do about it, practicing swordsmanship is my biggest hobby in this life." "I don't think you like practicing swordsmanship. The one who sells swords is like a sword seller." Li Kai smiled and used the dog's tail grass to scratch Zongzheng, "That's nonsense." Li Kai suddenly recalled the scene when he and Zongzheng were studying in the school many years ago. At that time, Li Kai was a lively and naughty boy. He also likes to drag Zong Zheng to read all kinds of strange books. Zong Zheng has the habit of copying sentences. When he sees a sentence he likes, he will copy it on rice paper and wait until he has a pile before putting it in the box. He had long forgotten what Zongzheng wrote at that time, but he remembered only two lines of poetry. That piece of paper was placed at the bottom of all the rice papers, and it said: You walked as far as the Blue Bridge, and I fell in love with you as soon as you saw Yunying.