I Can Eat My Way to Superpowers

Is the author a newbie?? I've read more than a dozen chapters, and overall it's pretty good, but there are a few places where the plot is really awkward. I feel like the author needs to think carefully about it later.

Very good, why are there so few comments? Tag what you see

When I saw that sister, I gave up the book. What the hell?

As a 15-year old bookworm, I originally thought that creation and innovation should be possible, but making devil clones and small copies felt like a big failure. The more I read, the more boring it became. Forget it, let's go! Bye😴😴

It feels like everyone has a low IQ, and the protagonist and his sister are desperate to die. The protagonist is actually a bad guy, but he always thinks that he has a high IQ.

If the ability is not good enough, if a good level 11 ability is almost killed by various level 5 or 6 sneak attacks, it will be a fish eye. If it is a level 7 or 8, it will be a direct GG.

It was supposed to be a mindless and enjoyable read, but the author had to write some deceptive plots, which made it unenjoyable.

The plot and world view are good, but the writing of fighting and training moves is too poor, and there is no strong character at all. The name of the move must be there, otherwise everyone will be confused and don't know the strength. Hong Kong Manfeng can refer to it and make moves such as Vine Whip's Wanxiang Senluo, Shadow Clone that plays Shadow, Ice's Ice Spear, Ice Blizzard and other moves. However, people can imagine the fighting scene, otherwise there is only the system, saying he is powerful but not feeling it at all.

After reading Chapter 36, I didn't feel any better. The author's portrayal of the protagonist's character and description of the fight scenes made me uncomfortable. It was a bit interesting to see the protagonist upgrade his abilities, but when it came to the fight, people complained: when something was wrong, the enemy launched an attack, and the protagonist was injured before he could react. Angry! Use your ultimate move and the enemy will be sucked into you. If it's just once, it's fine. I've seen more than 30 chapters and every fighting scene has this routine. I feel like I've even taken off my pants. Just show me this 😅. Speaking of the character of the protagonist, I can understand that there must be many shortcomings when ordinary people suddenly get the golden finger. Author, you can describe it. I write about some protagonists who make a fool of themselves because they don't understand the situation, or some ridiculous things, and then let me see the protagonist's little progress, which can also enrich the protagonist's image in the minds of readers, but there is no such thing, there is no progress, the protagonist has always been stupid and bold, and has always been ordinary. As a reader, I put myself into the novel and felt very uncomfortable after imagining myself as the protagonist. I am an ordinary person myself, and I can still feel the feeling of incompetence and rage when reading your novel, which really makes me feel uncomfortable. Author, what you write is so cool! Here are three recommendation votes. I hope the author can improve in the future.

After reading a few chapters, someone killed him outside the city. After the fight, you didn't touch the body and said you didn't want to cause trouble. You killed everyone and you said you didn't want to cause trouble. Then you continued to barbecue. A woman came and asked him if he had seen a swordsman. The protagonist directly said, "I killed him?" You are just looking for something to smoke, this is not allowed to cause trouble, the woman said that is my enemy, thank you, and then wanted to eat barbecue, the protagonist gave it,? Do you believe what the other party says based on the protagonist's setting? Also, when you hid your strength during the hunter assessment at the beginning, and then unscrupulously grilled the freshly killed prey after leaving the city, and said that you were strong enough not to be afraid of attracting other beasts, then why did you hide your strength just now? If you just grilled the meat, someone would definitely expose it and say there was something wrong and cause trouble.