I Am the Leader of the World

Can there be less junk books like this?

Wo prefers the plot of Kang Wanjie, and hopes that the author Jiang will update Ya୧((•̀ꇴ•))૭⁺✧

Give the author some advice. In fact, most of the novels that people read about chat groups come to read about the group members. The focus is on the chat group and the interaction of the people who join the group, which then changes the original novel. It's not advisable to describe too much about the main world, which doesn't mean you can't write about it, but the focus still has to be on the chat room. It's best for the protagonist to just show off in the main world. You wrote too much about the main world before, and it was a bit messy and hard to understand. As a result, many people skipped the main world plot directly, and ended up getting more and more confused. . . The chat group plot written by the author is quite good. In this case, use your strengths. The so-called use strengths and avoid weaknesses, write more chat group plots, and shorten the main world as much as possible.

Chapter 1: Persuading to Retreat and Convince

The combat power is definitely reduced. First of all, the 13-year-old Douzong was suppressed and beaten by the 9-year-old Naruto. 2 Tathagata's combat power is better than Keshadi. You yourself said that each of the 12 states has one-half of the planet and also has mass. This does not mean that the continental world is lower than the cosmic world. , 3 The main world is not clear, the shaping world is not clear, 4 There is deliberate suppression or forcible improvement of character strength, such as the perfect world, such as Zhetian, Feng Baobao, Baziyun, etc. If this book is ranked according to five stars, the highest recommendation coefficient is two stars.

It's a mess, it's confusing, is the protagonist a **? How can anyone cultivate at their own expense? If it's good for you, then it's okay to waste it, but you just spent your cultivation fee in vain for no reason at all? , What is this?

I just thought of something and I feel it is necessary to discuss it with everyone. This book seeks supporting roles from cast members, preferably self-created supporting roles. For example... The following Name: Chacha Gender: Cha Age: Cha Original world: A blind chicken talking about the world. World martial arts level: apprentice, disciple... Supporting role level: disciple. Character: Murderous (especially important) Backstory: Chacha, Chacha, Chacha... (The more detailed, the better. If you can't write it down, just post it in the group. Even tens of thousands of words are not too long for me).

To be honest, I didn't understand what he was talking about at all.

😰 Could it be that my reading level is too low? After reading the first chapter, I feel a little confused. What is it about?

I was totally confused in the first chapter. This change was too fast and I couldn't adapt to it. I was so overwhelmed.

What are you writing about? 😅

It's a bit messy. I can't stand the protagonist's world. I keep jumping to see some story about the group members' world 😥😥😥

This pig's feet really don't have any dignity at all. Lying on the ground and being stepped on by more than a dozen people, you are a weakling from the beginning to the end. I guess your revision will only become more powerful until the end of the book. Until the last chapter, you will probably be a weakling.

My favorite is the three-tailed fox lady 😌 Speaking of Zhu Xian, should I write about it...

By the way, what is this book about? I read three chapters, but I still don't understand it...

After reading the first chapter, is the author kidding himself?

It's quite creative, but I suggest the author sort out his writing ideas, it's a bit messy.

I'm the one who came up with the idea of ​​such a weird character, come on!

Even my cultivation base, Daluo Jinxian, cannot withstand the poison of this book, 886

It's so messy! ! ! It looks awkward (||๐_๐)

What are you writing? The more I read, the more confused I become.

The theme is quite interesting, and the writing of the main world is also very good. However, the group leader is written like a bad good person, and he makes various selfless contributions to the group members. These are all okay. The most outrageous thing is that the heroine is really "toxic"

Really, thank you all for your continued support. I have been waiting for the outcome of the incident recently. Chinese men are always proud of this little bit. If the result is acceptable, I will do my best to repay you in the next work.

Why are you reading novels? I feel like I have a lot of chest congestion? ? ? After seeing Tushan Yaya's story in Naruto, I just gave up. Damn it, I really can't stand it. Being the protagonist is such a fucking waste. She can't carry the world with her. She won't travel into a world written by other writers. It's like shit.

It is recommended that the author revise the first few pictures, especially the first chapter which is too abrupt. 95% Of the readers are basically driven away by the first chapter. In fact, the rest of the writing is not bad. If it had not been poisoned at the beginning, too many people would not be where we are now.

It was quite funny after reading two chapters! Why do you say it's poisonous?

I've been searching for a long time, but I haven't seen the revelation chapter. It doesn't matter whether there is this first chapter or not. Is it the author who is confused by his sleep?

There is something wrong with the writing of Under One Person. The setting is not clear. Feng Baobao is not a half-step immortal. Her identity is still a mystery. She is most likely Feng Yao's daughter. Immortal in One Person is a very general concept, and Mi Er himself has not written it clearly. Moreover, the birth of the Eight Magic Skills has nothing to do with Feng Baobao. The expression of the Eight Magic Skills is obviously the result of gathering the strengths of each of the thirty-six thieves at a specific time and place. It is very likely that it was created in the Twenty-Four Solar Terms Valley.

I hope the author can write about characters that everyone is familiar with, and write unfamiliar ones that everyone doesn't recognize, so it's hard to read them.

Oh, Holy Light! That enemy is worth fighting!