The Origin of All Realms in Konoha

The subject matter is very interesting and interesting, but after reading twenty-six chapters, I found that the writing was incomprehensible. I had no idea what the book was about. There was no main line, it was very messy and incomprehensible.

The Magic Card Next Door has the same cover

Brothers who deleted their favorites, come back, I want 😭😭! ! ! ! ! !

I heard that there is more than one time traveler. For novice authors, this can dissuade many people. As a novice, I should make it clear that my protagonist is the only time traveler in the place of carriage and horse. He is special. No matter how powerful the enemy is, the protagonist has the trump card to surpass him and slap him in the face. Settings such as group travel, cheats in Goldfinger, and the mastermind behind the protagonist are all wonderful if they are well written, but 99% of authors are not good at writing them and will only make people abandon the book. Therefore, before you become a master and prove your writing skills to readers, it is better to be a novice. Don't commit suicide, let alone touch on those reading points just for the sake of writing foreshadowing. Moreover, novice authors often find out later in writing that it makes no difference whether or not their so-called foreshadowing is present. It may even make readers feel annoyed and abandon the book.

Thief Sun felt annoyed after watching it too much. What is the meaning of the existence of two time travellers?

Group wear and instant drama

Super God, you should put it later. Its setting level is not comparable to that of Hokage or Fox Demon. As for Kesha's fourth-generation divine body, it is almost immortal. Its setting is completely like the Great Luo Jinxian in the mythological system. Therefore, I suggest the author put Super God later in writing.

I just want to say, why do you want to create another time traveler? A time traveler, isn't he delicious? To be honest, you should write a time travel article properly. But I beg you, don't write the second one, okay? You will dissuade many people from doing so. Because they just want to see a protagonist.

This is a disgusting start, give up at the beginning 😅

You can give up this life, but you can't let go of the beauty.

Golden Chapter 3 almost made me vomit and slipped away.

No more comments? No one has continued to review the book for so long, so I can only leave a review myself Crying😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

The writing idea is right, but! It's too simple and doesn't have any sense of conspiracy in the Naruto world. There are many touching parts of Naruto, as well as conspiracies. You can't write a book with innocence and beauty, you can only write a book with beauty that others don't care about. It should be more realistic and less fantasy.

I like Dada's works, and I hope everyone will update more and create better content. I also hope to collect a lot of my work "Spiritual Master Volume".

I have read both Naruto and Super God since then. I like these two worlds better. There are still some highlights in this book. You can check out the worlds you like. It's pretty good!

Also knowledge building... A complete piece of shit

Go and look at the typos in the first picture and try to persuade me to dismiss the beginning.

This book is so self-liberating

Although the author's writing is okay, there are many poisonous points and it's a bit broken. To be honest, I couldn't stand it until Chapter 6. The plot has no main line at all. It's like writing without purpose. I hope the author can change this point.