Become a Master from Scratch

Just when I opened the starting point, the recommendation of Hogwarts appeared on the tip of my tongue, followed by the three words "Elena", and then I realized that I accidentally wrote the same name. It felt so embarrassing.

If there are any bugs, please point them out so I can fix them.

The Paper Crane Visits, with its novel setting and smooth plot, you can't stop watching it. It's already been collected (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Um? So do you, the goblin, refer to another name for Goblin, or do you refer to the earth elf?

It's okay to write, just briefly describe my feelings. The setting is good, how should a person with a humble status break the situation. However, there are no fierce conflicts in the first five chapters, and there are no necessary potential crises to push the protagonist forward. The protagonist's goal gives a sense of muddling through. The crisis of the snow elves can be appropriately increased to make the protagonist's rhythm more urgent. With this setting, what I, as a reader, want to see is how the protagonist becomes a serf and sings, how to solve problems that the elves cannot solve, and how to slap the wood elves in the face who bully him. It would be even better if it adds a twist while being fun. I haven't seen Goldfinger yet, so I haven't gotten into the feeling of anticipation yet so I can't comment (I also made this mistake. Goldfinger comes out earlier to make readers look forward to it) Generally speaking, it's not bad. There is a sense of expectation on how to control the same race and how to deal with elves. Come on!