Wizard Wayne

Being recognized by Qidian editor shows that your novel is a successful work, there is no doubt about it. But I personally still have to express some humble opinions. Let's talk about the advantages of this novel first. The novel's cover, writing form, and language style all have a very strong Western magical charm, and it gradually gets better without you realizing it. The pace is very good, which is especially rare for an author writing a first novel. The plot unfolds in a reasonable and basically logical manner. Literature and art cannot be as rigorous and credible as real life, but on the contrary, only such works are more charming. This novel is an example. The characters are not awkwardly handled, the story is concise and interesting, and there is very little nonsense, which will make people want to read more. Here are some constructive suggestions. The title of the book is easy to understand at a glance, and the introduction is simple and clear. It is about a magician named Wayne looking for his uncle. However, it is simple, clear and straight to the point, but at the same time it lacks a little bit of artistry and leaves no room for suspense or imagination. There is room for improvement in this regard. Chapter One, it's hard to imagine how many new names of people and places appeared in the first chapter, which made me dizzy and just list them. Gus, Thorson, Hall Street, Green Violin House, Feld, Albert, Floating City, Laforet, Arkanst, Ofhar, Bethesca Kingdom... I was so tired that I was sweating profusely. I know you are anxious to explain, but you can't just say it all in one chapter without even taking a breath. To say so much in a two thousand-word chapter is the best way to "dissuade" new readers. It's hard for you to imagine how much loss these names of people and places have brought to you. Is it worth 100 million? It is recommended to simplify it, say what needs to be said, and leave out what is not needed. For example, the Kingdom of Besaka is written directly as Kingdom. I haven't read the rest of it. It's not that it's not good to watch, but it's just not suitable for hard science fiction like me. If you encounter bottlenecks, you are welcome to @ me and discuss the writing with me. I will be happy to serve the people.

The author is very stable, the writing is good, the plot of the story is well controlled, and the scene atmosphere is very picturesque. I admire the author's powerful imagination in the spiritual world! However, the psychological description is still a bit lacking. The soul of the novel lies in the characters. I hope to see more of their emotions in the text, and to highlight and strengthen the characters and images of the male and female protagonists. Up to now, the love line has not developed much 😖. I don't know what the follow-up direction will be. As a girl, I have seen too many harem plots in which everyone accepts one after another. It's hard to agree on, overall it's a good book, a breath of fresh air in online literature. Readers who think the pace is slow, don't worry, a good book is worth waiting for. People who like a page in two seconds are recommended to slow down and read it carefully. You will find that this is an excellent composition! Come on ❤️! Looking forward to seeing a larger world view~😜🤭 Recommended for book friends who pass by to give it a try, recommend it for collection, and support it! 🌹🌹🌹

Add a first floor! Facts have proved that this book can resist and fight. The opening chapter goes straight to the theme, the description is delicate, humorous, and the language description is appropriate, straightforward and intriguing. When you turn the first page, the wonderful world rushes into your face. The atmosphere of life is strong and the rhythm is tight. It makes people dive straight into it and want to see it again! Come on! Support! Then the advertisement is here. The new signed work "His Majesty's History of Fame" created by Giant Baby Return {"NickName":"Autumn Roll Dry Wind","UserId":213635124} is being serialized on the channel. Although it is history, it will also open up a new fantasy epic for readers and friends! The content of this book focuses on creativity and development, and is funny and humorous. There are jokes you can't think of and things you can think of. It's so exciting that you can't miss it. Come and read it and support it! Thank you to this platform for allowing me to place a small advertisement. I also hope that the author of "Wizard Wayne" will share his knowledge with fellow readers! Hope for more support! Thank you! Friends, please also support "Ven" and encourage each other to make progress together!

Preface: Bu Shui book review. Recommendation index: ★★★★☆☆ (6.3-10 Points scale) Detailed review: Book title: The Magician points out the Western themes (I haven't seen many Eastern-themed magicians anyway). Wien introduced the protagonist and pointed it out simply and crudely. Although the title of the book did not attract me, at least I can get a general idea of ​​something. Content: Smooth and smooth, at least the connection is good. Although the pause point does not attract people to read the next chapter, you can feel the flow of the article and set the stage for what happens next (why do I feel that I have become a reading comprehension???). Writing style: It is not a composition for primary school students, but it does not reach the excellent score of high school composition 🤭. The language is relatively popular, but there are some descriptions of hydrological components in some places (although it is not redundant, but it is verbose). Fortunately, the characters are detailed and detailed (I don't want to write about reading comprehension). Brief review: The adventurous magician is moving towards the light. Message from readers: (Can I not write it?) It is temporarily included in the book list and I look forward to updating it (I actually don't read much Western-themed articles).

🥵Wow, Western fantasy style, so well written d=(´▽｀)=b

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This book does not use popular routines and is not a simple text. If you can persist until the completion of the book, or if someone recommends it, it will still be successful.

Brothers I don't know, friends of sand sculptures, and fantasy lovers, I wish your book will be a hit. I hope I can finish both books. Not much to say, my ability is limited, I will follow you up with three accounts to show my support.

Is the memory almost exhausted? Touch your head, work hard, relax properly on the weekend, the water flows slowly, don't collapse 🌹

Picture 1 is a world map, picture 2 Obohar, picture 3 Casali. Schematic diagram, mainly to prevent dizziness, don't be too ugly...

I first saw this book in Qidian New Author Group, and I fell in love with it after I clicked on it. When I first started following this book, the author had only updated it to a dozen chapters, and now it's almost forty chapters. The more I read, the more I like the imagination and details of this book. The author really uses his words to build us a magical world full of novelty: there are characters with different personalities, strange creatures, mouth-watering food (😂... As a foodie, I often get hungry just looking at it), magic weapons with different functions, and a continent full of adventures. The author's writing style is good, and as a newcomer, I feel ashamed... I have always felt strange, why such a good book has not been signed... Maybe it is because in the first few chapters, the pace of the story will be slow, and the purpose of the protagonist is not particularly clear. But as I read further, I feel that the plot becomes more compact and the pace becomes faster and faster... So you must read it patiently... Oh my god, I am so long-winded... Maybe it is because life is too busy that it is not easy to follow the book... I hope the author can keep updating until the book is finished... I am still waiting for it to be published, subscribe and reward!

Thanks to all the readers who voted for this book, I would like to dedicate this book to our lost time. The author is a programmer born in 1985 and a lover of science fiction, horror, and suspense. I usually like singing, dancing, rap and basketball. Uh, wrong, novels, movies and guitars. This book is the author's first novel. There must be many problems. I hope everyone can correct me. PS. As a salted fish with 996 blessings, I have done my best by updating every day. I hope everyone will support me. Thank you everyone!

I heard that a bunch of authors have recently opened small accounts for rewards 🤫

Everyone who is about to usher in the New Year and the New Year should be very happy! The author Jun here wishes everyone a Merry Christmas 🎄 and happiness every day! Finally, if you feel that the updates are too slow, just put it on your bookshelf. There will be one more chapter every day and you can read it again in a month.

It took me two days to read the latest chapter, and I felt pretty good about it. However, the work was a bit slow. After reading dozens of chapters, it became more and more interesting and exciting. I really like the character of the protagonist Wayne. It feels a bit like myself. I especially like the heroine Elena, give her a thumbs up! I hope their relationship can develop quickly!

I think this book expresses some of my views on magic. Of course, it also has some shortcomings, that is, the plot pace is too slow and the number of words is too few.

Will the three fireball spells cause real damage(;｀O´)o

I have caught up with the latest chapter. Feld's portrayal is vivid and lifelike, cheerful and righteous yet poor-talking. The character creation is very successful. Wayne is still the introverted and shy young boy. It makes the old aunt really anxious. Let's have some exciting plots. We can't let these people just be so leisurely 🤓

A rare indigenous novel in the past two years. I am used to Goldfinger and am invincible Have a look at this book to change it up👍👍 By the way, promote your own book, a short story that was completed in a few days🙂🙂

The title of the book should be changed to Diary of the Grand Arcanist Venn. The profession of magician is too low-level!

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