You Can Withdraw Cash After Hearing Bragging

The creativity is good, and the system restrictions are reasonable, but after gaining the ability, the protagonist forcibly restricts himself. Is this reasonable? To be honest, the setting of the Dark Night Gate is a bit poisonous, and the author's writing makes people feel that the protagonist is about to obtain a powerful talent, and a factor is needed to limit him, so the Dark Night Gate forcibly appears. Instead of the Night Gate being there, the protagonist needs to be low-key. The inversion of cause and effect has caused the Night Gate to become a poisonous spot. The same goes for the bragging of classmates in the class. There is no hint of foreshadowing in the writing, and the protagonist suddenly hears the bragging of his classmates. This makes the plot seem very abrupt and out of rhythm, making people feel instantly dramatic when watching it. This is a poisonous point. The golden finger just appeared in the previous scene, and in the second scene there was a boast that allowed the protagonist to withdraw cash. Then there was a small conflict and the protagonist was slapped in the face. Well, the plot is too coincidental and loses its ups and downs, making it not very attractive to people. That's all. I can't stand the rest. Sorry. Here are some humble opinions for the author: 1. Pay attention to the rationality of the plot 2. Give more foreshadowing for major plot changes 3. Grasp the plot rhythm and don't let the scene derail, rhythm is very important

The ending is too perfunctory. It's because the author didn't want to write it and ended it with a chapter.

When I saw the title I thought of the scolding process between me and my classmates At that time, somehow the topic of urine came up You are standing at the highest point on the earth Aim at the sky and open the valve. A beam of hot water penetrated the sky. It broke through the atmosphere and shot straight out At the same time, the nine stars shot directly through the planet, like a string of candied haws on a string. Pluto was originally so big, and it was directly exploded by you. It was miserable According to you, what temperature should my urine be?

The plot of the author's book is a bit cliché, but it's a bit strange to use our current thinking to write clichés.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

? My mother's name is He Jing. What do you want me to think?

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I think it's well written, but it would be too clumsy if it were invincible at the beginning. The system has the control of withdrawal points, and the strength gradually increases. Only by eating one bite at a time can people taste its deliciousness. The same is true for novels. Only when the strength gradually increases can people continue to read. It would be too boring to be invincible at the beginning. No matter how good the subsequent plot is, people will not look forward to it I'm optimistic about you, come on＾0＾~!

I said your cousin can easily spend 100,000, but the family is having a huge quarrel over 200,000?

Come on💪I never had time to watch 😜 and watched it all at once hehe

I'll get you a recommendation package! This book is good! Write well

The author should pay attention to how high the level of martial arts in this world must be for a first-level person to be able to hit a sonic boom with one punch, and how hard the furniture in the protagonist's home is to withstand sonic booms.

There are too many restrictions. To withdraw money, you need resources. To get resources, you need to become stronger, which is fine. Then, if you want to become stronger, you need to use your talents to obtain resources, and then create a setting where talents can be robbed. As a result, you don't dare to show your talents, which is very painful. To be honest, I feel that even a top monster cannot have so many resources, and bragging is divided into levels, which depends on your imagination. If you brag too much, you can't redeem it, and if you brag too lowly, it's not worth it. In other words, you have to meet a suitable person. In fact, the system itself has many limitations. It is not that easy not to deliberately write so many awesome things. The same goes for the people around you. Not everyone can brag.

Why do I feel like I've seen it somewhere? It was said that eunuchs blew up corpses before.

I was drawn in by the setting and the way Goldfinger unfolded. After reading two chapters, I feel that the fact that the talent can be taken away is really problematic. The author just wants to find a reason for the protagonist to hide it so that he can show off in the future. But if the talent can be taken away, you should never use your magical power in front of others for the rest of your life. . There will always be people who are not very powerful but are much stronger than you, and there will always be descendants of big bosses who have awakened magical powers that are not suitable for fighting. Or do you want to be invincible and then expose yourself and write about invincibility? This pretense is really blunt. But I can't change it even if I write it, so why not put some restrictions on the transplantation of supernatural powers. In short, this kind of pretentious routine is no longer popular now. Newbies may like it. Old book friends will probably find it uncomfortable. I'll end it here. I hope the author can cheer up and slip away.

Shit, teleport three meters? Liu Xiang: Believe it or not, I can run ten meters in one second.

Is it difficult to ask someone to brag to you? For the third wish at the beginning, just ask someone to brag about your invincibility and that's it.

The author's creativity is quite good, but the writing style seems a bit uncomfortable. I hope the author can improve it.

Please don't become a disciple of that person, don't disappoint us readers, you've already boasted and cashed out, is there any need to become a disciple? ? ?

Well, I was persuaded to quit at first. There are too many coincidences and they are arranged so well.

Um, has this protagonist not heard anyone bragging in 17 years of time travel? 🐶 Or did Goldfinger appear later? This is not too detailed.

This is a book on FL! Become stronger when you hear bragging

A novel with no poisonous points, but without any special features...

Uh, can this Dark Night Gate, the innate magical power that can be plundered, still be called "innate" magical power? Shouldn't the innate magical power be a personal talent? ?

There is something wrong with the author's background. If you put it in today's urban environment, it would be better, but why are you in ancient times and 100 years later? You can't explain your background clearly at all, it's so confusing.

Teleportation has its uses after all If you encounter a powerful one, you can't run away, but there is no need for a weak one Unless it evolves into a spatial ability in the later stage, it is just a traveling skill, and even if there are more restrictions, it will be inconvenient to travel.

I can't stand it at the beginning. The main characters are cowardly. I've never seen anyone so scared. I've read a lot of books about pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. I've rarely seen novels that are purely pig-like.

You are timid at the beginning, afraid of this and that. If you are afraid, just act like an ordinary person.

Isn't it finished? Why did the investment fail?

Grab the red envelope and vote for recommendation. The author works hard and hopes that the performance of this book will get better and better (By the way, I would like to mention the animated Attack on Titan. Whether it is the layout, the depth of thought, or the super-burning battle scenes that stimulate hormones, it is worth blowing up. Titan is the greatest anime masterpiece in my heart. It is so beautiful. I have no regrets about joining Titan in this life.)