The Big Talker Xiao Ming in Konoha

It was well written at first, and it was quite interesting to use scientific theories to study ninjutsu. However, in the second volume, a female devil without borders suddenly appeared who was not as strong as the original, and even mixed into Chinese mythology. What a mess.

I finally know why I haven't read this book before. I just can't stand it when I see that female devil.

Going back in time is a matter of time. If you catch up with the light, theoretically you can only see what happened before, because light has propagation properties (mirrors, reflections into shadows)! Hey, that tall guy in front of you is blocking my view of my bikini! This is the image of light carrying a bikini coming to your eyes! If Denki in Naruto is too serious, I think he is invincible!

To be honest, it was okay at first, but once the female devil came out, I was dumbfounded. If Hinata has such a strong person, how can Madara and Hashirama stand out? With this strength, looking at this situation, I am almost ready to upgrade to the reincarnation eye. You must know that Madara and Hashirama did not have the Sixth Level during their time. Isn't this another Otsutsuki Kaguya? Black Zetsu still uses the moon to save his mother? How about just recognizing her as a mother again? How about helping her unify the ninja world in exchange for her mother returning? Can the two of them still train each other so well that when those Otsutsuki fools come, they won't be given away for nothing? You can create your own plot, but don't make it so magical, okay? Boss, it looks like the Naruto fan "Boruto"

The speed of light cannot go back in time. Non-Newtonian fluids need to be quite thick to block bullets. The non-Newtonian fluids produced by the experience of resisting penetrating ninjutsu are also huge, so it does not save chakra. ╭(╯ε╰)╮The brain hole refers to the enjoyment under reasonable conditions, not just a few tricks.

I ran away, it seems it's time to give up.

I think the real God should be omniscient and omnipotent. If you don't know, you don't know, but you don't want to know. I think the God in "The World-Eating Serpent" is more in line with the standards of a god.

Don't you think your list of geniuses in the ninja world is poisonous?

Did the protagonist go back in the end

What the hell is Hinata Hinata who is so awesome?

Why did the style of painting become so serious later on, into a Chinese fantasy style?

It was pretty good at first, but then the author got too excited and the plot fell apart.

The perspective and concept of the protagonist have been reflected from the first chapter. He doesn't understand human emotions at all. Killing one friend for another friend, is this what you should do? This is not what you should do. This is what Tobirama should do. He is not your friend, and you are in no position to do this because both of them are He is your friend, and you only have the right to stop him. I think you don't regard them as friends at all. They are just business partners. Whichever party has the greatest interests will lean towards that party. Interested partners and friends are completely different things. I don't know if the author doesn't understand or deliberately wrote the protagonist with this character.

There is absolutely no need to write the second volume. It's a big poisonous point. If you see something incomprehensible, you can delete it.

Although this book is short, it is quite exciting, but the writing style is a bit immature, so it would be better to end it this way.

If the fat girl is written as the heroine, I will give 100 recommendation votes

There are so many stories about real names, and readers will definitely die miserably if they don't tell the author.

The scene between the protagonist and Madara and Hashirama is simply lowering the IQ. How can a person who can judge troubled times have such a low IQ? I would have died if I didn't have a snack machine.

The first thirteen chapters are generally very well written, although the young Madara and Hashirama are relatively unreasonable, and then the book is over. You don't need to read the rest. It is extremely poisonous, and the style of painting suddenly changes. A female devil who looks like Hinata appears, has three eyes, is invincible, and can do everything. She catches the protagonist for no reason and beats her. It is extremely poisonous. If you don't believe it, you can read this chapter. It says that 70% of these chapters are talking about poison.

After reading the introduction, I feel that it is very unreliable. The human body cannot withstand the speed of light travel. The human body will turn into scum before the speed reaches the speed of light.

Feiniu just switches between solid and liquid. In the end, it depends on the strength of the solid. Once Feiniu is hit, it will fly away as a solid, and finally turn into a liquid.

The author is forcing you, jump out and kill him

There is one thing that was not written out, the danger of being black.

Using non-Newtonian fluids to defend the Tailed Beast Jade is a big joke. The fluid will only make you feel so hard when you are very fast. The problem is that the Tailed Beast Jade will explode. This metaphor is like using fluid to defend against nuclear bombs. Is it absolutely possible for you?

Tailed beast jade is an energy ball, similar to ball lightning The release of ninjutsu relies on chakra, which is also energy. Except for ninjutsu such as blood and ice, only earth type is a solid body, not a Newtonian fluid? …

Comrade Xiao Ming, after seeing your new book review, I will share my thoughts. 1. Come back and make up the ending of this book, just the ones in your book review. Because your ending is too open. 2. If you are writing a sequel, it will really become fantasy. The world linked to the World Tree is fantasy and is no longer suitable for Naruto fans. 3. There are still many things in this world that have not been explained. You can continue writing. I personally feel that there is no need to open a new book. 4. If you really want to open a Naruto fantasy book, I will invalidate 2-3 points. Above

After reading the introduction, I was a little embarrassed. First of all, thunder is slower than light, thank you