Dragon Ball: Earthlings Want to Be Supergods

The subject matter is quite novel. I like it. I hope you can continue writing.

Suggestions 1. The writing is too casual The introduction needs to be revised, make it more attractive Otherwise, you won't want to read it after looking at the introduction 2. The paragraphs are too long The paragraphs in the first few chapters are really too long, with a maximum of four lines per paragraph. The logic must be clearly presented before reading. In front of readers, otherwise the densely packed words of seven or eight lines can scare away a large number of readers 3. Not rigorous enough I originally wanted to quit, but then my brain got hot and I read it carefully and found that the content of this book is really good, but I couldn't stand it when I saw Chapter 7, the writing is too casual!