Ninja World Completion Plan

I haven't watched The Hunter before, so I don't have a sense of immersion at all. I can't make up for the abilities and stuff written in my head, and I feel like there are a lot of inner fluctuations.

I went to another world to guard the sacred tree and manage the colony for hundreds of years. In reality, only a few days passed, and it became more and more a hundred years every day. I went to a separate device with an Internet connection. I went to get three sets of Otsutsuki costumes, a chakra heretic weapon that can create the initial state, a low-grade chakra fruit, and nine chakra pills [one pill is equivalent to half of the 100 calories of Naruto who just became a genin (not counting the nine-tails)]. There is more than one person responsible for guarding, the kind of team that completes the task. When the time comes, hand over the fruits, taxes and obligations from the sacred tree. How will the treatment be like? What are the risks? Have an idea?

After this reincarnation, the reading experience feels smoother than in the previous life.

Is the author going to magically change Earth Resentment? This idea is good, a bit similar to Dio and Kaz, especially the perfect human who can turn his blood vessels into tentacles and needles.

It's so verbose, I'm sure the author must be an extremely boring person

The author of this book is extremely self-indulgent. Self-exciting language, text, and sentences cannot be read without modification.

It is recommended that the protagonist gathers the air ninjas in the later stage, especially their black technology floating city, and then forms a hunter association.

You failed my investment again, twice.

Suddenly, I searched Baidu for the source of the battle life fiber, and found out that it was originally a shoujo anime called "Shoujo Shoujo", in which the setting is a divine garment made of combat life fiber. I haven't read the anime, but it should be similar to a Shinigami's Zanpakutō or a ghoul's Haku. It just so happens that the protagonist's divine garment is also called blood.

What is the author writing? From the beginning of the book to the present, the protagonist is very pretentious. Even if it is written like this for a few chapters, it is like this in every chapter. The protagonist of this book is the protagonist, and the supporting characters are all backgrounds. The plot is completely unclear. The general writing method is to promote the plot based on the growth of the protagonist and the interaction between the supporting characters. The author writes that the protagonist walks there and wanders around. The previous chapter I have a supporting character, I don't know where to go in the next chapter, the plot progress is unbearable, Such a strong protagonist should only rely on interaction with the supporting characters to write the plot in the future. The book is a bit boring at first. The protagonist's power setting is very good. The author's writing so far can only be regarded as a prologue. The rest of the writing will still be like this. If the writing method is not improved, no one will read it.

Another shortcoming is that the main idea is unclear. For online articles, if everyone is confused and confused about what you are trying to say, they will not continue reading. Now we are in a very awkward situation, I want to say something but can't explain clearly. Either don't say it at all and use it as a foreshadowing, or make it clear directly. But that's how you feel now. Maybe you think you made it clear, but in the eyes of the reader, you don't. As a bookworm of 11 years, I have a hard time understanding your gist. 🙂🙂

First, the protagonist must not wear women's clothing, which will seriously affect the substitution.

Sharing happiness will make you happier (you can't be blind alone) That guy is already invincible and no longer has any weaknesses. I'm afraid the Nichirin Sword won't have any effect on him. With his immortal body and immortality, no one can defeat him! The complete creature, the ultimate life form Nezuko was born! ! ! Picture from B station up Xiao Si is dripping with big nose

This update. . . . I'm afraid of dying

Give it up, I can update the book more slowly, but I won't accept teasing, and it's not just once. Goodbye

When I read Chapter 32, I felt that the author's protagonist was going to be the same as Muzan Kibutsuji. By Chapter 34, he was really the same.

Pig's foot: "The art of psychics!" After a burst of smoke, a certain ant king appeared 😂