My Animal City of All Heavens

Damn it, the protagonist and the system have their own agendas.

Is the protagonist a funny guy? I feel very proud

The protagonist is a bit mentally retarded and bloated. Those animals seem to have lowered their IQs forcibly.

The number one R&D person in the animal world, I only recognize Big Gray Wolf.

The writing is good, but check the punctuation. There are too many commas 😅. Follow your own outline. Newbies always change the outline because of other people's opinions, which will lead to collapse.

Congratulations on the launch! We girls say that two updates a day after it is put on the shelves is not considered a bad update, and only if it is not a bad update, it will be ranked in the recommended position. I don't know if this is the case with male videos.

If the author wants to write a cool article, I think he can add some big names from all over the world. For example, the holy master Mu Feng in "Saint Master of All Worlds" and Zhou Yang in "The Strongest Shopkeeper in History" can go to the shopkeeper's Wanjie Building to buy some things in the early stage. By the way, I bought system awareness. It's disgusting that the system brings consciousness. Persuade to quit

The consciousness of the system is the number of water words, and it is very popular.

The subject matter is very good, but unfortunately what I want to watch is the Zhutian Construction genre without a female protagonist. I don't know if the author is a newcomer or something. The emotional drama is just as I thought it was purely based on imagination. Also, I read the first part but didn't finish the free chapter, so I don't know how to write the rest. However, the previous part gave me the feeling that the setting was high-end, but the author's writing was a bit petty, and it was just an urban novel.

For example, the plot is slow and the protagonist looks like a high school student with no experience at all?

Author: I want to sign up to fight, and I want it now. Deposit: No, you don't want to, wake up, you are just a salted fish, do your duty as a salted fish. Author: I have already signed up.

What do you think of Taishang Zhifu? It came in based on your comments

I'll read your book again tomorrow and the day after tomorrow, and I'll summarize it for you then! My recommendation vote is useless. I haven't voted every day. I forgot about it. I'll give it to you today!

The writing is okay, but the writing is too slow. One chapter a day is a bit unsatisfactory.

I really want to know how Baiyue felt when he saw a fairy-level boss (the protagonist) learning martial arts. The subject matter is good, but the characters are a bit intellectual

I don't know who took the lead. Nowadays, the authors of Qidian are all writing in the style of comedy. But there is also a big problem. If the writing is not good, it will not be funny. The language is messy and makes people feel like they are watching a **

Only 9 people have invested. There will be investment opportunities next month. I will invest for you.

The pace is a bit fast, it feels like someone is pushing you forward from behind, and after watching it, I feel like I have no impression of anything. Add more details and foreshadowing, and slow down the pace to understand the content... I suggest you watch "Hanque" by July Boss. It seems that you can't go fast even if you want to, and the creativity is quite interesting.

If you have any animals you want, leave a message and I will draw them. The format is as follows: 1 Name: Devil Xiaolong 2 Source: "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" 3 Desired character: Such as cute, such as evil, such as kind? (Note, please comply with the original work, but you can also create it appropriately.) 4 Desired scenes: such as pressing the protagonist and beating him, such as dueling with his father, the Holy Lord. 5 Who do you want to have love, hate, affection and enmity with: like Uncle Long, like Xiaoyu, like looking down on deadbeats? (Note: It can be other characters, feel free to do whatever you want. I will decide as appropriate and don't limit it to one.) 6 Want industry, industry, and sustainable development strategies: such as selling dragon meat, dragon blood, opening a dragon meat hot pot restaurant, etc. (Expand your imagination.)

Where is the concierge, Uncle Qin😰😰

🌹🌹🌹Good night

Rainbow Cat Young Hero, tell me about my boyish dream

Author, there is a problem with your monthly vote data. I voted for monthly votes today, and the result is still 2. It should show 3.

Panda I want Panda 😏😏😏😏

I just saw a book written on September 17th. Others have 240,000 words, but you only have 140,000 words. Come on.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

See what it is like to be so hungry...

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Why would you go to a low-level martial arts world to cheat on internal skills when there is a leader of the Moon Worshiping Cult next to you?😤

You salty author, with such an update speed, many people will simply delete it from their bookshelf or keep it until they remember it someday. Will you use your love to generate electricity? Please update quickly.