Take the System to the Water Group

The protagonist can recruit people at will... There are already a lot of people in the chat group in the later stage, and with the author's arrangement, I think it will collapse in the later stage.

Suggestions: 1> Improve writing skills. The plot needs high-quality writing to reflect it. 2> Improve the rigor of logic. The work gives people a sense of unclear logic. Although it is weak, it has a strong impact. 3> The plot is interesting. The plot at this stage feels confusing and bland. The positioning of the work has daily content, but the description of daily life is not detailed enough, and there are some funny content, which is not dense enough. I have been following you on my old account, and I will continue to follow you on my new account. This chapter will be posted in the corresponding places to provide modification suggestions. Hope this helps. I wish the author better and better as he writes!

Brainless articleis it

I suggest changing the title of the book. After all, the search term for this steely straight man is not as popular as the chat group.

As you can tell from the title of the book, the protagonist is bent.

About Midoriya The humble author would like to say something. When I wrote Midoriya before, Horikoshi Kohei had not started any troubles, and I felt very uncomfortable. It has been dealt with later, and Midoriya's role has been reduced.

It's quite good. I finished it in one sitting. There's not much of a problem. It's quite good. Just keep it lighthearted. Personal advice: Don't bring villains and other villains into the group. Don't let conspiracy theories or anything like that happen. . . Don't have too many group members at once (it may marginalize a certain character) Lastly, it's about the heroine,,, why not tease her if you don't want to marry her, just concentrate on describing a few heroines. . . . Purely a personal suggestion Ganba dadi. . .

It was a bit toxic in the early stage, but after enduring it, I felt surprisingly good

The author would like to ask my lovely readers, where did you discover my book? Apart from searching for the name of my book, I can't find my book anywhere else...

Sage Hui

😏😏

Prefer long-haired Rem

How to report Qidian? I just saw the second chapter and I want to report it. Is there any kind person who can teach me.

Isn't Kasumigaoka Shiyu the male protagonist? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! /? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ! ! ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! It's about to burst! ! ! ! /? ! . ! ! . ! 😡😡😡😡😡

. . . Why is it so frustrating to fight a Douzun? Are you sure Saitama can't distort space with one punch?

This system is a bit exaggerated. The chat group is a civil service system that belongs directly to the world itself and is jointly organized by multiple dimensional worlds. It belongs to the joint defense system of the dimensional world. Its direct boss is the will of the world (the origin of the world with a higher level than Gaia and Alaya). Until the system has the power to directly confront the origin of the world, it is basically a dead end against the chat group.

The real name of the heroine is Sawamura Spencer Eri

The relationship between Layinglili and Midoriya is a bit toxic. . . . The protagonist all said in the chat group that he was a time traveler and even pulled them. . . . . . They must be aware of the sudden change in the protagonist's personality Ying Lili and Midori both grew up with the original protagonist Ying Lili also likes the original protagonist Why would the protagonist think that a relationship of just a few months is comparable to a relationship of more than ten years And Ying Lili and the others actually accepted it easily 😅

Get rid of My Hero Academia soon, it's reversed

Can the author finally update normally? It shouldn't be like the half-dead state it was before, right? I'm so happy, I feel like my child has finally grown up. 😃

I have finished reading the latest chapter I feel that it is still okay now, but I think there are more and more characters in the later period. I hope the author can control it well and not be like the chat group next door. In the later stage, all the characters will collapse. All the group members have become repeaters who only shout 666. Every time a new member joins, they pretend to be b. The ultimate flood b😄

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The writing style needs to be improved, but it is indeed better than most chat group novels (maybe it is a personal feeling). To be honest, I really hate the protagonists who open chat groups and fool the group members. Come on, author.

Seeing An Yilun also join the group, I decisively gave up 😅😅

The plot is a bit messy, there are too many time travellers. In terms of writing, you can try to describe the environment. How about starting with a scene? The character is a bit awkward. I think everything else is fine, just my humble opinion and I hope you will adopt it.

Why does this book work like this? You sent out one, and I almost forgot all about the last one.

Don't use such watery pictures!

Is this update rate monthly?

They can be straight in the first hundred episodes, but it's too late to get together at the end.

This part always feels a bit awkward