Tianfeng Mowulu

This book is being updated steadily. Friends are welcome to read and comment, find typos, criticize the plot, and I will correct any existing problems one by one 🙏

Book title: Retro (not bad) Introduction: Moderate Golden Three Chapters: The summary of the past relationship at the beginning of the first chapter is confusing. It is recommended to change it to a prologue or wedge; the title (1) (2) (3) has a very strange look and feel, and there are two hidden meanings: Sufferings: First, readers feel that the author is exhausted and cannot think of a good title, so they are reluctant to read the follow-up; second, there are problems with chapter division, plot condensation, and expressive ability. The three golden chapters are so important, but they fail to tell a story well. The plot is average. To be honest, everyone has thought about this kind of plot. Anyone who has read the novel has imagined that he can save the world and travel through fantasy, so there is nothing new. If you want to write such a novel to be attractive, you really have to cross a single-plank bridge and compete with the great gods. Writing still needs to be practiced. This writing gives people the feeling of watching a movie, a kind of spectator perspective or YY perspective, as light as water. On the one hand, you are equivalent to screening readers, and 50% of readers will just reject it. On the other hand, it is really difficult to write something grand and grand in the future.