The Fate of the Mage

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I've read it, the layout is very beautiful, and it doesn't look like a casually written work. Why is it so cold? Maybe the narrative is too cold and there is no sense of immersion. I confirmed who the protagonist is through the characters in this book. It is recommended to increase the conflict and focus on the protagonist's role.

In the first chapter, the illegitimate son was almost persuaded to quit. This routine is really rubbish. What difference does this and other down-and-out princes have? You can't be normal, persist for a while, and in the third chapter, you are completely poisoned and die, and the female character just sticks to the protagonist, right? She doesn't have the self-knowledge of a normal person. She's a thief and doesn't know what she's doing? You don't think that you are an upright person, do you?

I prefer reading Western fantasy novels recently, but there are too few Western fantasy novels. Even fewer are well written. Your book is really interesting. Just watch it first. 😊

Come on! Already collected, please accept and visit each other! Thanks!

To be honest, the thief woman at the beginning of the chapter, I don't know if there will be any later, but it has a dissuasive effect. The thief is for his own survival, but in the end he still steals, maybe he stole important things. It is outrageous that some people always give this type of adjectives such as weird and weird, and then the main character protects the thief (criminal) and then stays with the main character, which is outrageous.

Recommended by a group of friends, I'll add a bookshelf first.

Well written, good luck to the author,

Recommendation I haven't read it yet, but this kind of introduction and tags make people don't want to read it. Some suggestions, currently there are only two categories of people who like to watch western fantasy. One is the magical science and technology novels that like lord farming, such as Holy Light, The Beginning of Magic, The Journey of the Great Magician, I Have a Refuge, this category. The other type is Zhutian Liu, such as Wizard's Journey, Immortal Wizard, with tags like yours, only ghosts can search for them. Who likes Western fantasy will search for Mortal Liu, and the introduction is not clear, so who would want to read it

After reading the first few chapters, they all taste the same! Wood slag. I don't know how to decisively abandon the book later!

The main reason is that it's too depressing. That David can't die. Why should the mages need a leader to save him? The mages are already divided. What's the point of dying alone? Isn't a person like him afraid that he will join the demon clan or the demon god? Purely disgusting reader

Awesome brothers😰......

Is this a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Thanks to the author, please add oil

Why is this book so cold? I've been adding books to my bookshelf for a long time, but I haven't read it yet. Anyone who has read it can summarize it.

Such good Western Fantasy results are so bad

Peg and Robert really look like Geralt and Dandelion in "The Witcher"

As for the fights and scenes, it felt like the next section started before the previous section was finished, which was very abrupt and inexplicable.

The author is pretty good at being able to persevere until now.

I don't like the so-called farming world, I just like this type

It's very interesting. I was hooked after reading the first chapter.

It's a bit miserable It's a bit miserable that less than a hundred people have paid for this book with no matter how many words it is. But actually this is not surprising This is the problem that the author's writing style is not suitable for online books Basically, there are not many online books that can survive It is not an expert's advice not to try it easily Especially online books that follow chapter by chapter If the style is too boring, there will be no motivation for people to read The physical book is different After all, you think the book is about abuse. But I also bought the book Your twists and highlights and suspense can be left at the end But it has to be written well and it is quite difficult Otherwise, there will not be a great master who publishes a book every few years Publishing a book in a year can be said to be amazing.

Come on (๑ `▽´๑)۶

Traditional western fantasy? Let me first ask, are there many Chinese idioms? Regardless of whether you have it or not, I'm sure there is,