Violent Hunting Team

I just read this book not long ago. The author is very attentive and the plot is very organized. It is a book with great potential. I hope it gets better as it gets written!

Hello everyone, I am the author of this book. The prelude to the first chapter tells the story of Mr. Renxia's chivalry and righteousness. If you want to read the story of the protagonist Ling Yun directly, you can start reading from the main chapter of the first chapter~

Come on, author. It's so difficult to find someone who writes about poisonous milk powder. I hope you can keep writing.

What a miserable man (manual funny)

The writing is okay, but there are some flaws. Since you are traveling through time, you should not show the game skills that ignore the field factor, and it is really uncomfortable for other players to come. There was a book about thugs before, which was pretty good. It insisted on talking about Saiyans and their names and other nonsense, which made it very poisonous.

What about the writer, the protagonist, the background, and the system? You should study it first and then I can point out a clear path for DNF. Thank you.