Konoha Bookstore

I found that Danzo was really busy. He not only had to keep an eye on the more than 10,000 ninjas in the village, but also kept an eye on the hundreds of thousands of civilians in the village, for fear that undocumented time travelers would appear in the village.

First of all, don't blame me for my sharp tongue. Looking at the title of your first chapter, I thought it was a bit cliche. Looking at the first chapter, it was okay at first, but then, the grudge that Uncle Yile's daughter had appeared. Look again, the interactive chat between Naruto and the protagonist. It feels too strong, and Naruto's personality seems to be suppressed by the protagonist. Of course, the whole article is very concise and I can remember the general plot in one go. This is a very good point. If the above is changed, most readers should be able to retain it. Finally, don't hit me.

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Open a bookstore branch, do you understand the chain? 😂

Next to the bookstore, many people who have been here are doing business there, which will drive the development of your bookstore, awesome Brass

If you haven't watched Naruto, then don't write nonsense, okay?⋯⋯😅

By the way, this book is called Konoha Bookstore. Shouldn't it be that the content of the bookstore accounts for the majority

I feel that the author's writing style is not very good. At the same time, the plot is a bit too compact. There are many places that I don't understand clearly. I hope the author can improve it.

Author, what do you want to write about? Write a protagonist who makes soy sauce? Write a story about a protagonist who waits for Naruto Ertai Zi Shui based on the plot of Naruto? I don't understand at all that you write a so-called protagonist who changes without being stupid and funny. After watching the protagonist for more than 70 chapters, it seems like you don't understand anything. Is it funny? He doesn't even have a Kage level power, so he just goes around fooling around and doesn't know what the point is. It's funny to see that the protagonist of this novel is almost like a background board. I don't know what he does. I want to change but I haven't seen any big changes in this thing. Konoha, just copy an article about Naruto the way you wrote it.

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Here are some books on cultivating immortals, what kind of ninjutsu should I practice, and how should I practice fighting spirit instead?

Very few people showed up at the bookstore at the back.

There is a tense atmosphere at the beginning of a war. There are also pre-war border explorations and intelligence probes. You can write a lot of words just about anything. Suddenly a large army comes to fight head-on. It is a bit strange. In short, in order to let the protagonist go to the battlefield, or in order to promote the development of the plot, the arrangement is too rigid Plot The pace can be slowed down, and you can write about the changes in the protagonist's mental state and plans for the future. Of course, you can't write too much of this kind of thing Also, add some description of the environment appropriately, so that it will be more immersive and not too obvious. In the previous chapters, a plot can be completed with a few dialogues and a few declarative sentences.

It has no special features at all. It's just plain and straightforward. Why don't you say something about the readers' feelings of the bookstore? You just give the result of the opening process without polishing it.

? ? ? Why is there only one chapter left? ? 😆😆

After reading Chapter 5, I just want to say, has the author really watched Naruto seriously? The characters and time in the plot are all messed up

The name is wrong! There is a bookstore at the beginning. I won't mention it later. Your system is not the same as the bookstore!

It's obviously about transformation, but most of it is about the battle plot, which is boring! Especially the protagonist is a ninja, which feels like the biggest failure!

When I saw Jiraiya kneeling down, I instantly felt so embarrassed. Who would want to worship someone who has no reputation and no understanding as their elder brother? I knelt down and kowtowed when I first met her...

Scalp numbness. . . . Something,

My scalp is numb! Damn it! The Hatake family wields their swords from the palace...

This is a nonsense novel disguised as a bookstore.

Why is this? The protagonist and the system are completely background boards. The meaning of the system at the beginning is to change the world for the protagonist, but what the protagonist does in the future is completely background. You have even published Das Kapital, which is available in textbooks from primary school to university, but the protagonist is making soy sauce again. What is your main plot? Is it to develop the productivity revolution or what else? How to change the world? The current main line development has nothing to do with changing the world. It should be said that there is no main plot, right? I feel lost. 😰

After seeing more than 100 chapters where the protagonist practiced Rasengan and then couldn't change his form, I just gave up the book. For a person of such an old age, an elder and a principal, and living in a dangerous world of Hokage, he was busy all day long, scrambling for critical moments. Even if it was to survive safely, he should train himself. I didn't see any sense of urgency in the protagonist. All of them were just trying to work hard when the incident was coming. Overall, this book is not worth reading, and the protagonist himself does not deserve to be the protagonist.

As far as I know, Uchiha Kaoru died at the age of 25