Start Making Games from the Ninja World

The idea is very good, and the recently popular game behind-the-scenes mode plus Naruto, the meme is also good. It's just the writing that I really can't stand. Although the style is informal, the writing feels childish and messy from beginning to end.

It's a pity that the subject matter is good, but the author lacks control over his writing and is a bit uncontrollable. It is recommended that the outline and main plot of each volume be planned in advance. Come on, author✊

If it weren't for the name of this book written in the introduction of Bourne Shadow, I wouldn't read it at all. It's too addictive. I can't stand it after reading 30 chapters. I seriously doubt whether the author has been replaced. In fact, the two books are not the same author at all. The author of this book, can you take a good look at Naruto, learn Chinese, hone your writing, and try to figure out how people talk to each other, and then write this Naruto fanfic. Really poisonous

There is no need to brag about players Players beat the world on the basis that only they beat you and not you beat them, but in the final analysis it is still a technological crushing, similar to a country with intercontinental missiles beating a country with a feudal society. Under such a technical gap, any player facing him will be dead. I haven't seen the published chapter yet. How should I put it? It's quite creative but very boring, just like a propositional composition. I fell in love with the heroine because I needed a heroine. I joined the players because I needed a player element. The protagonist also has a strange personality and is a fake human being.

But if you update four times a day, don't damage your body. It will be bad if you stop updating.

Isn't anyone complaining about Hokage's own logical problems... For example, the Dust Release Original Realm Peeling Technique is several kilometers long and one or two meters wide. It has no macroscopic weight, which means that it can be as fast as the hand is waved, and it is at the molecular level (it has exactly the same effect as the Qiu Dao Jade, killing ashes together) Then the question is, who are Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara in front of this kind of existence? The Buddha/Complete Susanoo on the top dozens or hundreds of meters high? Regardless of the attack speed, damage range, destruction speed, and killing speed, it is not even 1/20... And it is completed in one second... And it is at the molecular level... It takes dozens of tops/susos to cause the same killing range... Also It can only cause physical/energy damage on a macro scale... There is really no logic. Unless the range of the Dust Release Original Realm Peeling Technique is weakened to a few meters or ten meters, otherwise the second generation Tsuchikage Wuzai in the Warring States Period would be a god. What's the matter with Senju Uchiha?

The protagonist of this type of book should not end up easily. Why does it feel like the protagonist kills every boss? Although there is a big gap, the game is just about defeating the boss. You kill the boss in the end this time, which is no fun at all.

To be honest, the ending of the previous book was not very satisfying. Shouldn't a man's dream be the stars and the sea? The world will be destroyed one day. Will the protagonist be able to survive and continue to pursue higher latitudes? This is a pragmatic pursuit. There is no objection to short-term comfort, but too long of comfort can corrode what you think is a strong mind. Okay, but that's okay, this is also my favorite game genre. The protagonist of this book is very stubborn. It is said that he can walk along the river all the year round without getting his shoes wet. In the future, it will be very good to use soul projection to synchronize control. After all, if the plane of Gaowu is invaded, if a player accidentally gets the kind of treasure that can bind the soul to travel through latitudes, and this player happens to be a ruthless character, then the protagonist has a chance of capsizing. Now that this measure is in place, players only have the lowest level of control, and the essence of what they gain actually belongs to the protagonist. In this way, the probability of capsizing is very low I hope that in this book, the mastermind behind the scenes will not give the protagonist too much emotional involvement. You can enjoy emotions, but don't be influenced by emotions. The essence is for yourself, don't put the cart before the horse, you own the world when you are alive, and loneliness is always given by yourself.

The subject matter and the plot at the beginning are good, but it's a pity that the quality of the whole book plummets from the moment you meet Maitreya. . . The protagonist has gone on the road of being a dog licker and being funny forever. Is this the boss behind the scenes? Is this a small hanging wire?

As an old bookworm, I think this is one of the few books that I can read. Those who say that licking a dog is embarrassing may actually be embarrassed even talking to a woman. In my opinion, the plot and story currently account for two-thirds, and the dog food of Maitreya and the two accounts for one-third. The logic of this book is reasonable, but it is not a dark and selfish style. I ask for this and that. Please, can the protagonist's character be just like that? If you only like to watch the Get Out series, you should get out as soon as you read the first chapter.

Watching the protagonist enjoying himself crazily, I was speechless. . The most amazing thing is that in this book, people are madly complaining about others, but they never thought that they were being shot madly.

Well, I have a weak question: I am the only one who feels that the hang-up is too high, has it affected the sense of substitution? The immortal magic that few people in the world have learned is almost in vain. The resurrection of the fourth natural disaster is a big mistake, but it also comes with 100% unlimited (pseudo) resurrection in place. Cannot be sealed, cannot be imprisoned, cannot be killed, and after killing once, the status will be full and returned to the original place almost instantly... In this case, even a few hundred people can overwhelm the ninja world, right? (Without the participation of the Otsutsuki family)

It doesn't work anymore. The more I write, the worse it gets. Especially when it comes to the length of Pirates, I feel that all three views are distorted. Even if this book is not officially 404'd, it will be 404'd in the hearts of many readers.

I feel that the power system of the Naruto world has collapsed. The Rasengan Flying Thunder God Realm has been stripped down to a bargain price, but the players are still immortal. Minato controls the battlefield with the Rasengan + Flying Thunder God. Will the average golden flash per player in this period of time? In addition, players like to cause trouble. If the plot behind this is not broken, it is completely forced by the author to not collapse. It's really a pity. It was originally a creative book, but the power system is completely broken. I don't know if the author has played too few games or what. Forget about the Rasengan, can anyone exchange Flying Thunder God and Original Realm Stripping at will? Players are immortal. As long as they commit suicide to the original realm stripping (Flying Thunder God sticks to their face and then the original world peeling off), who can't beat it? Players have a high degree of freedom. What should I do with the plot arrangements later?

It started so well, but later on I lost everything. Just like the previous reader said, while describing the emotions of the so-called aboriginal people, at the same time allowing players to roam around without any emotion and unscrupulously, putting the two on opposite sides will only make it uncomfortable to watch. From a certain perspective, players in the early stage are in the righteous camp, and in the later stage they are in the evil camp. The main reason is that there is no penalty for the player's resurrection, there is no time limit, and you can live immediately after death, which makes the viewing experience very poor. It's normal to not be able to defeat the boss when playing a game. It's also normal to clear the level a few times. But if you're invincible from the beginning and push through it all the way, it becomes unwatchable.

Fire Dragon Enters the Trap. To be honest, it's not unreasonable that the results of the next few books you opened were not good. There is a huge gap between them and Fire Dragon.

It's a bit poisonous for players to kill people at will. While describing the feelings of the aborigines, it allows players to follow their mood**

What kind of readers does this book introduction attract? Naruto, ninja, players, joy, development and management. As a result, the author was so proud of himself that he looked like a ninja and cut off the seal at the beginning. It's the player who sees it, but the protagonist ends up playing it himself. It seems that the reader takes on the role of the protagonist to develop and manage the game, but the result is that the writing is deliberately messed up and the construction is messed up. It's a joy to watch, but it will get boring if there are too many jokes. The protagonist becomes more greasy after a long time, and there is no sense of accomplishment at all. Maybe I wrote the book to be disgusting on purpose.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the biggest failure is that the cost of player resurrection is too low. The setting is unreasonable and does not take into account the laws of the world at all! The Lord God is powerful in the Lord God's space, and in other worlds he must follow the laws of that world!

Can we stop talking? Readers are about to lose their patience. Where is the game that was promised? How about just being the mastermind behind Naruto? The writing is disappointing, it's always disappointing, and Quan Ding is about to give up!

The book itself is good, and the setting is okay, but the player's power is greatly expanded. And no one doubts the authenticity of the world. It is a failure that players keep dying but there is no punishment. In this way, there is no BOSS that cannot be defeated due to unlimited consumption. Overall not bad. Chapter one hundred and seventy has been read so far.

It's a disgusting comparison among players. I suggest you take a look at "I Am a Dog Planner". The same theme, but a completely different imagination.

Is this book a eunuch? The author should continue writing pirate fan fiction. Your last book, One Piece, was excellent.

The author can make death punishable! Since the game is so real, why don't you feel pain? Can be changed to debuggable!