Witcher of the Heavens

It's time to give up, the two masters will fight, don't waste your time and energy, just start a new book.

The idea is good, but I just want to complain. The author's understanding of the original characters should be different from what I understand, and after reading about 20 chapters, it really looks like the two protagonists. I am a bit confused about how Chen Chong warms Irene's heart. It feels like reading a script. Maybe it would be better to write the first scene more concisely and describe the protagonist more. Also, the protagonist of the novel has some dialects when talking to his friends. , The feeling is completely different from watching TV and listening to dialects. For example, on TV, I heard the general meaning and I thought it was quite interesting. Reading it from the book felt a bit awkward and I couldn't understand it. The author's writing was a bit detailed, just like the wife of the second brother, Kailin. If I hadn't gone back and looked for it and saw the words "second brother and second sister-in-law", I thought I had missed a chapter. Finally, come on, author,

I was discouraged at the beginning, but it was boring and depressing at the beginning. I couldn't even figure out who the protagonist was.

Just like the title, I have a saved manuscript and an outline, so you can rest assured to work on it? Go! 😬

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Dual protagonists. Author, please revise it.

After reading several chapters, do you think I understand?

The idea is good, but the word feels confusing

The dual protagonists, especially the dual protagonists, are not good... Newcomer, new book... Brother, it's good to want to write a book, but if you do it like this, it will only dampen your enthusiasm for writing.

What should I say? The two protagonists you wrote were a mistake. They were too discouraging. Just one male protagonist is enough. I always feel uncomfortable looking at you. Go away.

I can't understand what's written and I'm trying to save my anger. It's Chen Chong's way of looking at a chicken.

What do you say? I hope the title of the book is a bit exciting. The introduction is good. Is it placed on two pillars? Goodbye.

This is a warning at the beginning. It unfolds too slowly and cannot capture the reader's heart.

The writing is fine. . It's just that I hope Cheng Chong will meet a few women who betray him in the future. . Let him remember. In this way, I feel that he will definitely die. . He died miserably. .

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The writing is too confusing. I can't remember the foreigner's name. How can I organize it?

Who is the protagonist? Can't understand at first

Come on, author, your writing is very good. Don't be affected by trolls and trolls. Your story is wonderful, come on! !

What a great idea to have two time-travelers and one protagonist

It looks wonderful and interesting, and I recommend it to you, but the author should not abuse the heroine too much. We true fans will be very sad and feel sorry for the heroine.

Damn, why two protagonists? If this type of writing is not good, it will be very boring! I guess this author is a loser.