The Most Powerful Middleman in the World

Sorry, I really can't watch it anymore. It's so uncomfortable to put a hat on the protagonist 🪖. The latest chapter is even more speechless. Wu Yazi was not surprised at all when he saw Wang Yuyan! She obviously has the same appearance as his wife! He actually treated her as a stranger! Slipped away

There is no main line. After reading so many chapters, I can't see the protagonist's plan. The author has always emphasized that he is just a middleman. The protagonist has his own mission when he travels to the main world, but why does the protagonist become a middleman? Improve yourself? The strength of the protagonist has never been made clear, and he has not developed his own power. There is no limit on taking orders, so the current speed of taking orders is too slow. These people, Qin Shihuang, have always been the core. . . . . . .

The first part is okay, but to be honest, I don't understand the arrangement of the heroine, and I don't want to read it. This review will just be regarded as a trace left by a reader.

There are a lot of people saying that it's poisonous or something, it's just a book to read, there's so much bullshit, no one is forcing me to watch it if I don't want to, can I just watch it quietly?

The latest plot is based on the episode of Soul Ferryman and Weaver Girl, right?

I think it would be better to slow down the progress. For example, Great Qin can write one or two hundred chapters step by step. After all, it is too fast to step from feudalism to the interstellar era. Can the people of Great Qin bear it? There is a lot of content to write, such as exploring the universe or starting a war with unknown creatures in the universe. Finally, we can show their strength from the perspective of the lowest civilians of the three parties, or use time travelers to show it. The Salvation Army extra in the fantasy world is good. Otherwise, if the progress is too fast, it will be stuck in the later four or five hundred chapters, and the description will not be in place.

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How many reviews😁😁

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The subject matter is good and so is the writing style.

The author still knows too little about mysticism...

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First of all, the idea is okay, neither novel nor outdated. The author probably wants to set up a neutral protagonist and promote the plot through the selected people in each world. The main world that has been complained about as the most poisonous point. To put it another way, there is no problem with this establishment. But why it is said to be poisonous, you will actually find out if you read the original text carefully. Poison plotted against the heroine from Ye Xiaotian. When the heroine was embarrassed, the hero took the initiative to save the situation. In fact, logically speaking, there is no problem with this. But the point is, it's too blunt. First of all, the male and female protagonists got married when they first met, and there was no communication until the poisonous point began. There are too few emotional lines, so it's very stiff. This makes many readers feel inconsistent. Secondly, when the protagonist was rescuing the scene, the author kept emphasizing that the protagonist was a very protective person, which was also very blunt. Because there was no portrayal of this character in the early stage. To put it simply, the character is not strong enough, just like Huang Xiaoming, the character is not overbearing enough. See the latest chapter. There is nothing wrong with the sub-world. I also like this kind of neutral and melon-eating protagonist. It is also good to watch the activities of people in various sub-worlds. The protagonist's strength has not improved much? It depends on the person. I personally think this is not a big problem, as long as the author controls the plot well so that the problems encountered by the protagonist can be solved logically. Of course, some readers feel a little uneasy if the protagonist does not have much strength. This is understandable, after all, not many people like the plot of abusing the protagonist. Another little suggestion: ①The chapters in the main world can be appropriately reduced, and unnecessary things can be omitted. ② The main world should have a sense of mystery, but it should not be so mysterious that readers are confused. ③I think the emotional lines between men and women in the main world can be more delicate. The current emotional scenes are too childish. It just feels like there is no emotion and it is too stiff. ④ It is recommended to add a few more details to the protagonist's character portrayal, and use a small number of chapters to describe it. This requires readers to understand it themselves rather than write it out directly. This feels like an imposed persona. Now I don't even know what the male protagonist's character is. My sense of reading is: Neutral → Neutral + Protecting shortcomings → Neutral + Protecting shortcomings + Feelings → Neutral + Protecting shortcomings + Funny. It feels quite messy. It's late at night, I'm blind🐔⑧ writing, the author you are also blind🐔⑧, just read it. . . ⊙⊙ Finally, friendliness, communication

Let me prepare you mentally. In Chapter 131, I will give away ten thousand yuan to women. If you dare to disgust readers before it is put on the shelves, I will not give you a single starting point coin.

It feels like the author may have set the outline, but no matter how far you set it in the early stage, the readers will run away. Who can read your later stage? Really, at least half of the people who left the main world because of this book

It's amazing. The heroine was sucked by the people of the city for three years. After the blood was sucked, the blood was sucked for half a year. After giving birth to the child, the cycle continued endlessly. There are really endless generations of descendants.

The words of an old bookworm who has been reading for 12 years say that although the early results of this book are not good now, as long as the author keeps up the current pace, it will definitely become popular in the later period. The strongest shop owner was also like this at the time. No one read it in the early stage, but it became popular in the later stage. From the current point of view, this book has no shortcomings. If it is written at the current level, it will not be called a great god in the later stage, but it will still be possible for a minor god. The author said that You must grasp the key point of your book. You are a middleman. You should write more about the world. Of course, you can live in the world appropriately and show off. Author, the subject matter of your book is very good. No one has written this kind of book at present. Although it also belongs to the transaction category of the world, the others are just opening a store. You are a middleman. No one has written it yet. Write well and make it popular. The important thing is to persist.

The ancients said: In ancient times, there was a god named Xiu'er. It can summon the world and do anything. He has all the many artifacts. In ancient times, there were gold hoops that could be used to pick teeth. The jade seal passed down from the country can be used to smash walnuts. Qinglong Yanyue knife can be used to peel apples. Nine-tooth nail rake, can be used for comb parting. Tightening charm, can be used as a dog necklace. Nowadays there are telephone poles, and people can sit on the wires and bounce the east wind for themselves. ..…………………… `\….\¯`\..... .././…/…./…./.|_…_|.\….\….\…\.. (.(….(….(…./.).. )..(..(.\….)….)….).). .\…………….\/../…..\…\/………../.. ..\…………….. /……..\…………………/..... …\…………… (………….)………………./……

This part of the goddess is really sexy, and she looks exactly the same? Are you trying to find comfort because you were cheated on?

Rewarded! You know what I mean?

How did such a rubbish book get 20,000 recommendations? People who recommend reading books are so perverted. They like to read thousands of people.

Sharp! Sharp! I saw a woman with a face like the heroine being sucked out of blood by a man in the city. Give birth to a boy, then suck blood, and then let the boys take turns, give birth to a girl, and the men take turns having sex with the girl, and finally give the Virgin a smile😊. My God is poisoned to death, Goddess, even a god without magic power, blood is so easy to suck? ? ? ? ?

The writing is quite novel and interesting. But I have to say that there are a few things that are very poisonous. 1. Forcibly marrying a wife is a fake marriage. Then there are a bunch of villains plotting against the fake wife, and the protagonist runs to save her. Can you give the protagonist another reason to find a villain? Obviously there is a conspiracy between his third uncle and the Jiang family. Why not just have a showdown with the heroine and see if she is really willing to be with him or continue like this. If it succeeds, just take the heroine to change the map. Anyway, there is nothing to learn in this academy. It is better to hide in the dark and intercept Hu Yetian's opportunity. The real heroine will be happy. If it fails, just get rid of this mocking fake heroine to save trouble. 2. The protagonist takes the commission and collects it manually, which makes no sense. 3. The protagonist is so bad, why doesn't he improve himself quickly? It's unreliable to rely on angels to protect you. Zhetian, there are powerful people in the local world. The protagonist can completely publish his own needs and replace all the resources on hand with things that can improve himself.

I think I could bear it when I was watching Mo Hei. Your gift of thousands of women to women is really a new level of greenness 🥵 and you died of poison.

I came here because of the reputation. I heard that the heroine has been fucked by hundreds of thousands of people, and the cycle continues endlessly in the small world.

The latest chapter is a bit disgusting. If you kill me, you will kill me. Will the heavens be dissatisfied? Whatever you do is their fault, and the system is also rubbish. If someone else makes such a mistake, sooner or later the so-called heavens will ride on their head. If you ask me, I should scare the monkeys and tell those heavens that it's okay to do business honestly. If you start trouble, don't blame me for being cruel.

Damn it, this protagonist has never practiced cultivation. He has such good conditions. I have read 60 chapters. He is still an ordinary person and feels good about himself. He is not afraid of being killed. I feel that the protagonist is just an idiot.

This shit plot reminds me of the plot of a harem novel, where the protagonist gives countless clones of the heroine to multiple friends

This book has a good idea. I would like to give you some personal opinions. (The author may not be able to see it) The idea of ​​​​the middlemen in the heavens is a good one. In fact, if a middleman grows from small to large, there will be a small story of each transaction in the middle. The development targets are from the mortal plane to the high martial plane, from little people to big people. Writing in this way can increase the word count and produce higher quality, which will eventually lead to a magical book! Readers can look forward to the next transaction object, appreciate each story, or the fate of the characters that have been changed. ps I'm not saying that this book is not good. On the contrary, it's because it's pretty good. So I hope the author can be better. As a reader, I hope to encourage each other with the author. You write good books and I read good books!