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I look for this kind of system flow in male videos. What I see is the imagination and the process of the male protagonist using the system to grow. If I want to watch the male protagonist pick up girls, I can just read romance novels or alphabet novels. Why are you reading this? All the women who have appeared so far are very annoying. As a woman, I can't understand how their heads grow. We have known each other for less than a day. I get up and open the door to cook for you while others are closing the door and sleeping? Do you still have to sleep in someone else's bed and wear the man's clothes? I eat and drink here every day, and the lovelorn me is also drunk. The internet celebrity almost took off all of her clothes just to measure her weight change. When you wear clothes to eat, your clothes will still weigh two kilograms more than when you didn't eat! Sticking on like brown candy, I almost lost myself, all I can say is that I can change anything for you. The male protagonist's attitude is also speechless, and he just lets nature take its course? Only a ghost can believe this. If you don't have the idea of ​​picking up girls, you can climb a tree. A scumbag shouldn't pretend to be a straight man.

To be honest, all the awkwardness in the early stage can be tolerated, after all, it doesn't take up much space, but starting from around chapter 70, it seems that the author wants to confirm the identity of Lin Jiangxue as the heroine, and the plot about her begins to increase sharply. However, the author needs to know your level of female description. I feel that Lin Jiangxue is the heroine Mary Sue in the author's pen. All kinds of magical descriptions are pasted on her, which makes me feel a little sick. To be honest, you are not suitable for the author. When it comes to describing women, let alone the relationship between men and women, it would be much better if you wrote a novel with a single female protagonist or even no female protagonist. After all, the core of this book is to get a label. If you want to enrich the plot, you must rely on the stories of restaurant customers. It is much better to think about touching, bizarre, and random stories than to write ambiguous stories. Besides, whether it writes about women does not actually have much impact. So many books without female protagonists are also successful?

I was persuaded to quit after chapter 18, it was poisoned to death 😓😓 I couldn't stand it at all. The protagonist is a dog-licking and wretched man. Whatever he is casual and free and easy is all on the surface, and the wretched man on the inside is like a dog seeing a bone. He can't walk when he sees a woman. It's so disgusting. Bitch, b*tch.

To be honest, I was a little confused when I read the chapter about ambiguity and the protagonist's "casual" attitude towards relationships. I don't think such words are appropriate to use in relation to this matter. This will cause some people to leave based on it. Of course, you have to admit that this is a pretty good book. The important thing is that you read it in a heart-wrenching mood. This book can't actually be considered a failure. It just contains two chapters of exciting stories from time to time. Author, don't think, say or do it, otherwise this book will be pitiful. Looking forward to the next article🙂

The early stage was good, I thought it was fairy grass, and I was very happy, but after the 20th or 30th chapter, I couldn't stand it anymore. There was no fireworks at all, and it was completely different from what I imagined. It was okay. The main characters were female characters. They were written like romances, and they didn't look like women in reality at all. None of them are normal. The comments section all say that the female character is a failure. Me too. The poisonous points are okay, but there are too many flaws to mention. There are many pictures about women, but the writing is not good. The protagonist is too pretentious, and the writing of women is too deliberate. Hey, it's a pity. Looking at the previous chapter, it's still okay. As for the grass jelly, there are too many slanderous words, and it's not interesting to read too many slanderous words. The events are listed one by one, and it is clearly stated to be leisurely, but it does not give readers a buffer time at all. It looks so tiring. I am still busy all day long for the label. Of course, the most important thing is the main line. The lack of clarity and the female characters are too annoying to watch. After saying so much, I still hate iron and steel. It feels very pity to me. To be honest, just looking at the front is really like grass to me. The author is like oil. I think I just wrote (canteen) (label) and (daily life). I am really busy.

The book is a good book, and the subject matter is good. But until I saw the first few chapters that were released today, I really couldn't stand the constant emergence of female protagonists and supporting characters, one after another surrendering themselves to the flames, and the protagonist was constantly ambiguous. I couldn't help but come and complain! But author, please keep writing. Your writing is quite good, but it's just not to my liking.

A bunch of women are too poisonous. The woman I had known for two days went directly to the bedroom and said she wanted to eat and drink together. I just laughed 😊

One thing I want to say is that the author's writing is actually quite good, but what I feel most uncomfortable with is the handling of the relationship between several women and the protagonist. You're hanging on like this, neither refusing nor accepting. It feels very cheating. Of course, it's best not to show up again with girls.

Having more heroines and supporting characters is not a problem. The key is that the theme and style of the article cannot be shaken. I wrote about three girls in the early stage, and I was ready to accept the harem setting, and then when Lin came, they all gave up? ? ? Become a Mary Sue. Overall, it seems that the male protagonist is just a labeling machine, his true character is cold and ruthless, and there is no Jill. The advanced tasks are even more annoying, and the free system becomes an arrangement. Finally, urban writing without driving has no soul.

The idea is quite good, but your label is too complicated. A story for each label will be very bloated, and there are too many roles for women. Although I don't know where you learned how to please readers. But to me, the plot looks the same as the medium-coded novels from ten years ago, and the plot is not attractive. What a pity the idea of ​​​​starting

The author seems to be confused recently, and the rhythm is messed up. I would like to give you some suggestions and suggestions, but I feel that I have not hit the point. First of all, whether it's the harem or the heroine, it doesn't matter how weird the writing is, it's not the fundamental reason. The new things written are quite good, and they are exactly what the readers think. Are you not bored if you read what you have already read? Secondly, let me talk about what I think is the fundamental problem of this book. Next, I will quote an article from Zhihu about online novels, Malosian hierarchy of needs theory, and the time-frequency domain analogy of Fourier transform. Because it is very long, I will attach it to the comments below. Let's get to the point: First, according to the hierarchy of needs theory, it is divided into five types: physiological needs, safety needs, social needs, esteem needs, and self-actualization needs from low to high. The lower these five needs are, the higher their frequency should be, and none of them must be lacking. After the author wrote the character of Saitama, he directly blocked the security requirements and lost one of his five legs. The reaction in the reader's mind is an invincible sense of nothingness. The author's ability suggests rewriting, otherwise the book will be useless. Secondly, due to the Queen's female supporting role, the need for respect has not been met, so the readers' comments are full of negative comments about Lin Jiangxue. It's not that the role of the queen cannot be written, but other pretentious plots are needed to satisfy the need for respect. For the specific frequency, the author can read the article I attached. Third, it's Saitama's fault. The protagonist's need for self-realization is gone, because essentially any of his self-realization needs have come to an end. It's just that the author didn't dare to write it. Readers will naturally get angry if this is neither better nor worse. I hope the author will remember this lesson and not use invincibility in places other than the ending to disgust people. Do you think you dare to use it? To sum up, the protagonist is left with only physical and social needs. He has lost three of his five legs and is extremely disabled. This is why this book gives readers a sense of decline. The above, end. Attached are the demand map and frequency map.

I personally feel that the author wrote this book well, but I personally found it uninteresting after reading it. I feel that the author is moving towards urban fantasy novels. Is Pig's Knuckle going to become Superman? The following tag abilities are too buggy, and it's a pity to abandon them as they are a bit tasteless.

First of all, I feel that the author is a little off topic. This book is positioned as urban literature, but the author labels it as a time traveler. I feel very unhappy. Secondly, I feel that the protagonist in the author's writing is a bit of a stallion, so let alone a stallion. The key is that the author's writing power is not strong enough and he cannot write a feeling. Finally, the idea of ​​this book is also good. Come on! Stop being a eunuch. Awesome! ! !

Come on, the plot and fine brushwork are both good, keep paying attention

I saw the first two chapters released, but unfortunately, goodbye

I like the heroine Lin Jiangxue very much. The writing is pretty good for now. I hope I can write the style of a great heroine instead of being a bitch. Good luck, author! (๑`･ᴗ･´๑)

How to put it? It should be said that one style has appeared in the middle period, and then the extraordinary appeared later, and it should have turned into another different style. It is not as good as before, more or less OK. Before, it should be regarded as the peak of urban ordinary people, and later it should be extraordinary, urban superpowers.

Just read it, the author's technique is very strange, I have saved it

Come here and squirt whatever you want.

Don't be a poor eunuch. You still have 2 yuan in your bank card. Come on.

I saw this book today and it made my eyes light up. The setting is also relatively novel, and I think the author is really great. I felt really comfortable reading the first 20 or 30 chapters, but when Lin Jiangxue reappeared, I started to feel something was wrong (~_~;), and then the three heroines (who felt like passers-by now) disappeared. Could it be that so many interactive plots (and the club...) Before were just to highlight the protagonist's personality. When it comes to the protagonist's relationship, I feel that it's no longer just a matter of chance. Recently, I feel that the author is actively rescuing the story from one side (but now it's no longer the case that the protagonist can be cool and come back). Another thing is the like value, which feels a bit broken. It's only chapter 117 and the like value has exceeded 10 million. We need to hold on steady. Also, has the protagonist's cheating been overdone lately? I have been reading novels for almost 10 years, and I know that there is a difference between the author's writing and the readers' reading. Sometimes, after the author has finished writing, he will read it and there will be no poison in it. As soon as it is published, readers will say it is very poisonous. We can also understand this. After all, the author's writing and our reading will have different mentalities. Finally, I wish the author a great boost and wish this book great success.

Damn, the quality of this book is surprisingly good 😰 It's easy to read in one sitting, it's smooth and the reading experience is good. I look forward to the follow-up. More than 10 years ago, Lao Bai passed by.

It's a pretty leisurely flow, but Liu Qianqian is so familiar that it's off-putting. This plot is not good! The main reason is that she only met the protagonist for the second time. The first time the protagonist asked her to try a new dish to thank her for curing the cat. This was reasonable. But the second time they met, she took her best friend to the protagonist's shop at noon before it opened and asked for a free sample. Not only that, she also had to let her best friend sleep in the protagonist's bedroom and living room. Then she slept with her best friend and packed food to take away after waking up. If she has known the protagonist for at least half a month or interacted with the protagonist at least five times, these behaviors are okay, but the problem is that she has only known the protagonist for half a day, and disturbs the protagonist who opens the shop early in the morning to eat during the day. She comes to eat and masturbate for free for the second time, forcibly asks to enter the protagonist's bedroom, and then packs food naturally, eating the protagonist's big pig's hooves in one mouthful. These behaviors are too much and disgusting! I hope she will come out less often in the future! But that girl who is so round and nice is a cute and good girl who makes people feel comfortable!

I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs anymore. I am relatively poor, so this is a small reward. I hope the author can stick to it.

How interesting would it be if everyone's starting name was a label?

The author's setting is probably based on a pornographic novel. There is a pornographic novel that labels people and does whatever they want.

I don't care, I want to cum, I don't care, I want to cum,

Unexpected? 🤭

I was disgusted when I saw the plot in the spirit world. I was beaten by one of my own derivatives, and the controlled system couldn't be used. Women were controlled one by one in front of me, and the protagonist couldn't do anything about it. Didn't I say before that this kind of plot doesn't exist? Are they all under the control of the protagonist? So what's going on?

I hope there won't be any more eunuchs. It's okay to change them slowly. I don't want any more eunuchs.