What Do I Need from Your System?

I have to admit that the writing of this book is indeed a bit crude... But I still think this book is worth reading. The plot is a bit throwback to ancient times, but it creates a fairy atmosphere that is very rare in current fairy novels. Currently I have read about 90 chapters. The author mentioned that the three main plots are the "three fires", and he has to admit that the conception of these three plots is very realistic, but in the complete structure of the plot, the advancement of the plot is a bit hasty. All the "cultivation growth" mentioned by the author in the article are summarized in a few simple sentences, and he does not use any too specific text to describe the process of cultivation. I admit that this way of writing won my favor, but there are some key points such as the plot of "the four people meet and make friends" which is too short and slightly bleak. At least I didn't leave a deep impression on me when I read it briefly. Because according to the background of the main plot line of the first two rhythm points, although Dazhu, who is still in the "Dark Jungle", has a "merit" judging mechanism, it seems too easy to believe outsiders. Although it is understandable, for readers, such a change in thinking is too hard. But this bleak plot is related to the plot that directly promotes the third major rhythm point - "The Destruction of the Hun Dan". Well... It always feels bad to feel a little missing. This makes me sad. Another very interesting point - in the recent plot, although Master Dazhu has been in this world for almost twenty years, he still describes the Guiyuan Sect he saw with the eyes of a newbie in the world. It's hard for me to say whether this is good or bad, because the difference in personal thinking is acceptable in my opinion, but when I read this, it was obvious that I jumped out of this thinking. It is inevitable that more readers will have more ideas. It can be seen that the author does not have much experience in writing online articles, but he can write such a work and try to impress readers with the story and plot in the article. Although the writing method is more than ten years ago, the author's story is still worth continuing to write, and he hopes to write it more "exquisitely". Please come on, author!

I don't know whether the kindness you wrote is lacking or not. How can there be so many kind-hearted people in cultivation? They sacrifice themselves for others. It's really uncomfortable to watch Abandon the trap! ! !

To be honest, when I saw the name and introduction of this novel. I thought it was a kind of humorous novel about cultivating immortals, but in fact it is indeed the case. But more importantly, I saw some emotions in this novel. It feels very real. There are not many descriptions of cultivation experience in this novel. But his emotional descriptions and stories of the characters are very delicate. I have read a lot of novels about systematic cultivation of immortality. But this book gave me a different feeling. I dare not say that this way of writing is suitable for the public and is mainstream. But for an old bookworm like me, it is a different kind of special favorite, and the author's writing style is also good. Some places are very delicately written. Now that I have read about 100 chapters, I was deeply touched. In fact, it was the part where Xia Diyu returned to her hometown when she was about to die. The stories he told were very real and touching, which is hard to imagine in this cruel feudal environment of cultivating immortals. How did he still maintain that longing for life and loyalty as a human being? I can definitely say that this novel is difficult to excel in. But this novel should satisfy the appetite of a few people.

Come on, author, don't give up 🙂

Sometimes I'm smart, but sometimes I'm like a fool.

It is recommended not to interrupt updates. It is best to make modifications based on single updates. I stopped updating before, but now the editor doesn't recommend it to me anymore. I've been running naked for two weeks. Your data is much better than mine. Don't waste the opportunity.

Not bad, update soon! Five tickets will be given tomorrow

Old and ugly? I really like this unique pig's trotters and have saved them!

My intuition tells me that what requires the author to work hard is basically invested.

Okay, you have finally reached the right path of cultivating immortality.

Author, your book will suffer from the title. It is still very important to have a good title.

Let me go, is this too watery?

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