Cage of All Heavens

The force value of Fengyun is quite low After all, when Wuming did not have Mahayana, he could kill enemies with swords from thousands of miles away, but what you wrote here is a bit unsatisfactory The dragon in Fengyun is Tyrannosaurus Rex, and its name is Haotian, not Shenlong, but Tyrannosaurus Rex.

I don't want newcomers to write books that they always think they like, so readers will like them.

Why does it feel like the protagonist's temperament changes drastically as soon as he enters the dungeon? Why does the cautious logical thinking that he originally developed as a mechanic become chaotic? It feels like his character suddenly collapsed.

The same concept of the magic race's great time travel·The old fairy Victor has boundless mana 😓

Is there a Shennong? I can't stand Chapter 7 anymore.

The characters in the article are unclear, and some settings are completely illogical! A black man was directly a slave in ancient China. Would anyone teach him martial arts for no reason? Even if you are a modern person, you still have to pay when you go to a martial arts gym. What's more, in ancient times, these memories about inheritance, you think it is garbage on the side of the road, just pick it up. Does he know what acupoints are? Do you know what tendons are? Do you know what Dantian is? Can he learn it?

Name, which chapter of the name was changed?

Dark elves learn internal skills so quickly. Is this human body structure the same? Can language communication be used?

Toxic, what kind of drama is there to add an unknown little lolita to the Resident Evil chapter? Embarrassing or not, having that dark elf is enough for you. And I am so familiar with Resident Evil, because the protagonist is a time traveler. I know that, but his teammates are not. The protagonist is so skilled in entering the hive laser channel and the zombies' weaknesses and so on. Don't the teammates have anything to ask? You also told the little lolita and the dark elf to get points. You told the dark elf that it was okay. Why did you tell the little lolita? Just because she is the second generation of reincarnation? Cute? Just slip away, wait until someone comes to spray me 🥱

From what I've seen so far, it feels like the protagonist is relying on the protagonist's aura to lie all the way there.

The presence of this main god is too strong, so strong that it annoys the gods

Is this book so bad? The author of so many words has persisted, and I will give you two free recommendation tickets!

Let's talk about Pig's Knuckle's motivation to become a mechanic. This reason seems hard to accept: the first mechanic consumes too many resources. Poor people can't afford it. Secondly, as the author said, it requires too much knowledge and cannot be learned without immortality. Energy, precious metals, industrial foundations, mechanics, biology, materials science, mathematics, these knowledge cannot be mastered by those who have not been exposed to the extraordinary. This still hasn't entered the extraordinary realm. Once you enter the extraordinary realm, runes and the like will become even more important. As one of the extraordinary forces, the mechanic must at least have extraordinary abilities, meditation methods, and magic power. Then it relies on big forces and a complete set of industrial foundations, research institutes, and laboratories. Don't think that you can afford it if you have some imagination. Relatively speaking, warriors, mages, and superpowers are reliable in the early stage. The author himself has designed such a background. If the bloodline talent is extraordinary, then learning magic and superpowers must be talented. The result is that the path of the spellcaster is blocked and the path of the spellcaster is blocked, let alone the mechanic. If you can't take the path of a warrior, don't think about operating a mecha. This requires at least quick reactions, combat intuition, and quick operation.

The writing is pretty good, and there aren't many poisonous aspects. But I feel like I'm not very interested in it. Is it too much fun? Or is another supporting role stealing too much of the scene?

The protagonist Victor Lao Xian? Is the author thinking about reading this book? I forgot the specific name of the book.

It's a new author, the setting is okay, but the writing style is too awkward.

. . . Where did the author see that the Eastern system of cultivation does not pay attention to the body? The limited number of great gods gave up their original bodies for various reasons, but they also used treasures to recast their bodies. You said that the big guys reincarnated in various ways but they did not give up their original bodies. Some reincarnated with their thoughts, some reincarnated with their original bodies and cultivation, and some reincarnated with their souls, but the bodies were hidden by themselves or asked to be taken care of by friends.

Chapter 51 is not pleasing to the eye. What I was reading was a mix of various magic modifications, but you set it like this. You can refer to another book that is very similar to see why other people's scores are so good. Among them, Fengyun World is also written with your settings.