There Is a Galaxy in My Body

The most difficult thing about this kind of book is the change of mentality. I don't know if the author feels it, but all the protagonists of this type will lose their original intention and themselves after doing too much as gods. Then it collapsed

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you. If someone really gets the golden finger like the protagonist, that would be really nice to see. Unlike other protagonists, they have to work hard to obtain the system and become extraordinary. If they don't step into the extraordinary, they won't be able to sleep at night, and they won't give others any time to breathe. This is unacceptable. There are really lucky people in reality. I hope that he, like the protagonist, takes his time and doesn't rush. Wait for ordinary people. It would be best if everyone is on the same starting line.

This is the most stable of the several creation texts I have read recently. It is very good. Many creation texts are boring when it comes to the birth of civilization. This one is good.

Quite innovative! Why do you need to learn this and that? Big support for the author!

I like this type of book, it will be a hit once it is finished

The protagonist's character is flawed, and he is so funny that he is brainless and exaggerated! Can't we create a protagonist who is cold, ruthless, selfish, murderous, decisive, novice and brainless with an IQ above the line?

Among the several similar novels that I have read so far, this one is pretty good. Because there are extraordinary forces in the background, it is more reasonable to build a small world to develop extraordinary. I don't want to have another physical universe with a clearly set background, but it insists on developing extraordinary. I was also drunk after reading it.

If you want women, build a daughter country in a small world. You can play however you want in there. (Play through red, orange, yellow, green, blue, and purple)

This is the lowest creation god I have ever seen, bar none. As a creation god making money all day long, you might as well just write a hero. I couldn't stand it after reading the first few chapters. He makes money and picks up girls at one time. How *sexy is this creation god?

The writing is not good, and the protagonist has no idea what he is doing. To be honest, it would be more interesting to kill the protagonist, let the artificial intelligence work alone, then become the way of heaven, and finally transcend the way of heaven. Looking at the protagonist, it is not interesting at all, and he can't even pretend to be B. Speaking of planning, what did the protagonist plan? Everything is done by artificial intelligence, and the only thing the protagonist does is to answer yes or no.

I don't want women. I would like to say something to most authors who write about male protagonists. Don't write about female protagonists. It's not realistic. It can't be done without a woman. The female protagonists written in most novels will only make me feel like a flower vase.

This is the author's self-pleasure work. The author doesn't care at all whether readers enjoy reading it or not. He only cares about whether he enjoys writing it. Although I believe in Christianity, I don't read novels to review the Bible. If I want to read the Bible, I have the Old and New Testaments in my cabinet. If I want to read the myth of heaven, I can read other novels dedicated to heaven. Moreover, the main plot of this book is confusing. It is obviously a creation story, but it has to add an emotional drama. As a result, the heroine that the author wanted to write did not have much drama. I wanted to write about the main line of creation, but somehow it turned into making a game. Moreover, the game has never been officially launched, and then I inexplicably copied stories from the Bible. To sum up, this is the product of the author's own pleasure. It is very likely that there is no outline. It belongs to the kind of writing that comes to mind. I don't know what will happen next. I only persisted to more than 40 pieces, then gave up and disappeared.

Most of what a book focuses on is the character of the protagonist. It is impossible for a Genesis-style protagonist to be so stupid and lazy. As for having a heroine or something else, it is OK. If the protagonist is so stupid or stupid, just wait for you eunuch.

The protagonist in the early stage is too *slutty, and there is no need for a woman. As the God of Creation, what kind of woman does he need?

It is recommended to refer to low-dimensional games, that is the creation flow that is powerful and deep! You're just joking

It's extremely toxic, and the protagonist's mentality can't be changed at all. He always does some stupid and stupid things. I don't know if the author doesn't understand, or if he deliberately makes the protagonist not understand. Anyway, I gave up because I looked at him.

At the beginning, I tried to persuade her to quit. The female nurse was out of her mind. She spoke like a scumbag and had no professional qualities at all. Even if it was a joke, they were not very close to each other. Is it necessary to joke?

It's really poisonous. After reading Chapter 30, Creation only has a few cursory introductions at the beginning. I've been trying to mess with programmers, starting a company, running a company, or whatever. It's a lot of trouble to even fight with a broken programmer in a company. I haven't even seen it on the shelves yet, you are so stupid, how dare I ￣ ￣)σ? You might as well change your name to "I am the majority shareholder of the game company". What the hell, I haven't commented in a long time. It's really poisonous. It's forced to show off. It's nonsense. 😰😰😰😰😰[fn= 51]😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰

The emotional scenes... Don't look ordinary awkward... All kinds of clichés... It's so long-winded, I just skipped it after reading a little bit about it, just to make up the word count? Writing this brings the overall feeling down to a different level. Call it fantasy, you have all kinds of clichéd emotional dramas, call it romance, you come to a small world and prepare to be extraordinary... It's not that these two genres are not suitable to be put together... It's the author... It's that you are not suitable to write them together... It's already a niche... I feel... It will be over...

I wrote a lot at first, but later deleted them all. To be honest, I still like series of works such as "Lord God, Behind the Scenes", but these types of works are all fake and eunuch. I personally have several requirements for this type of works: 1. A complete "planting flowers first" power system; 2. Does not exist In a power system where multiple types coexist; 3. A supernatural being that does not exist, exist or develop due to "science and technology" reasons; 4. A golden finger that is not obtained due to experiments or observations of extraterrestrial civilizations These points are the most basic. I can only say that there are things in this work that I personally don't like): ●Aspect 1: Plot 1. The setting of taking off your pants and farting will cause consequences (there is something in the head, the person disappears and is monitored, and the person will disappear) 2. The plot of meeting the female character at the beginning (promptly provide contact information) 3. Embarrassing pretense (resigned, Lao Cai borrowed money) 4. Not low-key (eight million gold, per capita consumption of one thousand for food, "watching civilization CG" perfunctory dialogue, inviting the female character to dinner [although it is an AA system, but the dinner incident is the reason]) 5. All the above combined do not conform to "build walls high, accumulate food widely, and slowly become king". ●Aspect 2: Setting 1. Incomplete Supernatural (Scientific Extraordinary) 2. Looking at the front, I feel that there will be a non-oriental supernatural power system in the back (in my personal opinion, universality is nonsense, let alone reality. In imaginary situations, it is not "planting flowers first", which is problematic) 3. It is not a system of "planting flowers first", and the visibility of the work has dropped a lot. If it were a "universal system", the current setting would be too verbose, yes it is verbose (it has the level of confidence of "History ~ Qin Officials", "Science Fiction ~ Academic System", and "Comics ~ Full-time Hunter", I can accept it, otherwise it is just for "personality and personality"). 4. For the works of the main gods, it is better to be simple and rigorous.

I came to Lao Chuangshi, not to see Shenhao pick up girls. I see Adam, it's really poisonous. Since you want them to go out and live on their own, why not let them survive in the wild earlier, and let them kill each other. There are not many people in the first place. It's really poisonous. I have been writing for a long time and I don't know what the use is of doing this? At the very least, the most basic things must be passed on.

Is a programmer who is not even a supporting role worthy of being described in that way? Talents must be put to good use There are not even one million, but 990,000 buried talents in the world. He is not missing any one of them!

The protagonist is having fun alone? ? ?

I have some immature ideas. The salary description of the protagonist at the beginning is that the monthly salary is over 10,000 (perhaps a programmer or a planner). He has never eaten pork, and he should have seen pigs running. Logically speaking, the protagonist's ability should not be so bad, and he should have some skills. Otherwise, if they really have a system, they should choose someone who is really nb (the system is intelligent), and then the protagonist just keeps teasing him. Bi has always been brainless and left everything to the intelligence. I was wondering if the intelligence has any special conditions, that is, it must find a host, so it chose a protagonist with not very outstanding abilities. I think this should be a foreshadowing. The intelligence is so capable, I hope it can abandon the protagonist and work alone. In this case, this book will be amazing. I suggest the author consider it 😥

Thirty pounds of gold necklace, worn during the day, taken off at night to lock the dog🐶!

In fact, I think this kind of creation, let alone the heroine, is it handled well? A bad fan will go crazy. Even after handling it, I don't think it's of any use. Just say a few warm words in your spare time. If the heroine's role is expanded, there will definitely be a lot of chapters describing how the heroine is, and what's going on between the protagonist and the heroine? Then what kind of world can we create? This subject alone is really not suitable for a female protagonist. Of course there must be people who come and spray me for no reason. No reason at all. He came and said something like eunuch, gay, etc., And then ran away again. So this kind of person is very disgusting. Let's not talk about whether this type of thing is suitable or not. Even if you add the heroine, it won't be removed if you don't handle it well. Of course it was dropped. It belongs to the author. You asked the author to add the heroine, but he didn't write it well and you sprayed it there again. After spraying it, you ran away again! The next time the newcomers come, they will look at it and say, oh, thank Shennong, and then run away... Then why do you still read this category? Can't we just go see the city? I hate this kind of person the most.

Chapter 45 has been updated, but it has been blocked. We are working hard to release it as soon as possible.

A protagonist who has been tortured by life and beaten by society. A series of network anchors have a boastful speaking style. The system will directly distribute dozens of kilograms of gold casually. How can a family that owes hundreds of millions in gambling debts call the police and arrest people? He also works to pay off debts. It is extremely poisonous.

I feel like the emotional scenes are a bit strange. That, Lin Miao, and the two children. Whether it's Lin Miao inexplicably developing a crush on the protagonist (even though they've only met a few times), or the protagonist inexplicably developing a fatherly feeling towards his two children, it's a bit embarrassing.

Invest yourself emotionally, and then don't worry about this or that. You can play Genesis as a stand-alone game! Here we recruit talents who don't know what they are doing in this world.