Capture Strong Men from All over the World

Title: 6.5/10 Points (Originally I gave it 8 points, but after reading and playing, I felt that the title was also sensational, so I deducted points) At first glance, I knew it was Zhutianliu. The words "grasping the strong men" are very eye-catching. I am curious about what kind of story the author will tell. Introduction: 6/10 points Grasping, this is the first impression given by the introduction. Apart from knowing that the author wants to show off, there is no useful information in the introduction. Golden Chapter 3 18/20 points Chapter 1 Describes the character of the protagonist and has a strong sense of immersion. At the end, there is a conventional cliff fall operation. It is not known whether it is time travel or rebirth, leaving suspense. Chapter 2 It turns out that he has traveled through time, and Goldfinger appears, using gorgeous words to introduce Goldfinger's transformation of the protagonist. Chapter 3 Introduces the background of time travel. From the end, I don't know whether it is a shooting eagle or a divine eagle, leaving suspense. Storyline: 16/20 points. Plane of the Condor is well written. After the protagonist was transformed by the system, he went through Yang Guo's apprenticeship, took Li Mochou into the harem, rewrote the tragedy of Xiao Longnu being raped, the system appeared, returned to the earth, and then went to a world of cultivation. Advantages: 17/20 points 1. The writing is smooth, there are enough cool points, and the layout is good. I feel that the author is not a newbie, but a person with certain skills, who knows the routines of cool writing, and the reading experience is very good. 2. The whole text revolves around the protagonist, and the protagonist's character is clearly described. Insufficient: 16/20 points 1. The introduction and title feel irrelevant to the theme 2. The system is highly toxic. It seemed fine at first, but suddenly a system popped up and decisively affected subsequent reading. 3. The word count of Gongshui was copied, and the entire song "Laughing in the Red Dust" was actually copied. 4. The ending of Shendiao was a bit abrupt. Summary: The author is not a novice, his writing style is smooth, routine, and the jokes are very good. Through the comments, I learned that writing a book should revolve around the protagonist

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Finished the book Hahaha Looking at me, I couldn't stop writing it, but I was too lazy to read it.

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