Transport Emperor

Brother, I admire you. Do you know what you are writing? Read it yourself.

Shit, this novel is poisonous, I can't stand it anymore, slip away.

The whole article is full of nonsense, a lot of verbosity, and of no use at all. Just skip and read.

It's too difficult for me. Really, the author is just practicing his writing, and the novel is too confusing (>_<) Really, it's about the level of an average novice novel in about 10 years. The author just practiced first, and I slipped away first.

As the author, the protagonist you write is unclear. The protagonist's background is not explained clearly. There is also a point where the protagonist feels nondescript. It's not like the thinking of modern people is about the rebirth of people from other worlds. Nor is it.

. . Good. . I will come again.

All the bells and whistles. Can't go down anymore.

It feels very strenuous to read. I don't like it very much. I will put it on my bookshelf to read.

The logic is confusing, the writing route is not clear, and such a hard life at the beginning can make people have no desire to read on. I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 56. I'm really convinced. You wrote a little at the beginning to be reborn and then get a ring to pass on some knowledge. The rest of it is easy to write and can make sense. Alas...

Food recruits farmers I make a sneak attack (just sneak in/get close to it), what will be the result of the town's granary An analogy

Coming up with a name is so difficult! So I came here to ask readers for help. The only requirement is that it basically conforms to the style of the work. Names like salted duck eggs, raw eggs, thin claw eggs? I can't see, what I can't see, I can't see everything!