
Secrets of Taichu
太初秘闻
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 93k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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31Chapters
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I think the fighting scenes you wrote are pretty good and imaginative, but there's a problem. I've read three chapters and I don't know what the hell the Life Fire Powerhouse is. I think there is a bit of a lack of background explanation. Otherwise, after watching it for a long time, I would still be confused. I only know that the protagonist is fighting with others. Just like Dou Po or Dance of the World, only by explaining the level clearly can the readers know what level the protagonist is now.
Nice writing! Come on, come on, come on!
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Thank you for your review. It has been accepted. Come on, I am a newbie and I don't know how to review, but I feel that it is very meaningful. Come on, let's do it together.
It's very pertinent to say that the author's conception is clever, the plot is reasonably controlled, and it is full of immersion. It can be called a masterpiece! Come on! Take it!
04.11.02 Book Review
The book is actually finished! Some regrets. I would like to give you some immature suggestions for reference only. The use of periods and ellipses.
I wonder if the wind is particularly exciting today. Unknowingly, there is always a little moisture in the corners of my eyes. I wish you prosperity forever, my great motherland.