Unlimited Defense

The book is good. So far, it doesn't have any major drawbacks. It's just that it's easy to collapse in the later stages, or in the middle stages. And there are some errors in the data. Overall, the subject matter is good and there are not too many poisonous points. Don't think too much, this is still a good book. Make hay

I was attracted by the introduction at first, and then I was willing to continue reading because of some relatively acceptable tricks played by the author. But I still can't hold on anymore. I don't know why the story connection is so bad. No matter how exciting other places are, a relatively complete world cannot continue at all. To be honest, the idea is much better than that of a novice novel, but the story telling ability is not even up to that of an ordinary novice novel. Although I don't like the author's attitude, just be happy. In a similar work, the author of Lord of Mysteries is actually very close to your creativity on what constitutes storytelling. Practice writing without paying attention to details. Writing ten books is all in the stage of practicing writing. Come on, withdraw it, and wait for your next book.

I just want to know why the protagonist keeps playing. Around Chapter 400, there are crises all around him. Where does he go on vacation by pretending to be bad and deceiving everyone in the world? Why not improve your strength? According to the setting of this book, if you practice hard and get beaten, you should be invincible by now.

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I think it's okay. At least it's fine if you don't have to worry about it in your spare time and can just read it easily.

Both the protagonist and supporting roles are second-guessing, and the heroine is given for free.

After seeing the rave reviews in the comment section, I had some different thoughts: I personally like this book. I think the author really wants to express his thoughts through Chi. Such thoughts cannot be realized in our world, but they can be established in an imaginary world. This is not to say that the logic is completely self-consistent. There are flaws and poisonous points, and some clichéd plots also exist. However, when we are reading online articles, the online articles may not necessarily create a complete world. Maybe just a few people, a few complete people with their own character flaws, can form a set of stories. For this book, in fact, everything that is unreasonable that happens to Chi is reasonable, because he is unreasonable to this world. I like this book because it adds some gray and some complex human nature to the absolute black and white of normal cool writing, and conveys correct values ​​where possible. Some places make people laugh, some places make people complain, and some places make people move. I think that's enough. I don't expect to get a kind of sensory and spiritual experience from this book that "this is a sacred book, you can traverse it". It is just a kind of adjustment. At this point, the book is qualified. Readers with high standards can definitely think that this book is not good, because it is indeed not good enough. The first chapter is high and low in the early stages, and some of the plots in the later chapters are also slightly intellectual. But I have read very few books, so I think it is quite good. It is at least worth reading to let my middle school spirit shine again.

There is no anti-armor, it's boring to just get beaten.

In fact, the advantages of this book are also disadvantages, that is, not every character in the author's book, but most of the characters, have their own emotional stories and personalities, and they are very distinct. So why is it a disadvantage? It can't be said to be a shortcoming. The definition of this book is that the protagonist likes to watch the protagonist kill everyone. Many people may come here for this, but the content is still different from the cool novel. Therefore, the performance of this book is not very satisfactory and some people read pirated copies. . . Don't ask me how I know, I've become a good person.

Being invincible is not scary. What is scary is not using your own advantages. You read more about other readers' chicken soup, and then discard the golden fingers. I have seen this kind of operation a lot. Alas.

Let's talk about reading novels. I have been reading for more than ten years. Recently, I have gradually realized that each novel has its own outlook on life and attitude towards life. Some people may read books only for pleasure, pleasure, and pleasure. Apart from pleasure, they do not want to imitate the positive energy of the characters created by the author. The protagonist of this book is sunny, positive, and positive energy, which is worthy of being applied to himself. Come on, you and I will encourage each other😁

Is that the heroine? …? It feels like... A brother-control maniac? ? ? ?

It is recommended to give it every day, and you will give it when the monthly ticket comes. How about a cum? ? Although most of the books I follow are eunuchs that favor you.

I'm a little annoyed. The disciples of the sect don't seem to understand what the dignity of the strong is. The protagonist also puts his face on the ground and has others step on him. He is shameless and skinless.

After reading the novel as a whole, I will give you my opinion. First, from now on, this book does not have a clear main line. What is the main line? Is it an upgrade to fight monsters? Or is the status of the sect rising? Or sort out the emotional lines? So far the protagonist does not have a clear goal. It is undeniable that the first few chapters are indeed well written, but later on, because the main line is vague, I don't know what the protagonist is going to do or what to do, and various events come up all at once, such as sudden memories, sudden slaps in the face, etc. Secondly, in terms of character creation, it is very childish. A funny protagonist who inexplicably stirs up troubles to seek death, but sometimes is serious, such as the sect leader Chi Yuan, a superior, without any airs of a superior? Are you talking funny like ordinary people? Rushing to the Demonic Abyss Crack in Chiyuan, and then the scene changed, and the crack was immediately resolved? What about the details? At least give it a transition, right? Not even a transition? Is creating characters a piece of cake? Just hay, it's useless to talk about other aspects. After all, everyone has different opinions. Improvement: There must be a clear main line, and the character creation must be distinctive and not child's play.

Chapter 14: Persuading people to quit is full of shit.

Chapter 123 is too vicious. The protagonist beats a hundred of them. Not only does he not cultivate, but he also abolishes his cultivation and drives him out of the sect. It's really interesting. The protagonist can't beat them and still has to provoke them. Moreover, the Holy Mother wants to abolish your cultivation. You just want to beat him. Damn it. I really can't stand it.

It turned out that the best thing I wrote was the first chapter

After reading Chapter 30, let me explain a little bit. The first few chapters, I think, are pretty good-looking, fresh and refined. Completely different from those coquettish bitches outside. After reading a few more pictures, I feel that the author has too many routines and is too arrogant. I know the author wants to write a funny protagonist. But you forget that if you tease too much, you can easily become mentally retarded. Then the crowd started teasing him out of nowhere, but he didn't use any punches or kicks, so he relied on his body during the game. The protagonist floated before he even got up. Treating the elders of the sect to be fools opens the door to wisdom The author's writing style is quite good, but your grasp of the plot is not very good. In fact, I personally think that the author has written some books about leisurely farming. It looks better, you can refer to it. Nanshan Hidden Early stage, and Xinbai Snake Cultivation of Immortality, these two books.

Chapter 1: I thought I picked up a good book Chapter 2 turned into a routine and was still acceptable Chapter 3: The style suddenly changed and IQ dropped At the beginning of Chapter 4, the protagonist sacrificed his IQ to a normal person and retreated...

It's highly poisonous, so be careful before entering. You can barely see ten lines at a glance.

I have read 300 chapters, or listened to 300 chapters. If I really wanted to read it myself, I probably wouldn't have lasted that far. Anyway, there are various branch lines in the middle. The protagonist of the blockbuster movie is not online. I rushed to the college to open four or five branches and wrote 100 chapters. Is there a 1/3 where the main character appears in the middle? There was no climax in the whole process, but I thought Endless Defense was quite fun, but then the whole world came to ostracize me and forced me to leave. The mission failed and Endless Defense was sealed. Reading the comments later, it was even more confusing than this. Some of the foreshadowing plots seemed quite good, but after reading it, I found that this book is full of various foreshadowings and conspiracies. It is not a good book. Anyway, it is bland and a bit small. The author seems to write each character brilliantly, but because he pays too much attention to the excellence of each character, the protagonist himself is mediocre, and some can even suppress the protagonist. The whole story has a main plot, but it feels that the main plot does not follow the protagonist, but a bunch of various characters in the branch line forcing the protagonist to follow the main plot. In the end, it feels chaotic and cannot be read.

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How to put it this way, it's watchable but a little too toxic. The villain feels like he's been forcibly subdued. After living for so many years, whether he meets the protagonist or other people in the protagonist's group, he's like a fool and is being fooled around. And it feels like when the protagonist meets a woman, no matter how she treats the protagonist, for some inexplicable reasons, she erases all her own mistakes and laughs it off, giving the reader the feeling of a thief and a virgin licking a dog; while the man directly puts a malicious chain on her and kills first. Moreover, the combat power is a bit broken, and he always likes to forcibly create a passionate atmosphere. Many things are obviously decisive for the high-end combat power in the mid-term, but it is not enough without the protagonist. To forcibly increase the protagonist's combat power, we will not write this type of writing, so don't make the early rhythm so fast. The middle and late stages are hard water, which brings the entire rhythm and logic to collapse. It is too confusing, and the currency system is also quite useless. The economic sources of various sects are unsightly. The people in the protagonist's group treat the protagonist as if they are getting an advantage and acting like a good boy, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Also, are the positive leaders treating the protagonist a little too kindly? After being completely overpowered and yet still giving in, no matter how effective he is, it will only be in the middle and late stages, so just lick him hard. A long time ago, I couldn't stand the ones about Koi Amnesia, so I gave it up. Now that I think about it, I thought this one was pretty good, so I read it again, but it still felt quite poisonous. To be honest, even if you kill the girl to prove it in some aspects, don't engage in harem flirting with girls. Just treat the male and female supporting characters a little bit special. If it is too much, it will feel disgusting. Don't be in a situation where you don't have to bear responsibility for the mistakes made by ignorance, especially if you write it in a positive way. I sincerely hope that the IQ of the enemy I am writing is online, and does not give the feeling that the more I live, the more stupid I become, and my combat power is a little more normal. I cannot say that the logical relationship is 100% correct, but try not to be too different. This subject matter is really good, I hope it will be more normal in the future, please

I've read more than 300 chapters and it's a bit confusing. I'm looking forward to the next one.

I'm more curious. Will he go back immediately if he just catches the traitor? If you don't go there, I'll see how fun the protagonist is these days. I'll probably collapse when the sect leader comes back.

The author also forces to be funny in his chapter

Chapter 14, I can't hold on anymore, brothers

The character's personality is so bad, it's like a joke, it's poisonous

As long as I'm in a daze, I can think. As long as I'm thinking, I can't read this kind of mentally retarded book. It's too difficult for me and I have no books to read.