
The Collapsed Life That Started in Changkong City
从长空市开始的崩坏生活
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I'm here, I watched it, I couldn't stand it anymore, tears were fighting in my eyes, it's not that the writing was too good, it's that I finally woke up, (I only saw the part where Wendy broke out because of the protagonist, and she really couldn't help it) What did the protagonist say? I saw someone in the comment area mentioned it, paranoid, arrogant, in fact, you just need to say paranoid. What does paranoia mean? Stubborn, narrow-minded, misinterpret the good intentions of others, extremely distrustful of others, sensitive and suspicious, often on guard or nervous, have a high self-esteem, do not accept criticism, are sophistical, and easily irritable if they disagree. It's hard to imagine that the author's description techniques are so superb, and the character of a character really shines under his hands Hehe, from the moment the protagonist comes to this world, readers seem to have defined him as "Sudden collapse! Is it a big crisis? Or is it an opportunity?! The boy is about to embark on a journey of collapse!" But it's funny to say that this young man seemed to be in trouble, and made operations that exceeded the readers' lower limit again and again. At this time, someone came out and said, "What kind of operation is this? If it was like this... It wouldn't happen...". Then what? Naturally, what followed was a rebuttal: "What do you know? You traveled to... And you think you can do better than the protagonist? I think it's well written. This is how a normal person would deal with this kind of thing." ........., How can I complain? But I don't need to complain, these two sentences put together are already the best complaints. If you say that you are beyond your power, this plot is too high, and you really can't change this tragedy, then I have nothing to say, but you... Took the initiative to participate in this plot. Although it is difficult, because this part of the previous life can be solved through language, it is okay to handle it, but the protagonist... Is terrible! The attitude of "It's none of my business? The plot can continue without me anyway", please! You took the initiative to participate in this matter. How can you still make such a gesture at this time? When the incident ended, the plot changed due to the presence of the protagonist as a spoiler, resulting in greater casualties than before. The protagonist was angrily and cursed the person who made the matter serious... It was indeed a bit... A clown? I didn't speak so cryptically anymore. I pretended to be serious and showed some of my post-war helplessness and fatigue on my face (convinced) and then appeared next to my former partner and added a wry smile, "Oh, what's wrong with him? Did something happen?" Normal people would think so. This should also be in line with the author's wishes, but what does it look like, "Hitamamaru" Behind the wall..., Only she knows..., Buried deep in my heart." Hahahahahaha, I could still stand it when this scene first appeared, but when it appeared again later, I really laughed, it was so funny, hahaha. Although the previous relationship was handled well, I really can't appreciate the emphasis on it later. The hypocrisy is really outrageous, Kiana, Mei Bronya can't see it at all? I won't talk about the tragedy that happened when the protagonist went on a mission for the first time. It's too irritating, but it also squeezes out the value of the character. I will talk about the Wendy chapter that made me unable to stop, from the initial persuasion, to the counter-intrusion, to Rebecca (who has a relationship with Wendy and is the protagonist's teammate on the mission). ) Took refuge in Ni Shang and took Wendy to escape in the direction of Ni Shang. The protagonist fought with Vasante (Rebecca followed him) and fought with the raven. Yes, he threw away his weapon and fought with the raven with his bare hands. After the fight, he came back to show off in front of Vasant, killed Vasant, and Li Becca was evasive, but Rebecca couldn't accept it. She committed suicide by the protagonist's hand. When Wendy saw it, she exploded and was about to die. She felt regretful, that is, very regretful (a simple description of her heart, the protagonist's reluctance). A strange voice appeared in her mind, and the crisis was resolved... Ah, even though I knew that the next step was a new one. The climax of the plot (it was all foreshadowed), but he was really embarrassed, especially when he said that this plot was a year in advance, haha, forget it if you didn't handle the other plots well, you took over this thing on your own initiative, and you didn't even have a perfect solution for it? TM I'm really angry. I can't bear the frustration of the poorly handled plots. I really suspect that the author didn't write an outline and improvise. You want the power of gems to become stronger, but you don't have the ability to deal with it. However, the protagonist is gone. , And I felt good about myself and felt that my mouth escape was very successful, but then it became tragic. Not only did I not destroy the original knife, but I fed the knife to the readers in advance. For such an author, I really... Will not respect it Finally, I would like to say something to those who think the writing is okay. A person's growth is not all based on failure (isn't the author's point of view that the protagonist needs to experience more tragedy to grow?). When a person has a sense of responsibility, has goals and responsibilities, he also grows. The kind of growth like the author can be summarized in one word, numb, that's it.
To put it bluntly, the human life around the protagonist is naturally precious. What should su do to take the overall situation into consideration and eliminate the unfavorable and unknown factors in the method that he has finally found? That is the correct reaction of a person who has found a method with difficulty. People who want to refute me first think about themselves. If they were su and didn't know that the protagonist in the book who didn't know the so-called can definitely save the world, they would definitely do that. And if you were from that world, most of you would definitely support su. Don't say anything there, I won't do that, you just don't. He had to stay in that desperate situation. To put it bluntly, the protagonist is based on the lives of the people around him. He is not qualified to be so upright. His behavior is the same as that of Tang San. He does not threaten himself and does not make him and those two disgusting people unhappy. Justice To put it bluntly, I do it for my own selfish gain This is my opinion of this protagonist who is so rubbish that it makes me sick (Those who want to criticize me think about what you will do, there is no need to lie there, you know best what you think)
To be honest, I feel like the protagonist is a loser. He is incompetent and angry. He is also a middle-schooler. He also likes to be frivolous. He is self-righteous and selfish. The key is that as mentioned before, he protects his back legs and wants to run away, but also excuses himself. It really looks like the whole world owes you five million. I have to say that the author's writing is really strong, and he successfully made me hate the protagonist completely 😒😒😒😒
I have always disliked the fairy, but I couldn't explain why. Finally, I finally found the reason by repeatedly searching official information and Baidu Encyclopedia. (I'm talking about the immortal in the official setting, not this fan fiction) First, in 2000, the Herrscher of the Tower of Babylon was born. Hypothesis 1: The birth of Herrscher of the Sky was an accident, and neither Otto nor the Immortal knew anything about it. (That's okay) Hypothesis 2: The birth of Herrscher of the Sky was planned by Otto, but the Immortal had no knowledge of it. (That's okay) Hypothesis 3: The birth of Herrscher of the Sky was planned by Otto, and he knew everything about it. (Then let's talk about it) Based on the third hypothesis, the birth of Herrscher not only caused the Honkai Energy within a few hundred miles around the Herrscher's birthplace to rise sharply and become a life restricted area, but also caused the global Honkai Energy to run rampant, and people were dying all over the world, including the Chinese people. Excuse me, Immortal, is this how you protect Shenzhou? Protecting all mankind like this? Second, there is no doubt that the birth of the Fourth Herrscher was planned by Otto. Assumption 4: The Immortal does not know. (That's okay) Assumption five, the immortal knows the root and the bottom. (Then let's talk about it) Based on hypothesis five, the birth of the Fourth Herrscher not only led to the death of millions or more people in Oceania, but also led to large-scale death of people around the world, naturally including the people of China. Excuse me, Immortal, is this how you protect Shenzhou? Protecting all mankind like this? Third, the Herrscher of Kiana Sky of Destiny Headquarters wakes up. There is no need to assume that Otto planned the awakening of the Herrscher of the Sky this time. The Immortal fully knew that Otto wanted to awaken the Herrscher of the Sky. However, the only thing the Immortal did not know was what means Otto planned to use to deal with the awakened Herrscher of the Sky. The moment Herrscher of the Sky woke up, people died on a large scale all over the world, and even in China, people continued to die for four months. Excuse me, Immortal, is this how you protect Shenzhou? Protecting all mankind like this? Immortal, do you know that the birth of every Herrscher represents a massive death toll across the world? You know. What did you do as a result? At least you didn't prevent the birth of the Herrscher. I think the official version of the Herrscher of Knowledge is satirizing the Immortal. He talks about righteous slogans, but does what Honkai wants to see. Baidu Encyclopedia introduces Shangxian because he and Otto had differences over the handling of Kiana/Herrscher of the Sky, which is the so-called ideological discord. In the end, Shangxian and Otto broke up and started fighting. Excuse me, Immortal, hypothesis three, hypothesis five, and the moment when Herrscher of the Sky awakened, you and Otto were in a state of consistent ideas, right? But when Otto planned to let the school's protagonist Pai be used as a sacrifice to awaken Kiana, you couldn't help but become anxious at this time, right? In other words, no matter how many new Herrschers are born, no matter how many people these Herrschers cause to die around the world, it has nothing to do with you, right? Anyway, the people who died were strangers. But will you fall out if the Herrscher tries to hurt your friends/family/school protagonist faction? Shangxian, in the official settings, you are a hypocrite who talks about benevolence, justice, morality, and is self-interested. Shangxian, you are a very hypocritical person. Your so-called protection of the divine state and the protection of all mankind is a joke.
No wonder this book is not popular, the system is useless and there are many tragedies. Why do you want to read it without reading the original book?
The author's true biography of the screenwriter Mi Huo, and his cutting skills are top-notch.
Isn't it just that his own strength has become stronger because of that broken system? It is up to him to decide what is right or wrong. He has no system to do su's things, and he will definitely mess up su. He has already done a good job. An arrogant trash is showing off, in front of a meritorious person who has exhausted his life for mankind, in front of a person whose death is about to come, in front of a person who coughed up blood after explaining everything and was so weak that he couldn't stand up and had to lean against a tree. I really watched it. . . This protagonist
Pure Honkai Impact Chapter 700 I can already think of how wet it is
. . . . . This pig's foot is not generally unpleasant. It was poisoned to death and abandoned.
Brief review (10-point scale) (Plot): 8 points, original, corresponding to the foreshadowing of Shangmi Huhu (eating books), very comfortable to watch (Characters): 9 points, the original character design has not collapsed, the new characters except Hitamamaru are a bit shallow, Mingyu's characterization is great, but Midoriya There is a slight problem with Tuo's voice. Although Lu Tuo has a relatively frivolous personality, he is never verbose. I hope you can pay attention to it (personal understanding) (setting): 7 points. Too strong a collapse may cause irreversible corrosion. The male protagonist has done this several times -_-, what is the protagonist's aura? . . (Writing): 7 points, no outstanding points, not bad, above average (Updated): 1 point (resentment), I can't see enough, update quickly, finally have a great book [Overall review]: 8.5 Points, good seedlings, worth raising —The above represents my personal opinion
Version 3.8 Will be released soon. Orchid Goose is so beautiful. I hope the author will take advantage of the situation and let the Goose appear in the subsequent plot. It is best to let the Goose interact with the protagonist and become friends or something...
Destiny Organization: This organization was essentially created by a group of ancient dignitaries who were afraid of death in order to save their own lives and prosperity. They had no intention of protecting all mankind. If you look at the indulgences in the official plot settings, you will know the fundamental reason why these guys established the Destiny Organization. Then Otto came to power, and the entire Destiny Organization slid further into the abyss. In the end, regardless of the specific purpose of the Destiny Organization, it has indeed sheltered ordinary people for hundreds of years. However, in fact, the Destiny Organization eliminated Honkai in order to maintain the lives of high-level dignitaries. After Honkai was cleared, the Destiny dignitaries were safe, and by the way, ordinary people were also safe, so this shelter was only the result of the Destiny Organization's completion of the elimination. By the way, during the Honkai, the Destiny Organization mostly exploited and plundered ordinary people. It would be cruel to deal with ordinary people. Ordinary people would either die in the hands of the Honkai or the Destiny Organization. It would be better to let ordinary people die in the Honkai. At least Honkai could give them a happy death. For ordinary people, the first doomsday is called Honkai Will, and the second doomsday is called Destiny Organization. At present, it seems that the Destiny Organization and Honkai are fighting fire with fire. To put it harshly, it is dog eat dog. Otto: No mercy, no kindness, no empathy, no sense of right and wrong, no sense of right and wrong, no regard for human life, no humanity, no bottom line, no lower limit. Hitler and Emperor Hirohito together are not as good as this guy.
The author should keep writing, he writes very well
There is no better Honkai fan than this one, let me argue if you are not convinced
I have been following the update for 4 days now. I have fully ordered it. Let me tell you what I think about this book. This is a very good Bengsan fanfic, and I don't think I'll respond to it. In the early stage, it normally started from Changkong City to the academy. This part was indeed written a bit stiff, but in the later stage, especially when the Herrscher chapter took off directly, it was constantly exciting. The emotional lines between Pig's Knuckle, Wendy, and Hitamamaru were also heart-wrenching, especially Wendy's. The full text system is very useless, but the reason is given later, and the failure is left to an old lover.... Finally, when I saw this, I really wanted to ask the author, judging from the recent plot, are you thinking of a knife?....
The plot has an over-the-top beauty
First, what was written on the card in Hitamaru's hand in the bar? Second, what is written in the card in the hands of the protagonist in Oceania?
The author has a question. I can borrow your protagonist and write it in my book. Is it okay? I'm currently running to Miyou Society.
The author can wait until Beng Beng Beng is released and knows the plot before writing. Because tomorrow is the test
Does the author's protagonist have a golden finger? In that world, if Golden Finger is not strong, it will be difficult to survive.
When I saw that the heroine was Hitamaru, I decided to add it to the bookshelf
The full text highlights the protagonist's growth experience very well. Some readers say that the system is useless. This is not a big problem. After all, this is him who has lost all his power in another timeline. The biggest problem in the novel is the character creation. At the beginning, he only wanted to protect himself wisely but tried his best to get involved in big events. He was too self-centered and separated from the understanding of others. As a result, many people did not believe him and almost betrayed him many times. He wants to change all tragedies but is too idealistic. He places his hope in the kindness of human nature but is repeatedly betrayed. He wants to change all tragedies but cannot see anyone else sacrifice. He always wants to bear all the mistakes and harm on himself. Whenever you travel to this kind of apocalyptic world, the protagonist who is ruthless and knows the trade-offs often fares much better, and one general can accomplish everything. This kind of person who wants to protect everything can often not protect anything. On the contrary, the villain can achieve everything.
Anti-Honkai Organization——Destiny
Destiny LOGO: Destiny is one of the organizations in the world that fights against "Honkai". It was established with the purpose of eradicating "Honkai" in the world. It has existed since the 5th century AD (Honkai Academy 2 was established in the 7th century AD) and has a long history. In the 14th century AD, a secret organization headed by the Apokali family was formally formed. Originated in Europe, it has branches all over the world and now controls most of Europe and Asia. In the early days of its establishment, the organization relied on a religious framework, and its leader was called the "archbishop" and implemented centralized management. Over the course of hundreds of years, the religious overtones of the organization have been greatly diluted, but the leader of the Order is still known as the "Archbishop." The organization initially conducted archaeological excavations on the remains left behind by the previous civilization that was destroyed by the Honkai Impact, collected and analyzed the technology of holy relics (holy relics: the collective name for all the remnants of the previous civilization) and used these technologies to fight against the "Honkai". However, after Otto became Archbishop of Destiny, Destiny accelerated the research on Honkai energy and biotechnology under Otto's leadership, thus greatly increasing Destiny's combat effectiveness against Honkai Impact. Especially after defeating the Second Herrscher in 2000, Tianming developed the artificial stigmata system based on the research results of the recovered Second Herrscher's remains, which greatly enhanced the Valkyrie's utilization of Honkai energy and greatly improved the Valkyrie's combat effectiveness again. Although both the Anti-Entropy and Anti-Entropy are organizations that fight against the collapse of the human race, they have different ideas and are in a hostile relationship. Organizational Structure: The Destiny Organization is supported and operated by three major families, namely the Apokalis family representing the "Bishop", the Shaniyat family representing the "Saint" and the Kaslana family representing the "Knight". Kaslana Family crest: One of the three major families that supports the work of destiny, representing the "Knight" of destiny. It is the earliest family born among the three major families, and the family with the highest combat effectiveness among the three major families. People born in the Kaslana family have a special constitution that is extremely resistant to Honkai energy. Therefore, the Kaslana family is generally active at the forefront of the Honkai battlefield - fighting head-on against Honkai. The representative weapon of the Kaslana family is the Skyfire Holy Judgment, the key to destruction. It appears in the form of double blunderbuss every day. At critical moments, it can transform into the giant sword mode "Skyfire Unsheathed" to fight. But the consumption was huge, and 25 soldiers of the Kaslana family have died as a result. Main members: Currently known members of Kaslana (in order of birth): Kevin Kaslana (the fusion warrior of the previous generation, the first generation of Kaslana of this generation; Honkai Academy 2, Kiana's otherworld sibling) Dr. MEI (Kevin's lover) Francis ·Kaslana (father of Kallen) Kaslana Kaslana (Saint of Destiny, the strongest Valkyrie) Otto Apokalis (Kallen's fiancé) Devana Kaslana (one of the members of the Twilight Team) Theresa Apokalis (Kallen's genetic synthesizer, with the blood of the Kaslana family) Siegfried Kaslana Silana (Kiana/Kevin's father) Cecilia Chaniat (Siegfried's wife) Kiana Kaslana (the 69th generation of the Kaslana family) Celine Kaslana/Celine Chaniat (Herrscher of the Sky, the daughter whom Siegfried and Cecilia recognized during the Second Collapse) K-423 (Kia Na Kaslana's clone, used by Otto to resurrect Siren's body) Thunder Meiyi (Herrscher of Thunder, Kiana/K-423's lover) (to be added) Apocalis Family emblem: One of the three major families that supports the destiny of destiny, representing destiny [bishop]. The Apokalis family, which controls the Destiny Organization, does not have the ability to confront Honkai Impact head-on like the other two families. The representative weapon of the Apokalis family is the Key to Revelation - Void Manzo, but apart from SU (Sakyamuni), only Otto has been recognized. Main members: Currently known members of Apokalis (in order of birth) SU (former civilization fusion warrior, the first generation of Apokalis of modern civilization - Gautama Buddha) Otto Apokalis (Archbishop of Destiny) Karen Kaslana (Otto's fiancée) Otto Vera (Otto's adopted sister) Theresa Apokalis (Kallen's genetic synthesizer, Otto's adopted granddaughter) Ninti Apokalis (Honkai Academy 2, the clone of the daughter of Cocolia) (to be added) Sanyat Family emblem: One of the three major families that supports the destiny of destiny, representing the destiny [saint]. Created by Otto Members of the Shaniyat family have extremely strong ability to control Honkai energy. After activating their bloodline, they obtain the [Holy Blood of Shaniyat] which can eliminate Honkai energy The representative weapon of the Shaniyat family is the key to creation - the Black Abyss White Flower. Main members: Currently known members of Shaniat (in order of birth) Eleanor Shaniat (the Black Death infected person treated by Otto, the first generation Shaniat) Cecilia Shaniat (Saint of Destiny, the strongest Valkyrie) ) Siegfried Kaslana (Cecilia's husband) Maria Shaniat (Honkai Academy 2, Cecilia's cousin) Angelia Shaniat (Honkai Academy 2, Cecilia's cousin) Kiana Kaslana (Cecilia's daughter) Kay Vin Kaslana (Honkai Academy 2, Cecilia's son) Celine Kaslana/Celine Shaniat (The Herrscher of the Sky, the daughter recognized by Siegfried and Cecilia in the second Honkai Impact) K-423 (Kiana Kaslana's clone, Otto used to resurrect Siren's body) Anna Shaniat (Herrscher of Ice, Captain of the Snow Lotus Team) (To be added) Valkyrie System: The Valkyrie was originally a warrior trained by the Destiny Organization to confront Honkai on the frontline battlefield. She was responsible for destroying or capturing the dead soldiers and Honkai beasts produced after Honkai. Whenever Honkai occurs, it will be accompanied by the release of a large amount of Honkai energy. Ordinary people exposed to high concentrations of Honkai energy will be quickly corroded by Honkai energy and turn into dead soldiers. However, some people have varying degrees of adaptability to Honkai energy, can resist the erosion of Honkai energy, and even actively use Honkai energy to increase their physical abilities, thus being able to fight against Honkai. Since women are usually much more adaptable to Honkai energy than men, and young girls are the most adaptable, these warriors are basically girls, and these girls are called "Valkyries". Kallen Kaslana is one of the outstanding representatives of the early Valkyries. Honkai energy has terrible destructive power, but if handled properly, it can also be exploited by humans. After Otto came to power, Destiny accelerated the research on Honkai Energy, and conducted in-depth research on the use of Honkai Energy in living organisms. The artificial stigma system developed greatly improved the Valkyrie's utilization of Honkai Energy, greatly improving the combat effectiveness of the Valkyrie troops, and its efficiency in utilizing Honkai Energy was much higher than that of anti-entropy mechas. However, due to technological immaturity, artificial stigmata will also cause great burden and damage to the host, and will greatly shorten the lifespan of the Valkyrie. However, Otto believed that the Valkyries were disposable consumables and did not care about the safety of the Valkyries. This attitude of disregarding human life caused dissatisfaction and opposition from many people in the organization. With the development of the organization, the work content of the modern Valkyrie has also expanded significantly. Tasks such as public security coordination, logistics supply, intelligence investigation and even sneak assassination have also become the work content of the Valkyrie. To put it simply, any task that involves safeguarding the interests of destiny and requires combat power may be entrusted to the Valkyrie. Valkyries are generally divided into four levels from A to D, and can be promoted through assessment. Only Valkyries above Class B are eligible to fight, while Valkyries above Class A not only have the authority to fight alone and the opportunity to directly assign tasks from the headquarters, they can also apply for their own battleships and form their own combat teams. For the average Valkyrie, Class A is a lifelong goal. In addition to the regular four levels, there is a special S level, but this is a level prepared for those Valkyries with "special significance of existence" and cannot be reached through ordinary promotion. S-class Valkyries are extremely rare, and there are only a few of them even in the history of Destiny. Destiny has set up Valkyrie training institutions in many branches, but their training concepts are not necessarily the same. For example, Teresa Apokalis established St. Freya Academy in the hope of cultivating Valkyries who cherish their own lives and the lives of others. Outstanding Valkyrie: Currently known members of the Valkyrie Kallen Kaslana (the strongest Valkyrie, died in battle) Eleanor Shaniat (member of Kallen's team, died in battle) Leanna Brigantia (ship of Theseus, Soulsteel Valkyrie, died in battle) Dead) Cecilia Shaniat (Captain of the Snow Wolf Squad, the strongest Valkyrie, died in battle) Shigure Kirara (A-level Valkyrie, member of the Snow Wolf Squad, recorded as killed in battle, now traveling in the Quantum Sea) Cheng Lixue (Strongest A-level Valkyrie, member of the Snow Wolf Squad, Fuhua's disciple, died in battle) Patrick K. Highsmith (A-level Valkyrie, member of the Snow Wolf Squad, died in battle) Salome Jokanan (A-level Valkyrie, member of the Snow Wolf Squad, died in battle) Shub Nicholas (A-level Valkyrie, member of the Snow Wolf Squad, died in battle) Devana Kaslana (member of the Dawn and Twilight Squad, died in battle) Weichen (Captain of the Dawn and Twilight Squadron, died in battle) Zarya (Member of the Dawn and Twilight Squadron, died in battle) Bianca Hollandelle Ataljina (The Strongest Valkyrie, Captain of the Immortal Blade) Rita Rossweisse (S-Class Valkyrie, Vice-Captain of the Immortal Blade) Arvette (Intelligence Officer of the Immortal Blade) Lewis (B-level Valkyrie) Theresa Apokalis (Retired S-level Valkyrie, Minister of the Far East Branch, Dean of St. Freya Academy, has rebelled) Wumian Tajiko (A-level Valkyrie, Captain Hyperion, has rebelled, and is now missing) Fu Hua (A-level Valkyrie, Red Kite Sage, Guardian of the Divine Land , Otto's friend, has rebelled) Mei Raiden (Thunder Herrscher, B-level Valkyrie, has rebelled, now joins World Serpent) Kiana Kaslana (Honkai Academy 2, Herrscher of the End, the ceiling of the Honkai World) K-423 (Herrscher of the Sky, B-level Valkyrie, has rebelled) Bronya Zaicek (Herrscher of Reason, B-level Valkyrie, has rebelled) Wendy (Herrscher of Wind, A-level Valkyrie, member of the Oceania branch, has rebelled, and her life and death are unknown) Anna Shaniat (Herrscher of Ice, A-level Valkyrie, Captain of the Snow Lotus Team, has died in battle) Colorless Glowing Flame (Honkai Academy 2, S-level Valkyrie) Ninti Apokalis (Honkai Gakuin 2, S-class Valkyrie) (to be added) Possessing holy relics: Key of revelation - Void Manzo Key of eternal calamity - One Thousand Worlds (missing core beacon) Key of the fourth god - satellite with unknown code name Key of the fifth god -? Key to Creation - White Flower of the Black Abyss Key to Destruction - Holy Judgment of Heavenly Fire (already taken away by Kevin Kaslana) Key to Consciousness - Yu Duchen (already taken away by Kevin Kaslana) Key to Devouring - Star of Eden (already taken away by Walter Joe) Yisi took away) Key to Domination - Xuanyuan Sword (whereabouts unknown) Key to Domination - Grip of Taixu (whereabouts unknown) Key to Domination - Ruoshui (whereabouts unknown) Key to Restraint - Judah's Oath (has been replaced by Theresa Apokalis Taken away) Key of Corrosion - Ksitigarbha Yuhun (whereabouts unknown) Key of Blank - True Red Knight·Eclipse (has been taken away by Wuliangta Jizi) Key Pavilion of God Book of Cangxuan (Liquid Soul Steel Quantum Computer) Pre-civilization standard weapon Open Sky Sword Youlandel Aijiang (to be added) Main members: Known members of Tianming in recent years Otto Apokalis (Archbishop Tianming) Theresa Apokalis( Head of the Apokalis family, head of the Far East branch, has rebelled) Walter Joyce (Herrscher of Reason, Ω1, member of the North American branch, has rebelled and died in battle) Leanna Brigantia (Ship of Theseus, Soulsteel Valkyrie, has died in battle) Li Thel Albert Einstein (genius scientist, member of the North American branch, has rebelled) Frederica Nikola Tesla (genius scientist, member of the North American branch, has rebelled) Emma Planck (genius scientist, head of the North American branch) , has rebelled and died) Erwin Leanne Schrödinger (genius scientist, member of the North American branch, has rebelled) Nancy Thomas Alva Edison (Princess Nancy, head of the North American branch, has rebelled and died in battle) Celine (empty) The Herrscher, an experimental subject in the Babylonian laboratory, has rebelled and died in the battle) Siegfried Kaslana (the head of the Kaslana family, has rebelled) Cecilia Shaniat (the head of the Shaniat family, the strongest Valkyrie, has died in the battle) Shigure Kirara (A-level Valkyrie, member of Snow Wolf Squad, recorded death in battle, I am now traveling in the Quantum Sea) Cheng Lixue (the strongest A-level Valkyrie, member of Snow Wolf Squad, disciple of Fu Hua, died in battle) Patrick Highsmith (A-level Valkyrie, member of Snow Wolf Squad, in the Anti-Entropy Room Spy, died in battle) Salome Jokanan (A-level Valkyrie, member of Snow Wolf Squad, died in battle) Shub Nicholas (A-level Valkyrie, member of Snow Wolf Squad, died in battle) Devana Kaslana (member of Dawn and Twilight Squad, died in battle) Vechern (Captain of the Dawn and Twilight Squadron, died in battle) Zarya (Member of the Twilight Squadron, died in battle) Bianca Yurandelle Ataljina (The Strongest Valkyrie, Captain of the Immortal Blade) Stan (Emperor Cat-type Honkaijumon, Bianca Yulan Randall Atajina's pet) Rita Rossweisse (S-class Valkyrie, Vice-captain of the Immortal Blade) Arvette (Indestructible Blade Intelligence Officer) Lewis (B-class Valkyrie) Immortal Tahimeko (Captain Hyperion, has rebelled) , current whereabouts unknown) Fu Hua (Otto's friend, Crimson Kite Immortal, Guardian of China, has rebelled) Kiana Kaslana (whereabouts unknown/Honkai Academy 2, Herrscher of the End, Destiny Saint, has rebelled) K-423 (Kiana Kaslana) Na's clone, the body used by Otto to resurrect Siren, has rebelled) Mei Raiden (Herrscher of Thunder, the eldest lady of ME Club, has rebelled) Bronya Zaicek (Herrscher of Reason, Anti-Entropy Saint, Queen of the Harem of the Cocolia Orphanage, has rebelled) Anna Shaniat (Herrscher of Ice, Captain of the Snow Lotus Squadron, died in battle) Wendy (Herrscher of Wind, A-level Valkyrie, member of the Oceania Branch, has rebelled, and her life and death are unknown) [Captain] (Otto's friend, ferryman, mysterious person, now riding the Huberli Traveling in the Quantum Sea) (to be added) External name: Destiny Consortium Representative work: "Karen Fantasy" series Hostile forces: Anti-Entropy Allied forces: China, World Serpent
I said the protagonist doesn't need a reason to be kind
I feel that there is no need to be so kind. You have to work hard and your talents are earned by yourself. Even if others help you in the process, you only need to give a gift in return. No need to be kind. No matter how beautiful the world is, you have to let yourself live first before you can see all this. The protagonist's strength gradually increases. The growth and location are good, but when the strength is insufficient, once the protagonist becomes kind, it is a huge poison. Not to mention that the protagonist is naturally kind, I would like to ask everyone here, if you can use your life to exchange for 100, 500 or even 1,000 people, would you like it? Are you really willing to trade your lives for those strangers? The protagonist can also do some corresponding one-liners when he is bored, but there is no need to be a good person to the end, just pass the time and pass the time without paying a price. After all, the world has nothing to do with you, unless it is someone close to you. This is just a world that has traveled through time. Unless it's someone who won't get in your way before your relationship. Otherwise, what do other people have to do with the protagonist? This is what time-travelers are like. After coming to a place, the first thing is to survive. Don't even think about saving people. I can't teach myself well, so why should I save you? Being a hero is more for our own entertainment. I don't know what you choose when it comes to life. Anyway, this book needs to be more oriented towards ordinary people or some otakus. Don't say that if you want to wear a crown, you must bear its weight. You must always remember that the protagonist is not a native of this world. All he has to do is protect the people he loves from harm. What do those ordinary people have to do with him? Why should he help them? Even if you can't help it, you shouldn't use this to kill time. The power the protagonist possesses does not mean that he has to help those people. Those so-called savior heroes are not native to this world, or have been rooted in this world for decades. Only those who threaten their important people will take action. I feel that there should be more twists on the protagonist's psychology later on. If it continues like this, it won't be of much interest.
It's exciting, especially the Black Abyss part. You can have cheats, but you have to take your time. I really like this way of becoming stronger.
Waste utilization
"Brother Yu." The pink-haired girl opened the door and walked in. "What are you reading? Hmm~ Brother Yu is learning programming?" "Well, that's right!" Ming Yu said and turned another page of the book in his hand. "Why does Brother Yu suddenly want to learn programming? I thought Brother Yu was only interested in practicing." Hitamaru tilted his head and asked in confusion. "This? I just have something in my hand and want to see if I can use it..." Mingyu paused. "Speaking of which, doesn't that Otto guy think I'm from a higher civilization? How can I calm him down if I don't come up with something practical? We haven't been in contact for a long time now. It's nothing. As time goes by, he will find that there is no advanced civilization behind me, just a paper tiger. By then, I will probably become an experimental subject in one of Destiny's laboratories." "Okay, I'll be fine. You don't have to worry." Mingyu stretched out his hand and touched Hitamawan's head. "I'm suddenly a little hungry now. I want to eat the same salad I ate with you in Chinatown yesterday. Can you help me buy some ramen from the noodle shop, Hi Tamamaru?" Hi Tamamaru stared at Ming Yu without saying a word, and said in silence for a while: "Brother Yu wants to get rid of me, right? Brother, right? " "Why, how could it be? Hitamaru is so cute..." "You really want to get rid of me! You don't usually praise me! If I really hinder Brother Yu, just say it, then I won't appear in front of Brother Yu!" Hitamaru emotionally interrupted Mingyu's big trick. "I also want to help Brother Yu! I don't want to experience every time Brother Yu goes out to perform a mission, and I can only wait at home stupidly. Every time Brother Yu suddenly loses contact, do you know how anxious I will be? Even if Brother Yu pulls me into your team , You just want to protect me, not because I have the ability to help Brother Yu! I have lost my sister, I can't lose Brother Yu anymore, you are my last relative!" Hitamaru burst into tears at the end, and then ran out crying. "Fei Yuwan..." Mingyu hesitated for a moment, but still did not chase after him. "Sorry, Hitamaru, I have something to do now. When I finish this work, I will ask Otto for leave. Are you willing to accompany me to China? ——Mingyu" After sending the message to Hitamamaru, Mingyu sighed and looked out the window not knowing what he was thinking. "Even if she speaks so straightforwardly, do you still have to pretend to be confused?" A voice suddenly sounded in Mingyu's mind. "When did the majestic Tree of Imaginary Numbers and the God of Honkai start to care about human gossip?" Mingyu slowly came back to his senses and mocked the owner of the voice. "Of course I don't care about this, but have you really decided to forcibly open the permissions of 'that thing'? Even if you fail, I can ensure that you will not be eroded by excessive Honkai energy, but what will happen if 'that thing' is invaded? If you react like this, I can't guarantee to protect you." "It's not too much to say that I'm also its host." "Captain, the creatures within ten kilometers of you have been dispersed and blocked, and Miss Hitamamaru has also arrived. The whole area. ——Nemisis" "Help me take care of Hitamamaru and don't put her in danger. Then, no one is allowed to enter this area without my order, otherwise you will be responsible for the consequences" "Understood" "Okay, preparations are complete, let's get started, Imaginary Number." There was no reply in Mingyu's mind. The two God Keys in Mingyu's hand suddenly burst out with endless Honkai energy. Xu Shu allowed them to temporarily connect to the Imaginary Number space, gaining unlimited Honkai energy. "The Key of God - Wuchen, seals the sky and the earth." Mingyu slowly raised his right hand and released the Wuchen sword held in his right hand when the sword was parallel to his body. The Wuchen Sword flew high into the sky, unfolded the barrier, and sealed an area of ten kilometers around Mingyu. The Honkai energy inside the barrier would not be able to pass through the barrier. The barrier that is connected to the imaginary space by the God-Dominating Key must explode at once. Only with a power far exceeding the God-Dominating Key can the barrier be broken. There are only a few people with that ability in this world, only the strongest Herrscher - Herrscher of the End and Kevin who holds the Tribulation. However, Herrscher of the End is an imaginary number of subordinates who naturally will not come to cause trouble. The Sky Fire Holy Inquisition is still in the hands of Siegfried, and Kevin is imprisoned in the Quantum Sea and has no chance to destroy the barrier. Mingyu took a deep breath and raised his right hand again. This time he was holding the key to erosion - Ksitigarbha Yuhun. "The Key of God - Jizo Yuhun, adapted from Escape." After freeing Ksitigarbha Yuhun, Mingyu turned the sword, stabbed it into his stomach, and frowned slightly. Then he forcibly raised his energy and mentally controlled the corrosive power to roam and search within his body. The dust-free sword in the sky began to emit energy to heal Mingyu, and the corrosive power finally found its target - the system - in Mingyu's spiritual sea. The corrosive power continuously cracked the system's firewall. Although it was invaded, the system still did not respond at all, not even resisting, which surprised Mingyu. But even if there is no resistance, trying to crack the system's firewall is still a big project. Mingyu began to concentrate on helping Ksitigarbha Yuhun crack the firewall. …… "Hey, Sister Ghost, am I really so annoying to Brother Yu? You don't even come out to chase me." Hitamaru crawled listlessly at the front desk, even the little fur on his head was lying softly on his head. "He must have something important to do now, right? And he looks quite dangerous, otherwise he wouldn't have sent you away." The ghost answered Hitamamaru's question while carrying out the work at hand. The Honkai energy detector suddenly sounded an alarm, and the two of them ran out of the bar. As soon as they went out, they saw a golden and transparent hemisphere in the distance. "That's... The hotel where Brother Yu and I stayed?" "What? You mean this guy Mingyu did it?" The ghost was surprised when he heard Hitamaru's words. "I don't know." Hitamaru shook his head. ... "My friend, you really made big news." Otto looked at the screen in front of him, shaking the wine glass in his hand and said leisurely, "Are you contacting the civilization behind you? The movement is really big. Amber, the notification is in Singapore. So Valkyrie, stay still and don't get involved in this matter. " "Follow your orders" ... In a search ship directly above the Mariana Trench, Walter Young, who was about to dive into the sea, suddenly turned his head and looked in the direction of Singapore. "What's wrong, Yang?" A beautiful girl with blue hair asked strangely to Walter Yang who suddenly turned his head. "It's nothing, I just suddenly sensed the aura of the child from St. Freya. Let's continue and don't worry about it." "Oh, I understand." ... Skydome City A person wrapped in black looked at the screen in front of him. On the screen was a woman wearing a wolf-head mask. "Grey Snake, a collapse has suddenly broken out in Singapore that is no less than fifteen years ago. Go there and take a look. My intuition tells me that if we can obtain it, there is a great possibility to significantly advance our Stigmata plan." "For the sake of the Lord's plan, it doesn't hurt to go and take a look." ... "Mom, Mom, Rosalia has sensed the call, and Rosalia wants to take a look." A pink-haired girl hugged the left leg of a blond curly-haired woman in military uniform. "Mother Cocolia, Lilia has also sensed it." Cocolia's right leg was held by a blue-haired girl. "You two, be honest now, we have more important things." Cocolia rubbed the heads of the two girls one by one. "There is no time to fool around now. When we rescue your sister Xi'er, you can go wherever you want." "It seems that it really gives you face, the plan should go to the next..." "What's the hurry? This is just breaking through the firewall and getting the highest permissions. But I really didn't expect that only the functions I have now can still be used normally in this system, and all other functions are damaged for unknown reasons. " "By the way, my ally, I discovered that the power of the Wuchen Sword was divided into three parts during the ceremony." "I don't know about this, but I can tell you that the third force was sent to China." "China... Is Ji Lin not dead yet? It's impossible?" Mingyu was puzzled by this. "Forget it, after this matter, I will take some time to go to China to see why that force was diverted. Now. I created a group using the friend function that was just restored from the system. Can you join, Xushu?" "Is it just the most useless friend function? But it's a good start. Pull me in. I want to bring you in. Is that okay?" Mingyu shook his head and then operated the system in his mind. [You have created a group - Mingyu's group] [Mingyu invites the Tree of Imaginary Numbers to join the group] [The Tree of Imaginary Numbers invites Herrscher of the End to join the group] [The Tree of Imaginary Numbers invites Welt to join the group] [Mingyu invites the Book of Cangxuan to join the group] PS: The writing is not good, please forgive me.
A few notes on recent plots
Recently, I have seen many comments criticizing Mingyu in the book review area. I am a little heartbroken and feel that I still need to explain some things. Of course, I'm a little happy to see people discussing the plot, which shows that there are still people who care about this story. But there are some things I think should be made clear. The first is the destruction of Team 16. It is undeniable that Mingyu was indeed a little arrogant and reckless, which indirectly led to the subsequent destruction of the group. But I hope everyone can notice that his original intention when he rushed into the battlefield was to leave with Saori! Accepting the sacrifice of his teammates and turning around and running away without hesitation? That was not a choice he could make at that time! To retreat and give up on your companions who are still fighting just because the enemy is too strong is mature or callous, and is not something the passionate Mingyu would do. His only mistake was that he was not strong enough and ultimately failed, that's all. The second is the conflict between Mingyu and Theresa. If you force yourself to say unbelievable things when you don't have enough trust, it will only arouse greater disgust. Theresa's temperament is very good, but it depends on the person. Mingyu, who has no relatives and no relatives, obviously has no reason to be "arrogant". If you try to persuade him forcefully, the principal of the academy will refuse to accept the visit behind closed doors. The third one is the battle between Mingyu and Kiana. In those half a year or so, Mingyu encountered many things, including the sacrifice of his companions, the siege of Honkai Beasts, and his narrow escape from death many times, but I only mentioned these briefly because it was unnecessary. But Mingyu is not a perfect person. He will cry, suffer, despair, and get angry. He is just an ordinary person. He shed blood and shed tears to finally have everything he has now. After meeting the lazy Kiana and others, doesn't he even deserve to be angry? Objectively speaking, Mingyu is by no means great. He is a little selfish, gets emotional, suffers, and gets angry. He just relies on what he knows to survive in the collapsing world, and at the same time hopes to protect something.
The wise cleaner doing the air splits
I really want to know why you guys like to write tragedies when you write fan fiction. I think it's okay to write original works and tragedies, but you are writing tragedies in fan fiction. I really don't understand this. Originally, people came to read fan fiction because they were too frustrated to read the original work and were tortured. But in the end, they were still tortured after reading the fan fiction. Damn, I usually just don't read it. I'm really curious. Can writing a tragedy make your book stand out? No, it's just a fan. Original tragedies are easy to remember because they are original and have tragedies. But you are just a fan. Why do you write tragedies? I'm still not used to the starting point.
I read the first volume in one go. It was full of tragedies. If there were plug-ins, they would be forcibly weakened. Someone always had to die to promote the growth of the protagonist. The system was completely useless. So I gave him a one-star Stigmata experience card for 10 days + a one-star small broken knife at the beginning. There was almost nothing to do with the system later. Every time, the protagonist overestimates his capabilities and has a high vision but a low hand. No battle is easy. Every battle is suffocating. The monsters have to fight hard, have a low self-esteem, faint and go to the hospital (at least 5 times), and feel inexplicable self-blame. There are small plug-ins that increase proficiency and are not used for life and death. In a life-and-death battle, one would rather die than have to hang up. Tragedy just for the sake of tragedy