Reengineering Plan

The author writes really well and the plot is smooth. Although it is only a few tens of thousands of words, I can feel that DaDa has excellent writing skills. I have already saved it and hope to continue working hard! Try to sign the contract and become a god as soon as possible!ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

emmmmmm author, I can't help but say this Your book is very good (otherwise I wouldn't vote for you every day), but I personally have two problems, and they are also two problems that I feel are more serious. One is that the early layout is too large. In online novels, the first three chapters are when the tone of the book is set, and are not suitable for laying out the setting and worldview. Slowly revealing the worldview later is far more attractive to readers than spending a lot of space to stabilize the worldview at the beginning. (This is also a common problem with online novels, fast pace, fast food, and impetuousness.) It would feel better if we changed the timeline here, for example, starting from the protagonist turning into a silicon-based creature, evolving rapidly, and then spending a few chapters to get to the point, and then lead to the current beginning bit by bit in the middle of the book. (I have always felt that the current conspiracy at the beginning is so big that it is not suitable to be placed at the beginning.) The second one is too fond of group portraits. Emmm, this is a problem of each person's writing style. I have this problem myself, but in online articles, you need to quickly give readers a perspective of the protagonist in the first few chapters, so that readers can quickly put themselves into it. That is, it is best not to have too many characters and special nouns in the first few chapters, which will make quite a few readers confused and abandon the book. (So ​​I vote every day and click on a chapter every day, but in fact I only read a dozen chapters, because this kind of book requires too long to understand. This kind of book is not suitable for online articles, nor is it suitable for magazines, but more suitable for physical books, because its burden has been written and finished, and there is no need to wait for updates every day.) I feel that the author's ideas and writing style are quite good, but he has never written online articles before or has no in-depth understanding of online articles. He is the kind of talented writer who has a world view and a very good story and can't help but want to write it. The advantage of this kind of writer is that he is full of creativity. If he writes well, he can even become a god in one book and create a different genre. But this kind of writer also has a flaw: it is too easy to get stuck in his own story, and it is too easy to fail to wrap up. This makes it easy for you to have the two problems mentioned above, which can easily lead to the loss of readers, loss of confidence, and the choice to give up writing. emmmm I won't say much more, I hope the author can work hard!

The author is awesome. How dare you write about politics at this time?

Brother, why did you open a new book? How many of them haven't been seen over there? And the transition from martial arts to science and technology is a bit big. But it's really good there, so it would be a pity to give up. Forget it, come on, I'll take a look at your new book.

It's so well written, and the images that appear are all real, so good luck to the author!

I feel a little dizzy every time I see the big avatar (=_=)

Okay, I feel like the world view is very novel.

Nice! Chased!

The plot of the novel is very exciting. I really like this type of novel. Good luck to the author! !

It's pretty good, but it's a pity that science fiction is not to my liking. I gave it a recommendation vote, so keep going!

Does this little word make the website short? Awesome

Can't the problem of insufficient genetic diversity be solved by correcting genetic defects?

Is it over so soon? This is the fastest return on investment.

You're so awesome, but it's over before it's even released?