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Chapter 2 made me laugh. The protagonist obtained the Supreme Bone and has 100,000 kilograms of divine power, 🐮🍺! As soon as he hit it, Mount Tai was shattered. Where did you buy the shoes? There was no comminuted fracture of the leg bones and spine?

Does this make me watch the original work again from beginning to end?

You forcefully pretend to be cool, and you dare to snatch things prepared by the ruthless people when you first started practicing. Do you think the ruthless emperor is so easy to talk to? Can you use some brains when writing a book? Writing cool articles is not just mindless writing!

Who is the peak at the end of the immortal road? Seeing the beginningless path becomes empty. The heavenly path has no beginning and no end, and the precious mirror holds the sky in the void. A green lotus shocks the eternity, and the nine saints rise to the sky to protect peace. Which of the lunar and sun is weak and strong, mixed with Tai Chi to prove the emperor. The unicorn palm army conquers the immortal road, and the ten-year-old silkworm finally becomes the emperor. The mad monkey fights in the nine heavens, the unfaithful and unjust immortal king. Before the ancient times, the emperor respected the sky, and the world turned into a tripod to become an immortal. Hengyu began to refine weapons in the restricted area, and Fu Xi was shocked by the dragon's Taoism. The nine gods and nine secrets were nine poles, and the ancient tree of life spoke of Taoism. A ruthless man sweeps across the three thousand worlds, and the old man is seen at the end of reincarnation. The God King in white is stunning for a long time. The Nine Netherworlds are unparalleled in their arrogance. The red face and blue silk pity the purple moon, and a leaf of mortal dust covers the sky.

Plagiarism is the same as breaking into someone else's house and stealing something, so be careful.

There are more than 200 chapters of "Zhetian" and the main character, nothing new at all. If I go over and rewatch "Zhetian", it will be better than yours.

No one has watched the two updates, whether you have restored them or not. At first, there were ten people tipping people, but now there is no one left.

It collapsed. The author couldn't stand it anymore. He wanted to write his own stuff but he was still in that circle. Painting a tiger can't turn against a dog...

Please update one more chapter. I'll give you a reward.

How should I put it? Let's just talk about the advantages of this book. The protagonist's character is well fabricated and he has an invincible belief. This is very good. First of all, the plot is divided into parts. But it's very reasonable and the split is very reasonable. Rarely toxic. The following are the shortcomings. Although the plot is split, it also involves plagiarism, although not much. It just feels that way. And judging from the title of your book, it should follow the unlimited flow route, and more worlds may appear later.

The beginning is actually okay. Although it is poisonous, you can read it when there is a famine. It's just that when the protagonist reverses time and goes to the battle between Emperor Huangtian, it's really unwatchable -_-|| It's too confusing. Although the author describes such a grand scene and how powerful the power is, why are there so many calculations? Is it very noble? Fighting over and over again, joining forces with Emperor Huangtian to fight the darkness, then fighting himself, and then fighting Emperor Huangtian again... Detailed description is a good thing, the plot has foreshadowing, there are evil hands, and there are twists and turns are also good, but too much is not enough.

Reward 100 and hope to restore two updates

I said you, the author, are too insincere! The plot is almost the same as watching a pirated version. It's boring and I quit it.

Is this way of writing coming to an end today

It doesn't matter how awesome, powerful, or good your novels are today. No one can escape the rules of spirit. I understand the spirit. Body, mana, soul. And I wrote a novel, which has already halfway transcended the concept of essence. I think I will be the new platinum, but I am not good at writing. I feel that it is a bit mysterious, and I am worried that I cannot write this system well. Having said all this, I am actually here to advertise. This is not the book of these two eunuchs.

Emperor Huangtian has hundreds of thousands of kilograms of strength when moving blood. After all, a swing of one arm can weigh a hundred and eighty thousand kilograms, and a swing of both arms can weigh two hundred and twenty thousand kilograms. The whole body is about the same. Moreover, the author, not me, said that the divine elephant's prison-suppressing power is very powerful, ten thousand kilograms? You're kidding me! An elephant in reality weighs 8,000 kilograms or 16,000 kilograms, not to mention the ancient giant elephant in the Holy King. After all, Yang Qi can shatter a tree a hundred meters away before condensing the first giant elephant particles. And the condensed giant elephant particles can't be useless, right? And I think the world of the Holy King should be bigger than Zhetian Perfect. This is my personal opinion 🤓

The beginning made me faint. I found a picture of a dragon in the universe at the space agency. If you want to leave, leave. If others don't allow it, leave your job. I'm afraid you are not a spy! Just leave your job and go straight to jail! Later, I got the Supreme Bone, which has a hundred thousand kilograms of strength, and even cracked the top of Mount Tai with one kick. Why don't you just crush Mount Tai? The most important thing is that the shoes are not a big deal. Are all your whole body equipment all innate magic weapons?

Isn't this author afraid of lawsuits? Making money by taking advantage of other people's popularity and messing around with XJB, has been reported

What kind of system dares to boast such a comparison? ? ? Let a mortal's understanding of the divine elephant's prison-suppressing power be comparable to that of a master? ? There may be countless differences between the two in terms of their ambition, courage, will, knowledge, vision, realm, and mind. In the end, most protagonists of online novels may not be able to fuck a fish in the divine world 🤫🤫

After reading the second chapter, I really can't accept the author's lack of rigor and self-righteousness. There were so many readers who suggested revisions, but the author didn't bother with them. Okay then, I won't read this book anymore.

Riding on the popularity of other people's books, but also degrading the protagonist of the book to nothing

The author's common sense is a bit questionable. Do you know how much a ship weighs? A 70,000-ton ship hit a mountain and sank on its own. Some rocks fell off the mountain. You told me that 100,000 kilograms, which is 50 tons, crushed Mount Tai. A million kilograms only Even 500 tons can shake mountains. I feel like you are just kidding me. Do you know how much impact an ordinary construction truck has when it is fully loaded and driven 60 yards? It is almost 500 tons. You tell me that this amount of force can shake mountains 😅

It's already a copyright infringement, and it doesn't respect the original book settings at all. It's a huge criticism.

The author doesn't know how powerful the Holy King is, and the Immortal Emperor is just a younger brother inside

Chapter 1: Hello, did the space agency just come up with it? Work in the state secrets department. If I remember correctly, it should be in the Jiuquan Gobi Desert. The military and police inside are not allowed to pass without documents. If they come up, they are suspected of being spies. Their identity certificates and people are detained for detailed inspection. Can you take a look at the outer Gobi Desert?

After identification, this book is only suitable for people with advanced anti-toxic constitutions before they can read it. Those who do not listen to advice and try it at will should be careful of poisoning. "We will not be held responsible if you are poisoned."

A group of people are nagging here, saying that the fanfic is awesome, the fanfic is written by the author, and they can change it however they want. Fandom means the original author enjoys the meal. If someone gives you a chance, they will look down upon you and not pursue the case. If the book is really criticized, you will have to compensate for it. Again, when writing a fanfic, you should respect the original work and write it well. Don't be blind. If you have to be YY, just be original. Do you really think that adding a system means you are original?

It's really poisonous, and it's so decisive in killing. The author, you have ruined the character of the protagonist. The Jiang family, the Ji family, and the Qing Emperor are all messing around with the protagonist, chasing him everywhere. The protagonist even saves the enemy, and it's just for Ye Fan's sake. I'm really drunk. Are you trying to lick a dog and retaliate? The problem is that I only see the protagonist helping Ye Fan all the time and not taking any advantage from him! I really don't understand why the protagonist is like this? The main story line is simply written in nonsense, and there is no interest in reading it at all!

So if you just copy the original work, it will be a novel?

I was wrong I thought it was a good book, but it turned out to be Ye Fan's licking