God Level Choice of Douluo

I feel like I've become mad... I'm most afraid of writing fan fiction that is illogical...

When it comes to fan fiction, the most intolerable thing is to tear down the CP. Can't you create a new female protagonist? Do you have to steal the wife of the protagonist of the original novel?

Is this written about something magical?

It's still good, but the pace is a bit fast. It's so cool that it's hard to write about later. Maybe I want to travel around the world 😁

What's not called a wish-fulfillment system? Are all choices good or bad? Just like the first one, two choices! One is to kill that person and reward Qinglong! If you can't kill, you will be humiliated and rewarded with a blackened blue dragon! It's okay to go out even though you're not even fart. Isn't the aura of wisdom-reducing too strong?

Very good. Come on, don't be a eunuch. I will always support you.

I have a bad temper and have changed a bit. I started to wake up at the age of six.

Has the author read the original work? The martial soul awakens at the age of 6 and goes to Shrek Academy at the age of 12.

Never read the original author? Don't you know that the martial soul awakens at the age of six?

Well, author, magic modification is not random modification, especially the title of your book is obviously based on Douluo Dalu as a gimmick to attract people who like Douluo Dalu. However, you have completely changed Douluo Dalu beyond recognition. It's not that you can't change it, but you have to write it in a way that readers can accept. Change the method, For example, in the second chapter, you wrote: There are nine states in the world where Yuchen is located. You can also write it like this. It will make people feel that Tang San wrote it wrong. To be honest, everyone knows that the world of Douluo Continent is not just those continents, but the gods rule countless planes. , And not just this Kyushu? Even if you want to write like this, you have to let the protagonist explore it by himself, let the protagonist think in a way of "Oh, it turns out that this world is very different from the Douluo world that he knew in his previous life. Nine continents have been discovered here, and there are three empires here. This is the awakening at the age of twelve. Maybe the author of the novel in the previous life accidentally received part of the information about the world and added his own ideas to write it. Of course it will not be completely correct. "I wrote it in a similar way, so I believe everyone can accept it. But if you write it directly in a set way, you may accept incompetence.

Wardian, the author, you are right to write cool articles, and you are right to write anything. But when did Douluo Continent change its name to Wuhun Continent? When writing a fanfic, you should at least understand the basics of the basics. If you can't remember, just take a look at the original work?

Ask Shennong to test the poison? Sorry, you may have miscalculated. Shennong is already dead. I tore open the crack leading to the netherworld and found the deceased Shennong. His eyes were bleeding and his mouth was foaming. Even the glass stomach he used to test the poison had been corroded. After seeing me, he tremblingly said: "What kind of thing is written on this horse?"

. . . . It's so poisonous, Xiao Wu calls him brother in the first chapter, slaps you in the face and pretends to be the best. The three choices are like forcing you to be the best. The supporting characters are all headless horsemen. It's as if you have returned to the starting point ten years ago overnight. The most poisonous thing is that the protagonist really only knows how to pretend, and he completely chooses puppets. You can tell what to write just by looking at the title. This guy is so terrifying, he is actually a mutated martial spirit! ! ! , Long Wuhun learns the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms haha

He has already died from the poison. I don't know whether it is a good or bad article. But this book is absolutely extremely poisonous. Even with my Shennong physique, I can't bear it.

Take all the girls~ Don't leave any of them~ Especially Zhu Zhuqing, I like this kind of royal sister style.

This book should be renamed Wall-hanging Selection

Using the writing style of Dou Po Cang Qiong to write Douluo Dalu, what we see in the first chapter is what about the son of the patriarch, he is not a waste, he is delicate and frail, so his talent should be very poor. The sidekicks on the roadside all have contemptuous faces... This is a popular cool novel, in which the protagonist slaps someone in the face forcefully. First, there are various routines to suppress him (he is a waste, everyone has it written all over his face that the protagonist is a waste), and then the protagonist slaps him in the face. Twelve-year-old martial arts awakening is divided into levels, first level, second level, third level and fourth level. In the first chapter, a fourth-level genius appeared. It should be Xiao Ning of the Xiao family who should be defeated. Say all kinds of words to the protagonist that you are a waste, why are you a waste? 🤔, then the protagonist awakens the Qinglong martial spirit and slaps him in the face

Wearing the skin of Douluo Continent is actually fighting against the sky

What! ? Douluo Continent has nine continents? ! The Star Luo Empire and the Tiandou Empire are in Xuanming Continent? ! Is there another Galo Empire? !

You can change the settings as much as you want when writing a fanfic. Why don't you write a new book? Taking advantage of the heat?

This is a pretentious novel, and the whole process is pretentious.

As soon as Wuhun appeared and resounded throughout the empire, I wanted to ask the author why Junjiao was not killed. Is it possible that the protagonist's family is already invincible in the world?

I feel like everything except pig's feet is mentally retarded. If I'm not kneeling and licking, I'm kneeling and licking on the way 😁😁

Although I don't watch Douluo Dalu very much, I still remember that they awakened their martial souls when they were about 6 years old! Your protagonist awakens at the age of 12, and Tang San and others are probably between 6 and 7 years old at most.

There is a problem Choice system Choice system You let the protagonist choose everything Every time you give benefits, and as long as something goes wrong, there are two choices that should not be made, and a correct choice with huge benefits. It has been dozens of chapters and there is no setback. It has been a smooth journey and the description of Tang San is obviously not well conceived. Why don't you just don't want Tang San? It's not very good to look coquettishly like this. I hope the author will work hard and get better.