Marvel Road to Survival

Finally I saw an article about IQ online I wanted to read on after reading the first chapter

The biggest problem is still with Wenqing. Literary youth is not just entangled, not just anti-sexy writing, the focus is on self-pleasure -_-||. Whether the plot is enjoyable or not, you, the author, feel like you are immersed in your own story. If it is for signing a contract, even if you want to show more content, you should leave the hope of reading the article to the readers instead of hiding the thread and forcing the readers to follow you to find the thread. It stands to reason that the unexpected is a superb plot presentation technique. Make readers imagine a plot line, and occasionally read unexpected surprises because of your technique, so that some people will read it. In the end, even awakening required a twist and turn, and I was completely happy with the twists and turns. If it were faster, it wouldn't matter if people who read it quickly could finish the plot. The problem is that the plot and updates are very slow.

I have some thoughts on the 25 chapters I have written so far First of all, the protagonist wants to go home, but how to go home? Goldfinger might have some hope. But how to use golden fingers? Points are awarded for heroic actions. So there is a relationship like "Going Home-Goldfinger-Heroic Act". Heroic actions can be said to be more critical in the first half. The protagonist blocks the muzzle of a gun with a young body, works in the kitchen, fights ninjas, and participates in the Hulk battle at close range. These are all tough and fierce fighting scenes. I think the protagonist's attributes and skills are likely to fail in the kitchen. Since we are traveling through time and have a little information advantage, isn't it considered a perfect strategy? Is it possible to use some small traps and routines, add more battles of wits, complete heroic actions at a smaller cost, and diversify heroic actions? Also, I feel that sometimes the protagonist will put heroic actions/points above "going home" or even life... The road to survival becomes the heroic road, the brave road, and finding a way out of wealth and danger. Of course, I am not tired of physical combat scenes and adventure scenes. Perhaps the author also has a strong and enterprising heart.

This book was a long time in the making. The outline took more than twenty pages. I just saw the review from the only book friend in the comment section, which is very pertinent. The protagonist travels through time, turns on the golden finger, and writes a lot of system descriptions, forcing the number of words to be reduced. I'm sorry, I was a little too happy when I was typing the chapter I posted yesterday. I will correct it, and I hope readers will give me a chance to correct my mistakes. The author vows not to poison anyone anymore. In addition, I would like to explain to readers some of the writing ideas for this book. The arrangement of the first volume and the golden finger of the system must be written clearly. I will try to reduce nonsense as much as possible and try to make every word and sentence play a role in promoting the plot. I will also try to keep myself awake, not to indulge in mindless self-excitement, and try to provide readers with a comfortable reading experience. Next, I will try to reduce the description of system cheats as much as possible, and I will omit unnecessary ones. The author will go back and read the comics again to dig out more easter eggs in the main universe and the ultimate universe for readers. Above. Thank you, dear reader!

Penalty kneeling post... The content that was originally expected to be completed in a week has been delayed for half a month due to various reasons. According to the previous rhythm, the return of the protagonist was originally not much. I was ill before, and then I moved. I have been very busy with work recently, and there are suddenly more orders... I originally planned this part of the content to upgrade the protagonist, and by the way, I extended a few settings and added two characters. But I am drunk, I am indeed drunk. This is more abominable than using a systematic description of the number of words for water, and is an unforgivable crime. I would like to apologize to my book friends. The manuscripts currently in my hands have been awakened, and the work on hand is almost completed, so I can free up more time to write. The plan is to finish writing about the return of the protagonist within 20,000 words, but it will not be rushed. It will be completed within three days. The protagonist will return and everything will return to a world dominated by the Marvel Universe. One last thing, in order to apologize to all the book friends, the author plans to do a giveaway after updating this part of the content, and select a few book friends to give something away. The current idea is to send paintings, oil paintings, canvas frames. We have no other specialties. We are still considering how to operate it and whether to accept customization. Finally, a moderate spoiler, the protagonist will gain new abilities, inspired by Daqun, but I think most of them are original things, and there is no point in copying a pure tragedy. For the above, the author would like to apologize to all book friends and ask for forgiveness!

Please 🙏 please don't write about a female protagonist. Please focus on leveling up and go home. I don't like [Gwen]. She feels like a nymphomaniac. The protagonist is only 13-14 years old. [Gwen] is already 16. Moreover, the protagonist just hit a gangster in front of him, so a 16-year-old girl has feelings for a 13-14-year-old child? Then this is too forceful, right?

The opening setting is stunning, but the follow-up is insufficient. A little suggestion: I want the characters to be free from facial expressions, but to be honest, I feel that the author does not have enough writing power to highlight the personalities of so many Marvel characters. If I want to write group portraits and small scene branches, it seems too bland, and the characters do not leave a particularly deep impression on people in the end. It would be more advantageous to capture the personalities of the main characters in Marvel, to deeply characterize them, and to push forward the main storyline. (PS: I feel that the protagonist's abilities in general lottery-style systems are too complex and uncharacteristic. Can the author consider developing a main ability with the protagonist's characteristics?

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Did the author fail to learn biology well?

Hey, if you have something to do when you go abroad, shouldn't you contact the embassy first?

Knowing that he was under suspicion and being monitored, he still forced himself to pretend to be dead. In one word, he was a bitch.

1. The protagonist's statistics are very fake. His strength is increased to 13 and he can arm-wrestle with Jinbing. His speed is also increased to 10+, but he can still only draw a tie? 2. The protagonist looks like a villain. He fights harshly and talks a lot, but he cuts the grass without eradicating the roots. I feel that Jin Cake is the protagonist.

Already invested, don't start a harem!

Wouldn't you be able to write a book without a system?

The protagonist knows that the villain can be resurrected, but there is no last hit, and several small bosses are repeatedly defeated, which is as boring as whack-a-mole.

At first glance, the pig's feet were so miserable. What if he wasn't a super criminal? ! I feel sorry for the audience

Also, the author loves to use exaggerated adjectives to describe female characters. He calls out Black Widow and uses a short paragraph of gorgeous words every time she appears. To be honest, it's really a bit abrupt. Now the starting point is no longer suitable for the stallion writing style n years ago.

Should the author re-set the age of the protagonist? I haven't signed a contract yet to change it. The protagonist you set is still a 13-year-old child, but the hundreds of chapters that follow are not like this, and others take it for granted. This is really poisonous.

I can't stand the author anymore. Are you leaving? Maybe I don't have enough experience. I can't understand the last few chapters. I really can't stand it anymore.

While saying that psychic abilities are infinitely powerful, he was slapped in the face in various ways. Those real bosses are giants in some respects! But they don't have many shortcomings! In Ancient One's comics, if he was not seriously injured, he would use the dark power of a hammer. Look at those ancient beings such as the Godly Horse Collectors, etc. They are all immortal beings. If there were no big changes, he would live to the point where the universe would become extinct. Gu Yi had cultivated to that level, but was beaten down. Psychic power seems to be very strong, but unfortunately it has too big a fatal flaw. Unless you transform into Dr. Manhattan. But after that form, you are not you. You no longer exist, and everything is meaningless.