Rivers and Lakes Spring and Autumn Rivers and Lakes Moon

This may be the first post on this book. I really like this novel written by the author. It's full of Jianghu atmosphere, right from the beginning. Moreover, some colloquial expressions and some modal particles are also used appropriately. Even though the author is naive, I support you. 😜😜Come on!

Since I am still a student, my time to write books is very limited, so the update speed is very slow. But this book is definitely not a eunuch. My writing skills are limited, but as I work hard to practice, the truly exciting part of the story is still to come. I hope everyone can support me and help me a lot...

I think it's pretty good, since it's the first book after all. If you have a general outline of the entire novel, remember to dig more holes and at least complete the first three golden chapters. Remember to keep the storyline full of ups and downs, and don't be overly obsessed with it. The characters are well developed, but maybe the number of words is not enough. I would like to make them as fleshed out as possible. Remember to describe details such as fighting scenes, otherwise readers will have no feeling when watching them. With all due respect, your work does lack details a bit, but it is much better than ordinary online articles 😁

Let me talk about my feelings after reading this book for so long! It can be said that compared to about four other cute new books of different genres that I read at the same time, this one is considered the best among them. Although it cannot be called excellent, it can still be achieved as average. Plot (10 points/7 points) There is that slight difference in the ordinary. The whole book gives me the feeling that there is basically no innovation. But the advantage is that the story reads smoothly. At least compared to other cute novels, it doesn't feel like it's forced to lower one's intelligence, and the dialogue between the characters is relatively natural. The fighting aspect started to feel like it was rushed, but as the plot developed, the writing got better and better, which can be considered a highlight! However, I personally hope that the author will add more twists, or some unexpected plots in it. After all, I personally feel that the plot can be guessed and the general process is relatively smooth. The story (10 points/6 points) is quite satisfactory The overall story gives me the feeling that it is quite satisfactory. It tells a story about experience and finding a sect (currently). In terms of experience, I feel that it is very naive at the beginning, but there will be improvement later on. Then the usual routines are used to attract the old ones, but there is still a certain suspense in it, which makes people want to watch it. However, the audience may not be wide. After all, it feels like a book with two protagonists. I don't know whether the author will determine the protagonist later. Characters (10 points/8 points) Excellent I have to say that the characters are well written. No matter the description, dialogue, or character image, there is nothing that feels particularly wrong. It can be said to be quite excellent. But there are still many aspects that can be improved. At least the characters are not vivid enough, so it can only be said to be good. Summary Originally I didn't plan to say anything, but after thinking about it I decided to say it. I think your book is really good. At least compared to other cute novels I have read, it has the fewest shortcomings and the plot is the smoothest. It can be said that it is not a masterpiece, but it can be achieved in the middle. If it is well promoted, it can barely be regarded as a masterpiece. PS: What I said is not pleasant to the ears, I hope the author will forgive me🤭

Come on! 🤝👍

I'm here, I left a chapter review, and I look forward to visiting you again.

Brother, I'm back. Among the new people I met at the time, you are the only one who is still there. I can only say that things have changed and people have changed. Keep up the good work, brother, I am with you.

I can even feel your mood when writing. In the previous chapters, I can feel that you want to push forward quickly and get the story on the right track, but you are afraid that the pace is too fast and many things cannot be explained clearly. I don't know if I feel right. Come on, come on, find a comfortable rhythm and the writing will become smoother.

After such a long time, I didn't expect that you were still updating ten days ago. It's really amazing! I wish you success in finishing this book!

The story will always end, but the little things that happen between the characters and the small connections between worldly events can always make people smile after recalling it. There must be another me in this world, doing things I dare not do, living the life I want, willing to be a free traveler in the world, and never having any friends in the world.

Why do you have so many words... Every word has more words than mine. Am I too lazy? 🥺🥺🥺

Sit and read your novel. My own thoughts. I just thought of television. I have watched enough TV series. Everything is so ordinary. It has no appeal to readers like me. What appeals to readers like me are the ordinary ones. Ordinary people live a hard and busy life. For firewood, rice, salt and vinegar tea. And running around. Martial arts take pleasure in grudges. As if like an emperor. Watching civilians starve. Just say why not eat minced meat. If you can't give hope, never give it. Temporary happiness will only bring more sorrow. People are greedy. It is the insatiable greed that makes people human. It's all my bullshit at first glance.

Martial arts are immortal and rivers and lakes will last forever. I also have the idea of ​​​​writing martial arts, but I don't dare to double-read the book before it is finished. Come on, if you have time, add it to my book list.

The author works hard, the author comes on, I am optimistic about you 👍👍👍👍

Update quickly, don't stop!