The Strongest Elf Trainer

This plug-in is eye-catching, TM This is probably the most useless plug-in I have ever seen. It only has one insight and nothing else. The author should have named it Pokémon Insight. Anyway, you just have a useless system that depends on the status.

Jiangjiang found another good-looking elf novel and called Dada crazy 😊

Personally, I don't like the data-based writing method. If the author is writing about a game world then that's fine. If it were to describe a real world, this kind of digitization would be off-putting. It doesn't matter if the protagonist can see the elf data himself, but any passerby can tell the elf level, which is very game.

The seven-color aptitude division is quite vulgar. Each one is divided into upper, middle and lower levels, and the lowest level red is also divided into high and low. It's a bit funny. How can the measurement in the Pokémon world be so accurate?

I suggest you revise Chapter 5. It says that not many kings have top-level skills. They are basically all high-level. But later I found that almost all elves have top-level skills, and there are quite a few.

I beg the author to read the Pokémon Encyclopedia. Although the fanfic is simple, it is deep. Moreover, you only need to look at the Pokémon's qualifications, and then its characteristics and personality. What's the use of just looking at the qualifications? If you have good qualifications, how many operations can you give a rubbish character and characteristics? Your battle is too straightforward, and there is no fun in Pokémon battles. It's just a running account, which is boring.

Something similar to the author's has already been put on the shelves. When will it be put on the shelves? ? ? Although there are no subscriptions💰 there are still rewards

The author really has a lot of nonsense... How did you write so much nonsense? I'm impressed! The three golden chapters of others become three chapters of explanation when it comes to you. Settings do not rely on explanations. Settings need to be integrated into the plot to appear logically! Regarding the dialogue between the protagonist and his sister in the previous chapters, every time a person finished a sentence, one or two pages of nonsense would be interspersed before the next sentence appeared. You are really cheating...

When playing online games, orange costumes are the best, but orange qualifications are the worst. A little uncomfortable

I found that those who write about Pokémon nowadays don't even know what Pokémon is called. Most of them read what others write about Pokémon and then follow it. I wonder if I have ever watched Pokémon. Not all Pokémon sound like Pikachu, and their names are just sounds. I get annoyed when I see people who use a word from Pokémon as a sound. Nowadays, fanfics are all written by practitioners. Be more dedicated when practicing. Is it okay to check the information? I can't even notice the humanistic details. I want to be a god. It's a joke.

Come on, author, although the update has stopped again, but I, a bookworm of 10 years, think your writing is still good.

Let's talk about it... It's obvious that the author put a lot of thought into setting it up! But the more settings there are, the more careful you have to be and the writing skills to control them. After just reading four chapters, I found many unreasonable places or bugs, so I'd like to mention them a little! ————————————————————- 1. As mentioned before, rebirth is good, but it is obviously not the case if the protagonist does not have a golden finger. The panel that accompanies the protagonist's rebirth will appear immediately afterwards. ———— 2. A family spends 10,000 yuan a month. It takes at least 50,000 to gain combat power for the insect type. Is this price a family can't afford? There is an obvious gap with the many difficulties mentioned above. ———————————————— 3. A purple level player may not even have a championship! The standard equipment for the champion is only blue level, and the king, which is slightly inferior to the champion, is a mixture of blue and green or at most all blue. So the question is, is it only a little less qualified than the Heavenly King Elf, and is even expected to become the Green Level of the Heavenly King team, just appear in the public and let ordinary people buy it? What level should the better Alliance Yusanjia be? The pit is obviously huge! ! ———————————————————————— 4 My sister should want to create the image of a sensible little housekeeper, but it is obvious that the author's skills are a bit insufficient. As a girl fan, I feel completely indifferent and even a little disgusted after reading it... ——————————————- 5. There is also a problem with the writing style. The content is too protracted. It feels like I am repeating things I know, and the setting is like making people memorize formulas.

Everyone has a Pokémon world in their heart, please don't judge other people's books. The author stopped writing any comments.

Author, your writing is good, but the result may be mediocre due to several reasons. I will give you some suggestions. 1. Change the name. This name is difficult to find and not attractive enough. It's better to change it to something like "Elf's Beginning with a Magikarp" 2. There is often a feeling of discontinuity between chapters. I hope you can pay attention to it.

Why doesn't the author write anymore?

It looks pretty good. Keep up the good work, and wait for more updates.

I thought I was specialized in the water system, but after working on it for a long time, I became a master of all systems.

Please update more, 😭 writes well.

If it comes back, please let me know. . . . .

The cool night makes me miss you like a river.

You yourself know that the rainy day team is too restrictive, so you still have to start the five-day team

The protagonist has the potential to become a superpower, but is worried about mediocrity and doesn't want to become a superpower. Can't you understand this? It can be one main and one auxiliary. If you become a superpower, you can assist. Convenient for silent command and teleportation to improve your own safety. Then there is no contradiction in becoming a powerful trainer wholeheartedly.