The World of Beast Control

The writing of this book was okay. The slap in the face at the beginning was a bit unnatural, but by the fifty or sixtyth chapter it was much better, and the progress was visible to the naked eye. It's also good if the golden finger is not too big. If the golden finger is too big, it will be too easy for the protagonist's strength to improve, which will lead to easy collapse in the later stage. I have read several articles like this. Here, Goldfinger is used as a tool for the protagonist to communicate with other people with strong backgrounds on an equal footing, rather than letting this one surrender and accepting that younger brother every day, who is also a arrogant and proud son of the emperor. Also, the overall IQ of the supporting characters is above average, and there is no inexplicable dislike for the protagonist (except for An Ran and Zhang Jie at the beginning). It can be seen that after the author said that he wanted to let himself go, his writing became more natural, and the overall article was relaxed and humorous.

Come on, although there are flaws, just ignore them, you can see them

The author can look at other works like summons, cards, and pets to improve his narrative skills. I recommend "The Elf Master" more. The author wanted to write a plot about pretending to be a slap in the face and competing for dominance, but you did not foreshadow it. After writing one thing, you directly moved on to another. There were too few plot transitions in the middle and too many omissions. It feels like the protagonist has nothing to do in life except fighting. The hierarchy of this article is too monotonous and too simple. The setting is good. If the author can improve his writing skills, maybe this book will become a hit.

The characters and background are not shaped and reflected, there are too many transitions between events, and the reading is scattered. The author says that newcomers should be treated leniently. Come on, download this book

Everyone should know the properties. Mythology systems are mostly exotic beasts from the Classic of Mountains and Seas, Celestial systems are celestial bodies such as stars and meteors, Mechanical systems include mechas, and Demon systems are those that have been immersed in source power for a long time and evolved into source beasts. For example, a microwave oven becomes a source beast. Its main position is the demon system, and its secondary attribute is the mechanical system. When it is powered on, it will also add an electric system. In short, how to match it depends on how you develop your own little brain! Currently, not many maps are open, including Thunder Pond, Sword Pond, Glacier Plain, Beast Plains... You can choose to add a birth location after the plot progresses. Original beasts are divided into juveniles, complete bodies, ultimate bodies (ultimate forms), and super evolutions Suzaku, Azure Dragon, White Tiger... The five holy beasts have been determined to guard the space. The format is as follows: Name: Electric Crocodile Level: Level 3 - Level 5 (common) Attribute: Water, Electricity Quality: Gold Evolved form: Complete body Source spell: active source spell, passive source spell

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How many people are watching, I... I am almost autistic...

While protecting school classmates, his card crystal collapsed. Didn't the school show any signs of it?

There's something wrong with this chapter division. It's like a TV series that doesn't give you time to breathe. It's very tiring to watch.

After reading more than ten chapters, I found that there are still a lot of problems First of all, in terms of plot, the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, being ridiculed and then pretending to be slapped in the face is too simple and has been seen too much. Moreover, the enemies in the Novice Village are because the protagonist has a deep background and is a goddess at the same table. This plot feels really nothing new. The second problem is the setting. After reading more than ten chapters, the protagonist monster has fought several waves. As a pet beast writer, it is still not clear how many monsters one person can control. The second is the issue of the human realm. It seems that as long as you have the talent to control pet beasts, no matter what level of pet beast card you get, you can control it as long as you identify the owner with blood. It does not require that the pet beast you control must be played by yourself. Then there will be a problem that is easy to collapse. For example, if a family has thirty beast masters, can this family spend a lot of money and find connections to buy a powerful level seven summoned beast? I don't know the number of cards that a pet master can hold (you mentioned four several times), so let's count them as four (you also mentioned seven once). One day, we can have thirty people at level five, which means a total of one hundred and twenty level five cards. Then I will use a level seven leader and a hundred and twenty level five cards to besiege the level six beasts. In total, One day I will be able to have all the members at level 6, and then I will besiege level 7, and then all the members will be at level 7 to besiege level 8... Coupled with the loyal pet masters recruited on the road of growth, it can be said that as long as the gap in the later levels is not so big that 10,000 low-level ones can't defeat one higher-level one, I can keep going like this... I can keep going until all the members are top-level summoned beasts. (The process may not be smooth sailing, but it is absolutely possible) Author, do you think this is true? Of course, I have only read a dozen chapters, and I have recently read a lot of books with similar settings that are easy to collapse, so I came here to complain about it, there is no other meaning.

After reading six chapters, the only thing I feel is that I hate the female supporting role Cheng Xuan, especially after the dual personality comes out, it is really disgusting. If it hadn't been for her, the original Zhang Jian wouldn't have died. Although she was only the indirect promoter of the murder of the original owner, and the protagonist was not dead in her eyes, she was the one who caused the genius of the original owner to fall. Why could she feel at ease and act like a normal person? It would be even more disgusting if she didn't expect it. After all, the original owner had no enemies. Just think about it and you would know that the original owner suffered because of her. It's also disgusting to use the original owner as an excuse to reject people. She doesn't care about the original owner, is not a friend, and doesn't have the original owner's consent, so she uses the original owner as an excuse to reject people without permission, and is indifferent to the protagonist. It's really disgusting. If you ask me, this female supporting role should be punished. Like the two cannon fodder, she must pay the price for killing a human life.

It's too fake, the plot arrangement is a bit too deliberate, and some plots happened inexplicably. I watched a few paragraphs where there was nothing at the beginning, and then suddenly there was a plot that couldn't connect with the previous one. It's totally wrong. Entering the ancient monuments and Five Million actually chose to enter the ancient monuments. It's funny that you can't get anything after entering. Yes, there is a system. As long as you have the formula and money, you can't get any pets. I didn't read it later. Entering the ancient ruins will still be life-threatening. There is a system to fight for your life. It would be even more funny if there is no life-threatening. I can't even understand the world. Most of the settings are not written out. I can't understand it at all It's strange that some people have read it. I guess no one has read it after Chapter 20. I can't stand it at all. Starting point is that there are all kinds of books except pornographic and too dark and violent books.

I'm gone. I wish the author will be a god in his next book.

Actually, I just want to know if this book has a single female protagonist or a harem. I personally like single female protagonists, because! You think about it, if a man has two or three women, he will definitely be happy. But if you think about it differently, how would you feel if your woman had two or three men? So it is better to have a single female protagonist.

Seeing the fourth-level mutated crocodile fighting the third-level doghead, I really can't figure it out. It's embarrassing to write just to slap in the face.

The writing about beasts is good, but the person is not very good, he is a flaky person. Take a look at the books on god-level beast control and other things for reference. You should also keep up with the strengthening of the beast master's body. {"NickName":"Author","UserId":90646}

The writing is a mess, the writing is not good, the plot is not good, and even the mission creation is problematic. A book that is so rubbish that it cannot be rubbish anymore

The plot develops too fast in the early stage, and the power system feels a bit broken. After the ninth level, several levels should be set. Female characters should slowly appear. There should not be too many in the early stage. The geographical divisions are also very vague. The types of source beasts should be well controlled. Don't make it confusing. The outline should be as detailed as possible, step by step. The story development should not be rushed, and the preparations should be made well in advance. The passion of fighting, the glory of winning the championship, the warmth of life, the joy of surviving a desperate situation, the elusive ambiguity between men and women, the changes in goals of the protagonist, the help of each other to encourage trust and letting go I am a ten-year-old bookworm, Douluo Continent, Favorite, Long Live Summoning, Starting from Scratch, Super God Gene, Monster Paradise, Pet King, Divine Beast Control, Elf Mobile Phone, Nine-Star Poisonous Milk, and this one more book, I felt uncomfortable after reading it in one sitting! The votes are all in the hands of the author, and you will be given as many updates as you want.

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I think the writing is very good. Why are some people so weird?

This book is over. When will the next book be released? 😁 The next book will continue the pet flow~

The story of this book is okay. However, the author's writing is really not flattering. Is this the same state when the author talks or thinks in real life?

Those who don't really like this kind of fusion, what's their thinking?

If it really doesn't work, just copy the outlines of other people's good books. It will be much better if you write it yourself as a fan. Once you have mastered it, you can write it yourself.