The Thief Should Leave

I have to say that the style of the book, especially the middle and early stages, has the flavor of ancient dragon martial arts and martial arts of that period. And the writing is also very good. Although it is short, it is not a big problem after finishing the book because the rhythm is well controlled. As for the discontinuation of updates, it won't be a problem after finishing the book. So from the beginning until the battle between Li Si and the old monk from Jinshan Temple, I was immersed in that artistic conception. However, I have to say that when the old monk asked Li Si to kill him, saying that it was the cause and effect that was determined from the beginning, I felt a little inconsistent. After the old monk and the strange old man left, this incongruous feeling gradually made me break away from the artistic conception of this book, so I clicked on the book circle to want to write something. If the old monk wanted to train Li Si to kill himself from the beginning, then the author's change in the name of him in the novel may be a foreshadowing. The little ghost at the beginning had no emotions and was just happy to see Lie. The later Si'er showed that the old monk should have given his feelings. The later donor Li proved that he was determined to let Li Si understand him if he became a demon. But does that erase the emotional changes in between? Can this erase or explain the old monk's kindness to Li Si? And, based on the old monk's changes in mood and the relationship between Li Si, would he really not understand Li Si's feelings towards Jinshan Temple and him? Then why bother pointing out a possible way and model for him to survive at the end? If he is ruthless, then letting Li Si kill the old monk is already a kind of torture, and letting Li Si continue to live tiredly after his heart is dead is even more torture. This is malice from the beginning, not goodwill. But why should the old monk have any ill intentions towards Li Si? If the evil monk after being possessed by the devil is evil, why should he not kill people and just do whatever he wants? Why should he explain that Yuanjie wants to die? And why do you need to say you won't do those things before you die? This is a contradiction. If the monk before his death was kind, then he should naturally have feelings for Li Si and want to resolve Li Si's indifference. Then why did he describe his relationship with Li Si as a tool-like cause and effect? Li Si's unhappiness was entirely due to the murder of his master. He was already half-dead when the old monk said it was cause and effect. If the old monk is kind, then why let him live while letting him completely die? This is another paradox. So based on the above analysis, the author should have designed the plot for the purpose of torture, the death of the monk, and the death of Li Sixin. I don't think it's bad to decide on the outcome first and then the outline, but I think the author can reconsider it when creating in the future. You can torture for the sake of torture, but I hope the plot and details will no longer contradict themselves. Because it is a pity that such a well-coordinated and well-coordinated work appears in such a place. In addition, in my opinion, Li Si's relationship with various women is indeed a bit straight. At first, when there were few ambiguous women, I thought it was okay, because in fact Gu Long's novels are very macho. In fact, it is understandable. Of course, imagination is allowed in novel creation. But there are more and more female characters like this in the latter part. In the short space of the story, there are so many women that it can be said that one by one falls into disgrace, which is really excessive. Because this is not consistent with the protagonist's setting. Li Si was an old man in his last life. He should know the appropriateness when getting along with women. Even if it's the attitude towards game life, the first one doesn't know, the second one doesn't know, and the third one should know by now. Moreover, the character set up is that he is attached to his deceased wife and cannot forget her. So actually after the Baihua Valley Valley Master's mind becomes clear, it's time to pay attention. And to be honest, the subsequent roles and experiences of the female supporting characters can also promote the development of the plot if they are replaced by male identities such as the orphans of the Iron Sword Sect... So many times it feels like the hero saves the beauty for the sake of the hero... In fact, it doesn't matter. Chu Liuxiang has also been among thousands of flowers, and no leaf has touched him. But at least he searched the ship. There were three women on the ship. It was not a setting where he was attached to his dead wife and therefore could not really accept the world... When the adopted little girl blushed later... It was somewhere between reasonable and unreasonable. The Electra complex is of course reasonable, but it is not necessarily necessary... Especially when the plot develops to this point... It just leaves clues and has no meaning. So the emotional setting is another self-contradictory point... I can only say that I still hope that the obscenity is moderate and the plot is reasonable. This is a book that I ordered directly. When the female general came to visit me, I cut it out and wrote this review. I really felt something about it. The excellent parts are really too good, which makes me have the urge to complain about some parts that I think could be improved. If you, the author, feel offended after reading this, I would like to apologize. That was not my intention. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write better works.

1: After reading Sister Nan of NPC, at first, when I read this article, I had an indescribable feeling. I always wished that the protagonist of this book was also a woman. It seems that the writing style of the heroine and NPC can better reflect the emotions soaked in the text. Because I am a male, I may be more emotionally invested in the female protagonist. But no matter what, I still like the NPC style very much. It is my first time to write such a long book review, and I just want to support the author＾0＾~ After all, I used to like a book, but now I like an author. 2: Sister Nan's Extra (Have you seen the voice of the broad masses of the people? The people's will is above all else) Funny~

I am a junior high school student, and my dream is to be a writer. Unfortunately, my parents ask me to study hard now, so now I have to read more books and accumulate experience. Today I will analyze the writing style of NPC. I started to pursue NPC books since "My commander is Riven". At that time, NPC writing was just like normal online writing, there was nothing much to talk about, but this was also a stage. Next, there is "The Poor Man". I believe that most people will read it three or four times like me, so they also see something different. Just like someone in the comment area was surprised by the writing style of "The Poor Man" and decided not to change it. Although the gap between the two books is indeed very large, we can also find a sense of gradient. First of all, it is the beginning of "Poor Ghost". It is a standard beginning of a web novel. It is extremely unnatural, but also ordinary. I think this is the reason for improper arrangement of the narrative method. Specifically, you can look at the beginning of "Shao Song". I think this is a better time-travel arrangement among historical time-travel novels. Because of this beginning, we can conclude that the NPC has not been replaced. As for the real transformation of writing style, I think it happened after the Battle of Changping. The specific reason is not only the coloring of the pen and ink, but also some foreshadowing in the early stage, which highlighted the change in mentality during the Battle of Changping. The character description also made a modern character like Gu Nan truly come alive, and the weight of history has already appeared. The writing style here places emphasis on background and atmosphere, but not on characters. The second small change occurred in the Three Kingdoms after the destruction of Qin. I think it can also be detected from the interaction between King Qin and Sister Nan during the unification of the late Qin Dynasty. Here is a focus on characters, a medium atmosphere, and a medium background. Here, due to the weakening of the background and atmosphere, the weight of history is no longer obvious. However, it also relies on the rich description of characters and the immortality brought about by the resurrection from the dead, and the sadness and loneliness of immortality are revealed. Therefore, this change in writing style seems more natural. Personally, I am more inclined to the later writing style. The pinnacle of this kind of description is in "The Messenger", but the performance of this book is not good. I think one is that it is too literary and a little less exciting. The other is that the name at the beginning is really not good, but I think the writing style at this time is the most appropriate and just right. It can also be seen here that the writing style of NPC still emphasizes characters, which is necessary in online articles. If the character description is not emphasized, there will be no sense of substitution. Finally, this is "The Thief". To be honest, I just couldn't stand it after reading the beginning, so I only analyzed the beginning. The beginning is extremely unnatural, even more unnatural than the beginning of "Poor Ghost", because the beginning of "Poor Ghost" is just cliche, while the unnatural feeling of "Thief" comes from the writing style. The writing style is complicated and redundant. The description of the environment at the beginning is quite good. Although the protagonist is not introduced at the beginning, the NPC after all It is also a privilege of an old author to have high reader tolerance, and the connection between the description of the environment at the beginning and the appearance of the protagonist is okay. I read it several times and found that the problem lies in the "artificiality" of the character description. I want to write too deliberately to create an ethereal and freehand feeling, which makes the writing cumbersome. It is not easy for Internet articles to be overly literary. The deep conception of "The Messenger" is within the acceptable and even lovable range, but the rhetoric of "The Thief" can be retro, but it makes the article unnatural. I can't tell you the specifics. I am just a junior high school student and a reader. I can discuss different opinions, but don't attack me brainlessly. Thank you.

This book is so good, why is it only read by hundreds of thousands of people? , Obviously the author's writing level is very high

This is a condiment. If you have read many exciting stories about fighting, killing, and upgrading to slap people in the face, you will feel extra relaxed when reading "The Thief Will Leave" The rhythm of the world in the author's works is very slow. The slower it is, the more out of touch with modern times, and the more it smells like a river and lake. He is a knight, a thief and a thief. Although the protagonist has traveled through time, his thinking is not so modern. This is particularly important and makes the whole world view and painting style harmonious. Gratitudes, resentments, and hatreds are all intertwined, and the interaction between the characters is much more enjoyable than simply fighting and killing. The conflicts in the story are not obvious, so most of the character interactions and inner monologues become the main focus, and group portraits are very important. I can still remember the swordsman and the old man in disguise. When looking at Jianghu, one still needs to look at chivalry and willfulness. I think I enjoyed watching it. However, the plot feels relatively scattered, but if it doesn't break up, it becomes just killing monsters and upgrading, which is not fun. If a big event can be concluded in the later stage, then the group portraits described in the early stage will be great. Of course, I am an engineering student, and I haven't read many books. I just want to share it with book friends and give feedback to the author, that's all. The lights of swords and shadows, the conversation and laughter. The woman looked back again, watching the figure in white getting further and further away. As if she thought of something, she hurriedly chased forward and shouted loudly, "Thieves, please leave!"

The Taoist priest of the Taishan sect really left a deep impression on me. I can't remember his name, but I really didn't expect that such a person who simply sacrificed his life for justice would appear in an online novel. The feeling is really great. Such a person should be a real hero. In order to save innocent lives, even if he knows that he will die, he still has to fight hard. I really like this role.

I am a bookworm with 10 years of reading experience. During this period, I read a lot of great stories and short stories. The first time I learned about the author was the book "Poor Ghost". I was attracted by the faint sadness in the text when I read it. After finishing it, I have always liked this kind of articles. I was still looking for this kind of articles on the Internet. Later, I read this book in the book review and others said it was good, so I started to follow it. The more I read, the more familiar I felt, and the author turned out to be true. I unexpectedly discovered that this author has written 3 books, and I have read each one. Really, after reading articles for 10 years, I have forgotten many books after reading them. There are very few books that I can recall, but every character and every book written by this author can still be fresh in my memory. It's really great to meet you. I am your forever reader and I will always support you.

I came from piracy, which is not a glorious thing, but this author is the first one who made me want to read the official version and support it, 😁

From the previous book "Poor Ghost", the author is still as warm and simple. Among the many martial arts books now, this is the most comfortable one for me to read. In fact, this is right. There is a reason why the martial arts are decent. The villains also have their own love and hatred, but there are also hateful things. The reason why we like martial arts is that we like that The goal of walking across the world with a sword is to be free and happy, just for the pride of drawing a sword to help when there is injustice on the road. All kinds of conspiracies are nothing. To put it bluntly, people in the Jianghu are warriors. Martial arts practitioners are very bloody. Why do they do so many calculations all day long? Maybe there are many conspiracies in reality, but we always have a dream of a happy Jianghu, that is, a dream of a happy Jianghu.

Do people really take nothing with them after death? Maybe, but I don't want to live a free and easy life like Li Si, without worries and wandering alone. But I also imagine that he values ​​love and justice. This book gave me this feeling: maybe this is what happens when people grow old, passing away with a touch of regret. But I still feel that this is the most beautiful time in life. With most of my disappointment and a little bit of satisfaction, I welcome something as important as my birth. I feel that it is extremely happy for a person to have such an ending for such a long time in his life, to summarize, to reminisce, and to have an ending to everything about himself. An old man should not be afraid of his own death, just like the old man named Gongsun at the end of the book. Every story has an ending, whether sad or happy, it is its own unique and most precious treasure. We may regret at the end of our lives: No matter whether my life is magnificent or ordinary, there are some unsatisfactory things. But more importantly, satisfaction is a kind of heartfelt praise for everything in the world, good or bad. A hymn to yourself for living and living, and for every breath of air that you breathe is extraordinarily sweet. Only when people touch the bitter lips of death can they appreciate the sweetness of life. What will Li Si think of before he dies? Is it his deceased wife, his bond, his best friend, or his lifelong romance? I don't know, but what I know is: he is very plain, like a rotten tree, he accepted himself and accepted death. I was thinking: Wouldn't he have any complaints? He had no worries before his death, and there was no one, not even one, to accompany him throughout his life. But I understand: This is a rotten tree, A rotten tree that is dying, A rotten tree that should have died long ago. Experienced countless wind and rain, Bloomed and withered, playing in the world He may be the last branch on the tree, But he refused to die, because he felt: No matter how you live, living is bliss. So this rotten tree went to seek a way to live again. He understood from the two forked dead trees that struggled with each other: He wanted to have a clear conscience. What I love most about life is nothing more than this While experiencing death, helplessly, and living shamelessly. He died, he died peacefully, without a trace of ripples. However, he smiled before he died; Although even the remaining body rotted in the soil, nothing would be left. He smiled: Looking at the green grass growing in his body. Wry smile and said: I am really a piece of rotten wood. When a person dies, can he really take nothing with him or leave nothing? Is it living when a person has no worries? Is he free and easy or lonely? What is the purpose of this journey? I got the answer.

Li Si once brought the words of Nirvana to Yuan Jie: "Buddha is not a human being, and he does not save people, but monks save people." The Diamond Sutra mentions that "in this way, countless and boundless sentient beings are annihilated, and there are really no sentient beings who can be annihilated." All living beings can achieve Buddha enlightenment by relying on their own true nature. It looks like the Buddha is saving all living beings, but in fact all living beings are saving themselves. The awakened one is conscious.

Participate in the March Book Friends Circle book review event. Character: Tiger Girl. Evaluation: There is a strong side externally, but also a true softness inside. Original text: When he took off the Tiger Tiger Girl's coat, he couldn't help but be stunned for a moment, because the scars on the girl's body were a bit too many. There are more than a dozen marks on the back alone, both old and new. It really looks a bit ferocious and terrifying. "It's ugly, isn't it?" There was silence. The Tiger Girl sat with her back to Li Si, her head lowered, her eyes opened, and she asked lightly with a self-deprecating smile on her lips. She looked a little sad because she knew that anyone who saw the scars on her back would be frightened. But she didn't know why. When she felt the hand on her back paused, she felt a sense of loneliness in her heart. "It's up to me whether I think you're ugly or not. I think you're pretty, do you care?" Shu Tiger Girl sat blankly, and after a while, she felt her nose was a little sore. Then she couldn't bear it any longer, turned around, hugged Li Si's neck, buried her face on his shoulder, and cried loudly. She cried terribly and her voice was hoarse. Her short hair rubbed against Li Si's cheek and trembled as she cried.

It's over, well, to be honest, I'm not very happy. The lonely ghost is on the road again, and he is a wanderer again. After all, the beauty has no results, and he has to take care of the falling flowers. But I think if Brother Si'er goes all the way, maybe one day he will find her. I hope those women are all that her.

Although I don't know much about martial arts novels, this book really made me feel the meaning of chivalry, which is a kind of "state". There is also the character of the character, which the author has a good sense of proportion. Sometimes if it is more chivalrous, it is artificial, if it is less chivalrous, it is not smart enough. In addition, it can be seen that the author also attaches great importance to the art of naming. He cuts into the big picture of Jianghu from details like this, allowing people to get a glimpse of the leopard and get a glimpse. This also makes me like it - Jianghu can be big or small. But in terms of plot, the twists and turns seem not enough, and the meaning of "martial arts" is too light and too peaceful. By the way, the love scene of the protagonist really made me full of doubts... Later, the writing method of seclusion and women's clothing also shows that the novel is more daily, relaxed and entertaining. In fact, this is understandable, but I still feel that it is not interesting.

Damn, oh, oh, oh, damn, you're so damn good-looking, awesome, awesome, awesome.

This is the third NPC book I've read. Although I didn't like part of the book, I still finished it. Overall, I think the book is still of good quality and the writing style is still the same. But I have to mention one thing. The plot of the whole book is very blunt, or there is basically no main line. It is still very important to read the main line of the novel, just like the spine. The plot of the book Thief is very poor and the promotion is very dry. While the plot is incoherent, the character growth is not obvious. Character creation has always been the strength of NPC. But in this book, this is a problem. Gu Nan in "The Poor Ghost" grew up in history, and the emergence of the original humanity in "The Messenger" all had growth factors. However, Li Si (the original name is too difficult to find), the growth in the article is not obvious, and it is basically invisible in the first 60%. In the end, the growth is only seen when Li Si leaves the world. In terms of values, I don't agree with some of NPC's views, such as choosing not to love because I'm afraid of losing my loved one. This depends on my personal point of view. I hope Li Si can let go of his worries and pursue beauty, even if he still loses everything in his life in the end. Isn't it better to pursue beautiful processes and experiences than to wait lifelessly for death? I am not afraid of losing beauty, but I am more afraid of not having the courage to pursue beauty. When you meet someone you like, chase after it bravely. When you meet something you like, fight for it. Failure is nothing more than that. Li Si is immersed in his past life experience. He loves his wife deeply and chooses to escape from the world in this life. I can understand his mood, but I will not do this. If her wife could see Li Si, her lover who was so haggard for love and who was "bound" by her for life after life, she would be more heartbroken and sad than satisfied.

I think this is the Jianghu and martial arts in my heart. Nowadays, many books on the martial arts channel are fantasy, fairy tale, and science fiction (system) books. Very boring. This book's writing style is okay. But I am very satisfied with the word "Xia".

As an old bookworm who has read a lot of books except fan fiction, this book is really good. Generally speaking, martial arts novels can only be understood clearly if you read them a lot. I think Jin Yong and the Queen of Ancient Dragons can write very few like this.

The author's writing is particularly beautiful, especially the first half, which has a cologne-like feel. It's super exciting. Personally, I feel that working in a restaurant is a bit boring. I haven't encountered such a martial arts novel in a long time. The descriptions of Jianghu are also very realistic. There is no particularly exaggerated force that is worth the money, and there is no hypocritical sense of complete justice. The character creation The production is very successful. The story is very immersive and boring but very attractive. I feel that it ended without reading enough. It is indeed as the author said that this is a very "empty" world. There is also the doggerel at the end. The writing is superb (I have limited education. This book is very good but I can't describe it at all. Don't be ridiculous. You are right🙏🙏)

The writing of NPC is really good. The novel has a deep sense of immersion and the writing style is also very good (I really doubt that he is a cross-dressing man). I remember when I watched Pauper, I was in a sad state when he was abused all day long. I hope this one will not be so abusive anymore and give Brother Si a better ending.

I have a hunch that this book will become the second poor book

When I read The World's Best Qinggong at the beginning, I naively thought it was just a cool book. It was so painful 😭

After the author becomes famous (sooner or later), the comic version of this book will definitely be awesome (=^▽^=)

"Are you here?" A man in white wearing a bamboo hat sitting under a tree said to Li Si walking from the roadside. "Well, this proves that your guess is correct. But it's been almost fifty years since we last met. Why are you still so young?" Li Si said with a smile. "I'm different from you. Your Qinggong allows you to travel through space after reaching a certain level, but I'm just a walker in time." The man wearing a bamboo hat said. The bamboo hat covered her face, but Li Si felt that she was smiling. Li Si also smiled: "Before I came here, I met a very strange messenger. It seemed that she knew there was some evil in me. I asked her what else she saw, and she said there were some blessings. I asked her what kind of person I was, and she said I was a good person and a fool. I am not a good person, I am a thief. Sister Nan, what are you? Who is he?" Gu Nan took off his hat and revealed his beautiful face: "I have seen that person before, and I must have had more evil in him than you. I have also told you my story. I am a sinner, and I am a man." Li Si looked at her and said, "According to my age in this life, I am older than you." Gu Nan's face turned dark. Li Si said: "It's time for me to go, I'm dying, maybe this is the last time we meet." Gu Nan didn't look at him, and pulled out a black sword without a check in his hand. The sword was silver, like a pool of clear water, reflecting her eyes: "Goodbye, I wish you a good life in the next life, and don't be a dead tree again." There were no unnecessary farewell words. There were so many people leaving, and she didn't know what to say. She had been here like this for two thousand years. She suddenly remembered something: "Have you gone to see her?" Li Si stood up and said, "Her, she is living a good life, she doesn't have much pain anymore, she is alive and well, and I don't have to disturb her anymore." After that, he left. Under the same tree, the man in white put on a bamboo hat again, hugged a black stick, sat on the ground, put a bookbox at his feet, and fell asleep leaning against the tree.

From Ruiwen to Poor Gui, from Poor Gui to Chu, and then from Chu to Li Si. A few years have passed quietly, and the friends around me are no longer there and have gone to distant places. When I said goodbye, I always said goodbye by fate, even though I know the world is so big, and we can't say goodbye if we can get along for a few years. However, there is always an invisible but always present thread in reading the NPC book, and that is fate.

The author's books are so beautiful that I have read every one of them. In that book I found when I was in a book shortage, I accidentally saw the author's name, and it was a familiar person, from Riwen to Gu Nan to Chu and Li Si. Thank you, author, and I will always support you.

Now I really, really miss the author so much, and then he wrote the dog food like crazy, and let the dog food shoot randomly... Now it's really... What I'm going to say next is very scary Don't be afraid, npc, this book, the protagonist is single... ... He is really the kind of writer with a very special writing style, the kind that makes people reluctant to give up, the kind of pain and happiness...

Hello, I am a fan of your books. I write this mainly to express my support and gratitude to you. I started following "Ruiwen", and now the fandom seems to have changed a lot. Although each of your books covers different genres, the protagonist is a gentle person who faces everything gently and bears everything gently. Although the protagonist always encounters various hardships, because of the small kindness he holds in his heart, he attracts the company or help of countless partners. That's what fascinates me—still seeing the kindness in the world and the glimmers of humanity through your books. In addition, the protagonists all have a yearning for order and a better tomorrow. Because of this, their actions and dedication can be understood by readers - there are always people working silently to make the world a better place. I believe you are also a very positive person. Although I know you also encountered some troubles during the writing process, I believe you must have overcome them well now. I thought about leaving you a comment and leaving a message to support you before, but after all, life has become a waste of time. Now that we are approaching the end of the year, I want to complete this matter after all, so with this private letter, don't be surprised if it is late. In short, I hope you go well and create better works. If I remember correctly, are you still in college? Pay attention to your studies, haha. Happy New Year in advance. ——A firefly attracted by the candlelight.

Poor Ghost was removed from the shelves, and then I discovered a problem. I paid to watch it, so I should count as buying the book, but it was removed from the shelves without any notice. No compensation was given to me! ! I feel my rights have been violated. I decided to defend my rights, otherwise the books I bought that have been removed from the shelves will be packaged and sent to me. Otherwise, give me your money back! !

I don't understand why the author has to label every novel as "relaxing" to trick me into a meal of healing.