Cultivation of Immortality and Chasing Husband

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The number of recommendation votes is amazing, the writing is very good, looking forward to updates

Come on, it looks great. I'm chasing you.

Come on! The results are really good, looking forward to the update!

I rarely read online novels, and I have little experience in writing books myself, and I am also a newbie. There may be some biased points, please understand. After seeing your post, I came here to read it and read 3 chapters. To be honest, the writing style is indeed very good. It can be seen that the author has requirements for himself and does not perfunctory himself. But I may not be used to it, because there are too many people appearing, the names are too similar, and the way of speaking is too close. I can't remember it. It's hard to tell who is who. In addition, I remember a playwright said that a movie must quickly capture the audience in the first 6-9 minutes, so that the audience can watch the next 90 minutes. I found that this is a common problem in most books, that is, there is never a contradiction in the front, but the background must be explained, the characters introduced, and the contradiction hidden deep. Maybe that includes myself. But for fairy tales and ancient costumes, I think it involves a grand background. If the conflicting attractions are not shown quickly in the front, then the pace will be very slow, and I will not be able to get the point of what the protagonist is going to do later. I think it should be an arrangement issue. Forgive me.

[Personal comment, please delete if you don't like it] It is impossible to make a long comment. It is impossible to make a long comment in this life. T_T The writing is this kind of ancient style work. If you want to escape easily, you will inevitably have to use modern vocabulary, but if you put the modern vocabulary in it, it will look very strange. T_T Right? There's no problem with the plot

The characters in the first chapter are a bit confusing, especially the pretender, who is confused with the characters. There are already many characters, but writing this way makes it more confusing and does not make the article more interesting.

Thank you, thank you for your support and love for this book, thank you for your recommendation votes

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I have been busy revising the novel these days, so I have not updated it for a long time. Now "Cultivation of Immortality and Chasing Husband" has been completely revised, only minor adjustments have been made! ! ! Added something to the content. After the revision, the number of words has also changed from the original 47,000 to 52,000. (Without adding new chapters)

The writing is good, the writing style is good, the author is good, the beginning is interesting, the memories and the foreshadowing laid by the author seem to be a time traveler, and interesting. Different from the female videos I have seen before, the protagonist of the whole novel has a lively personality.

The little cutie who watched it should leave some traces, otherwise I thought no one saw it.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Come on ^0^~, it's well written!

"Only You Never Regret in This Life" is a dialogue-style novel, please compare it~

Come on, I'm optimistic about you. I've followed you and encouraged each other

Thanks to Broken Moon Suckling Pigeon, Ai Qiu e, Angry Rain, Ye Youqianchen, Qianqiu Wushuang, Leng Qinchenxue, Fengcheng with Love, Talent, Legend of the Gods, Xiaoshuai, OK, Beiyou Jiamu and other book friends for their support and their persistent recommendation votes. Because I have to take the exam soon, I have to slow down the update. I am really sorry. In order to prevent readers from having to click in from time to time to see that I have not updated, I will now explain the update time! ! ! In order to prevent those friends who invest from failing in their investment, a chapter will be updated every six days in the future. Sorry, those book friends who have read the article must not abandon the article ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

I just played the song "Love Without Boundaries" and while reading my novel, I was so moved by my own story😂

Come on! ! ! ! I wish you success!

OK! Come to read again late at night!

Good morning! The happy Double Eleven shopping period is over, and you can read with peace of mind!

It's so lively here, pop in and take a look.

I have already read it and read all the chapters. This has to be a bit slow!

The character of Yin Lian'er is well portrayed, I like it very much

A book that the more I read, the more I want to read it!

DaDa is a man of culture 😂 I write so well that I dare not comment. I wish the author DaDa will be a hit once the book is finished 😂

Several love stories in Chasing a Husband are also very touching. The sentences that impressed me the most are that love may be humble, and what I bet on is just this little bit of luck. And later, I'm sorry, I'm late, after all, I owe him ten years. There is also the sentence in the story of the tree demon Alan in the next thirty chapters. I know that you were the one who carried the burden for me when I was carefree. Living is really too heavy and too luxurious for me... These sentences really touched me. They are really touching. I look forward to the author filling in the gaps later. It is a very good book.

After the appraisal is completed, it's a big shot. Let's take a closer look at it. Come on~

Vote and read, come on, come on⊙ω⊙